Chapter 8/ Part 2
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I just have one thing to say: Reverse. -
Then a long dark tunnel appearsand they disappear down it. Yusuke runs after them and is suddenly blown back by the emense pressure. Then, the tunnel is gone.
Keiko: Yusuke!!!
Naserui: He can't do anything to help you now.
Keiko: Leave me alone.
Naserui: What fun would that be. I have to let you know there is no hope for you.
Keiko: They'll find a way to where ever we're going.
Hasakie: I'm counting on it.
Keiko: What?
Suddenly they hit hard on the stone floor of a castle.
Hasakie: Do you you think we accidently left Hiei's cloak there? We hope they figure out how to use it to get here. But based on your races' intelligence I'm going to say a fair amount of time will pass before they figure it out. Until then, you will all be safe from harm.
Keiko: Why do you want them to come here if you already have me?
Naserui: The brilliance of it is that you see there is an old legend that fortells of five heros who are joined by a stranger to help rescue the jewel carrier. We took all of your female friends because they need a female to travel through the warp. We also left only four heros when we made Hiei our slave. Since he posses the Black Dragon, we needed to use a type of tattoo as it were to manipulate the power of the Black Dragon. It is our families royal seal.
Keiko: So you lure them here for what?
Naserui: It is said that these six will decide the fate of all worlds. We intend to capture them as soon as they arrive and make them watch as you are all tortured to death.
Keiko: Does the story end that way?
Hasakie: It will if we have anything to say about it. You see, we are of royal blood here, third and fourth born of his Majesty. Our father's strength fades and our brother rules with the council of us and our brothers and sisters.
They throw them all into a cell that smells of rotting flesh and blood.
Hasakie: We'll see how brave you really are.
Keiko: You can't hurt me, I have a jewel shard within me.
Hasakie: No you don't. You have a jewel. There are four jewel carriers, three male, weaker, and one female with the most powerful will and jewel of them all.
Keiko: Do these jewels have names?
Naserui: The three lesser ones are all the same, Shadow Crystals. They are called that because without the fourth and final jewel they are little more than shadows.
Keiko: And what is the other one called.
Hasakie:Flame of the Soul. How lucky that your friends will be able to watch you suffer.
Naserui: Yeah, imagine your stupid friends trying to find out how to get here. It'll take them at least a week to figure out anything. And that idiot boy who was holding you, what was his name? Oh yeah Yusuke, I can see him weeping right now because he doesn't have you in his arms.
Keiko: You made two big mistakes.
Hasakie: And they would be?
Keiko: You didn't capture all the girls.
Hasakie: You lie.
Keiko: Maybe and maybe not.
Naserui: And the second.
Keiko: You've mad Yusuke very, very angry.
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Um, yeah. I think that the way bigger of the two mistakes is pissing off Yusuke. We all know how he gets when you do something stupid like kidnap Keiko, not to mention Genkai and all the other girls. Hmmm, Yusuke went nuts when Kuwabara was kidnapped, I wonder what he'll do to them after this situation. Get ready for some more action in chapter 9. I promise that alot will be cleared up or start to clear up at least. I know this chapter is nearly as long as part one but I kinda figure that you'ld be more interested in more of the fist fighting stuff, and beleive me when I say there is alot to come. I want to thank everyone who reviews my stories and to the expert fan fic writer who has reviewed my stories and given me a positive out-look on my stories. I would like to thank most of all my best friend xkitsunex who has motivated me to keep writing and I hope that she will do the same. You all need to check out her stories, they are hilarious. Keep being faithful fans. Till the next chapter.
I just have one thing to say: Reverse. -
Then a long dark tunnel appearsand they disappear down it. Yusuke runs after them and is suddenly blown back by the emense pressure. Then, the tunnel is gone.
Keiko: Yusuke!!!
Naserui: He can't do anything to help you now.
Keiko: Leave me alone.
Naserui: What fun would that be. I have to let you know there is no hope for you.
Keiko: They'll find a way to where ever we're going.
Hasakie: I'm counting on it.
Keiko: What?
Suddenly they hit hard on the stone floor of a castle.
Hasakie: Do you you think we accidently left Hiei's cloak there? We hope they figure out how to use it to get here. But based on your races' intelligence I'm going to say a fair amount of time will pass before they figure it out. Until then, you will all be safe from harm.
Keiko: Why do you want them to come here if you already have me?
Naserui: The brilliance of it is that you see there is an old legend that fortells of five heros who are joined by a stranger to help rescue the jewel carrier. We took all of your female friends because they need a female to travel through the warp. We also left only four heros when we made Hiei our slave. Since he posses the Black Dragon, we needed to use a type of tattoo as it were to manipulate the power of the Black Dragon. It is our families royal seal.
Keiko: So you lure them here for what?
Naserui: It is said that these six will decide the fate of all worlds. We intend to capture them as soon as they arrive and make them watch as you are all tortured to death.
Keiko: Does the story end that way?
Hasakie: It will if we have anything to say about it. You see, we are of royal blood here, third and fourth born of his Majesty. Our father's strength fades and our brother rules with the council of us and our brothers and sisters.
They throw them all into a cell that smells of rotting flesh and blood.
Hasakie: We'll see how brave you really are.
Keiko: You can't hurt me, I have a jewel shard within me.
Hasakie: No you don't. You have a jewel. There are four jewel carriers, three male, weaker, and one female with the most powerful will and jewel of them all.
Keiko: Do these jewels have names?
Naserui: The three lesser ones are all the same, Shadow Crystals. They are called that because without the fourth and final jewel they are little more than shadows.
Keiko: And what is the other one called.
Hasakie:Flame of the Soul. How lucky that your friends will be able to watch you suffer.
Naserui: Yeah, imagine your stupid friends trying to find out how to get here. It'll take them at least a week to figure out anything. And that idiot boy who was holding you, what was his name? Oh yeah Yusuke, I can see him weeping right now because he doesn't have you in his arms.
Keiko: You made two big mistakes.
Hasakie: And they would be?
Keiko: You didn't capture all the girls.
Hasakie: You lie.
Keiko: Maybe and maybe not.
Naserui: And the second.
Keiko: You've mad Yusuke very, very angry.
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Um, yeah. I think that the way bigger of the two mistakes is pissing off Yusuke. We all know how he gets when you do something stupid like kidnap Keiko, not to mention Genkai and all the other girls. Hmmm, Yusuke went nuts when Kuwabara was kidnapped, I wonder what he'll do to them after this situation. Get ready for some more action in chapter 9. I promise that alot will be cleared up or start to clear up at least. I know this chapter is nearly as long as part one but I kinda figure that you'ld be more interested in more of the fist fighting stuff, and beleive me when I say there is alot to come. I want to thank everyone who reviews my stories and to the expert fan fic writer who has reviewed my stories and given me a positive out-look on my stories. I would like to thank most of all my best friend xkitsunex who has motivated me to keep writing and I hope that she will do the same. You all need to check out her stories, they are hilarious. Keep being faithful fans. Till the next chapter.
