-Chapter 13-
Thanks to everyone who entered my contest, even if there weren't that many. I will be glad to annouce the winners in the ending of this chapter. So you can enjoy the story or you can cheat and look at the ending and see if you're a winner. Alright, more about this chapter, well you certainly didn't think that Yutsuki would have such a hurtful past. I guess that she really hates the royal faimly. But unfourtunately, you're going to have to wait until a few chapters from now to read about that.
This chapter is going to focus on the imprisoned girls. I bet you're all anxious to find out what happens to them. They are definately in for a shocker. I guess so are you. I hope that you find this chapter as a good onebut if not oh well, to each their own I suppose.
Well, here is chapter 13 and it's a doosy.
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Genkai: What the hell is taking them so long to get here? I mean I know that Yusuke is pretty thickheaded and Kuwabara doesn't exactly have the talents of a genius, and true that Koenma couldn't crack an egg much less a huge clue. But still, they have Kurama.
Aiyka: Don't put to much pressure on them, you heard those men, the sooner those boys come the sooner we are going to be tortured and used against them. Is there really any hope? I mean really?
Yukina: You mustn't doubt Kazuma and the others, they will come through for us.
Keiko: Isn't it strange?
Genkai: Don't turn into Kurama, we don't need two people being vauge all the time when they've figured something out.
Keiko: No, no, nothing that could help us escape, just, they say they took all of us right? Well that means that they didn't know about her.
???: Who?
Everyone stares at the dark figure by the door who begins to open the door. It's Naserui.
Genkai: What do you want?
Naserui: Well, I was bringing you supper until I overheard the Jewel Carrier talking. So why don't you just tell me and we can avoid a different nogotiation.
Botan: Which?
Naserui: Painful.
Keiko: I won't say anything.
Naserui: I don't think you get it. You won't last five seconds under this torture.
Keiko: Fine, I'll tell you.
All: Keiko!?!
Keiko: Be quiet please. There is another girl in the human world, we think, though, that she helped your cause. She didn't come to our aid when we needed her the most, so I can only assume that either she killed them or is pretending to be on their side.
Naserui: Is that so? We happen to have an allie in the human world? Interesting. Well you made the right decision to tell me. Thank you for that bit of info. We'll be able to move up our plans now.
As he begins to walk to the door Keiko can't help but to say...
Keiko: What kind of plans?
Naserui: Big ones.
He shuts and bolts the door behind him.
Genkai: Botan, are you still able to use your powers in this realm?
Botan: Of course I can.
Genkai: Get your oar.
Botan flicks her wrist but nothing happens. She does it repeatedly and after five minutes of agony, she managed to get her oar.
Genkai: I see, now Yukina, use your power.
Yukina begins to use her power and it works immediatly.
Genkai: I understand now.
Keiko: Excuse me Genkai, but a minute ago you just said not to be vauge.
Genkai: I thought it was obvious. Did you notice how Botan's powers took some time before she could use them? And yet Yukina's took no time at all? I'm thinking that this world has energy common to that in Demon World. That's why Yukina's powers were quicker than Botan's, Botan's energy comes from Spirit World and because she can barely create her oar, I have come to the conclusion that I am as powerless in this realm as a puppy is in the Human World. I can't even change back into my older self. I am to remain the entire time we are here in my young form. This is not good.
Keiko: I don't understand.
Genkai: Well, let me put it this way, either these cells are specially designed to block energy from the Human World and minimize it from Sprit World, if not, then that means everyone but Kurama is going to powerless in this Realm too.
Botan: Oh no, that's terrible. Yusuke is a pretty good fist fighter, but I doubt that he could punch his way to the castle.
Genkai: We need a plan. Yukina, try using power to freeze the bars and I'll see if I can break them down.
Keiko: What if I used the jewel to...
Genkai: NO. That jewel is the last thing we will even consider using.
Yukina begins to freeze the bars as they become colder and more fragil. Genkai smashes down the door with one kick.
Genkai: Excellent, now we better run before someone catches...
???: Down there, in Dungeon F.
Keiko: Dungeon F?
Genkai: There must be more than one dungeon obviously, now hurry if they catch us they'll seperate us. This way!!
As they race down a flight of steps, they can all feel there chest become heavy as they begin to sweat.
???: It's the Jewel Carriers' cell!!! Find them quick!!!
???: You, take a party of five to the Whining Forest, you three go up the main stairs, and you six, go down the Hall of Fate.
???: Boss, no one has ever survived, if they went that way they will die right before they reach the fresh air if they make past the prison traps.
???: You're right. So you go alone.
???: What?!?
???: You heard me, go our I'll slice off your head.
???: Alright I'm going.
Genkai: Keep a sharp eye out. There could be booby tra...
No sooner had Genkai said those words than it seemed as if the ground had been ripped from their feet. They all screamed in fright of what was to come.
???: Boss, they're down there. They must have fallen into the trap. They'll be eaten for sure.
???: Quick, alert his Highness.
???: Yes sir.
As they fall into black dispear, Aiyka and Keiko manage to scream something.
Aiyka(Few seconds before Keiko): KURAMA!!
Keiko: YUSUKE!!!
Kurama and Yusuke: WHAT???
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Oh don't you hate that it cuts off right at the good part? Well, I'll get the contest over and done with. The person who sensed that Kurama was uneasy was in fact, Shizuru!! Congrats to all who guessed correctly. Anyone who submits an answer after today, October 10, is unfortunately out of luck.
Well, what will the next chapter be about? Hmm... puzzling. But we do know that the girls are in a heap of trouble being fugitives and all and hey, now Yusuke and Kurama definately know that something is in the works. What will happen? The winners will have one week to enter their thoughts on where the story will go. Kurama's day sure is getting pretty hectic. Oh, I guess I'll mention something right now. Kurama has a burden that could be his downfall, many of you may know what it is already, but don't be so sure. The story is now unfolding with a big, thick plot.
Thanks to everyone who entered my contest, even if there weren't that many. I will be glad to annouce the winners in the ending of this chapter. So you can enjoy the story or you can cheat and look at the ending and see if you're a winner. Alright, more about this chapter, well you certainly didn't think that Yutsuki would have such a hurtful past. I guess that she really hates the royal faimly. But unfourtunately, you're going to have to wait until a few chapters from now to read about that.
This chapter is going to focus on the imprisoned girls. I bet you're all anxious to find out what happens to them. They are definately in for a shocker. I guess so are you. I hope that you find this chapter as a good onebut if not oh well, to each their own I suppose.
Well, here is chapter 13 and it's a doosy.
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Genkai: What the hell is taking them so long to get here? I mean I know that Yusuke is pretty thickheaded and Kuwabara doesn't exactly have the talents of a genius, and true that Koenma couldn't crack an egg much less a huge clue. But still, they have Kurama.
Aiyka: Don't put to much pressure on them, you heard those men, the sooner those boys come the sooner we are going to be tortured and used against them. Is there really any hope? I mean really?
Yukina: You mustn't doubt Kazuma and the others, they will come through for us.
Keiko: Isn't it strange?
Genkai: Don't turn into Kurama, we don't need two people being vauge all the time when they've figured something out.
Keiko: No, no, nothing that could help us escape, just, they say they took all of us right? Well that means that they didn't know about her.
???: Who?
Everyone stares at the dark figure by the door who begins to open the door. It's Naserui.
Genkai: What do you want?
Naserui: Well, I was bringing you supper until I overheard the Jewel Carrier talking. So why don't you just tell me and we can avoid a different nogotiation.
Botan: Which?
Naserui: Painful.
Keiko: I won't say anything.
Naserui: I don't think you get it. You won't last five seconds under this torture.
Keiko: Fine, I'll tell you.
All: Keiko!?!
Keiko: Be quiet please. There is another girl in the human world, we think, though, that she helped your cause. She didn't come to our aid when we needed her the most, so I can only assume that either she killed them or is pretending to be on their side.
Naserui: Is that so? We happen to have an allie in the human world? Interesting. Well you made the right decision to tell me. Thank you for that bit of info. We'll be able to move up our plans now.
As he begins to walk to the door Keiko can't help but to say...
Keiko: What kind of plans?
Naserui: Big ones.
He shuts and bolts the door behind him.
Genkai: Botan, are you still able to use your powers in this realm?
Botan: Of course I can.
Genkai: Get your oar.
Botan flicks her wrist but nothing happens. She does it repeatedly and after five minutes of agony, she managed to get her oar.
Genkai: I see, now Yukina, use your power.
Yukina begins to use her power and it works immediatly.
Genkai: I understand now.
Keiko: Excuse me Genkai, but a minute ago you just said not to be vauge.
Genkai: I thought it was obvious. Did you notice how Botan's powers took some time before she could use them? And yet Yukina's took no time at all? I'm thinking that this world has energy common to that in Demon World. That's why Yukina's powers were quicker than Botan's, Botan's energy comes from Spirit World and because she can barely create her oar, I have come to the conclusion that I am as powerless in this realm as a puppy is in the Human World. I can't even change back into my older self. I am to remain the entire time we are here in my young form. This is not good.
Keiko: I don't understand.
Genkai: Well, let me put it this way, either these cells are specially designed to block energy from the Human World and minimize it from Sprit World, if not, then that means everyone but Kurama is going to powerless in this Realm too.
Botan: Oh no, that's terrible. Yusuke is a pretty good fist fighter, but I doubt that he could punch his way to the castle.
Genkai: We need a plan. Yukina, try using power to freeze the bars and I'll see if I can break them down.
Keiko: What if I used the jewel to...
Genkai: NO. That jewel is the last thing we will even consider using.
Yukina begins to freeze the bars as they become colder and more fragil. Genkai smashes down the door with one kick.
Genkai: Excellent, now we better run before someone catches...
???: Down there, in Dungeon F.
Keiko: Dungeon F?
Genkai: There must be more than one dungeon obviously, now hurry if they catch us they'll seperate us. This way!!
As they race down a flight of steps, they can all feel there chest become heavy as they begin to sweat.
???: It's the Jewel Carriers' cell!!! Find them quick!!!
???: You, take a party of five to the Whining Forest, you three go up the main stairs, and you six, go down the Hall of Fate.
???: Boss, no one has ever survived, if they went that way they will die right before they reach the fresh air if they make past the prison traps.
???: You're right. So you go alone.
???: What?!?
???: You heard me, go our I'll slice off your head.
???: Alright I'm going.
Genkai: Keep a sharp eye out. There could be booby tra...
No sooner had Genkai said those words than it seemed as if the ground had been ripped from their feet. They all screamed in fright of what was to come.
???: Boss, they're down there. They must have fallen into the trap. They'll be eaten for sure.
???: Quick, alert his Highness.
???: Yes sir.
As they fall into black dispear, Aiyka and Keiko manage to scream something.
Aiyka(Few seconds before Keiko): KURAMA!!
Keiko: YUSUKE!!!
Kurama and Yusuke: WHAT???
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Oh don't you hate that it cuts off right at the good part? Well, I'll get the contest over and done with. The person who sensed that Kurama was uneasy was in fact, Shizuru!! Congrats to all who guessed correctly. Anyone who submits an answer after today, October 10, is unfortunately out of luck.
Well, what will the next chapter be about? Hmm... puzzling. But we do know that the girls are in a heap of trouble being fugitives and all and hey, now Yusuke and Kurama definately know that something is in the works. What will happen? The winners will have one week to enter their thoughts on where the story will go. Kurama's day sure is getting pretty hectic. Oh, I guess I'll mention something right now. Kurama has a burden that could be his downfall, many of you may know what it is already, but don't be so sure. The story is now unfolding with a big, thick plot.