I don't know where this story is taking me but I have to admit, I don't like the case much, or rather some of the characters, especially after this chapter.
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Interrogation room B
NV-" You and Loren were close, right?"
"None of your damned business but, yea, we were close"
NV-"So you would notice if she was acting odd"
The kid shrugged
"Yea, why?"
There was a pause as Vera and Jeffries looked at each other, considering what to say
"You think she did it? - No way!"
WJ-"She had motive"
NV-"And opportunity"
"Loren hated them but she wouldn't kill them! Besides- we had a different plan"
WJ-"Oh?"
FLASHBACK
Loren and James are curled up on her bed, James has a split lip and new bruises on his face, Loren is cleaning him up
L-"I can't stand this- we aren't his punch-bags we shouldn't be treated like we are"
J-"We'll call the police, tell them what he does"
L-"You wanna go into care? Be separated?"
J-"Well what then?"
L-"How much money do you have?"
J-" About $40, why?"
L-"I have about $50, that makes… $90 all together, that should get us out of Philly"
J-"Run away?"
L-"Got any better ideas?"
James shakes his head
PRESENT DAY
NV-" You were planning on running away"
The kid nodded
"But then THEY found out"
WJ-"Your parents?"
The kid nodded again
NV-"That must have pissed them off"
The kid nodded and a tear ran down his check
FLASHBACK
Katie Hunter is glaring at Loren and James and trying to calm Krissy while George yells at them
GH-"…YOU UNGRATEFUL BRATS WANNA RUN AWAY! AFTER ALL WE'VE DONE FOR YOU!…"
L-"Yea, we really appreciate all you've done for us, the punching the hitting the rap…"
George hits her, hard, she falls to the ground and he starts kicking her, James tries to stop him and George hits him as well
PRESENT DAY
"He half killed us"
WJ-"Do you know what Loren was about to say before he hit her?"
The kid nodded slowly and hate filled his eyes
"Loren would climb into bed, late at night, crying. She never cried when he beat her up- she was to strong"
The detectives looked at him
"He raped her"