Homecoming Court
By Red Eclipse
EmailI have very bad news for the people who liked the story a lot. I shall be taking it down shortly. There are so many plot holes and its plot was really weak anyway. Things had formed too late in the story for them to make any sense. I was seriously dreading writing the chapters that would follow homecoming night. I was trying to write the final part of chapter fourteen tonight and I figured out there was no way to salvage it.
BUT FEAR NOT! KEEP READING PLEASE:
It shall be back very soon. I am very pumped to rewrite and I'll work very hard to bring it out. I shall try very hard to bring it out by October. If you want an email to notify you when it is complete. Send me an email with Fanfic alert in the subject box and I'll send you an email when it's reposted. I'm working on it right this moment and I am undistracted by anything right now.
I am sooooooooooo sorry to those that reviewed and said they couldn't wait for the next chapters and to anyone who is reading this. Trust me this is for the best. I've tried to write the 5th part five times already and I tried to write the last chapter at least 10 times before I finally got it posted. Even then I wasn't happy with were it was pulling the story. The second version shall be a lot better and will make much more sense I swear. I was having a hard time motivating myself to work on it at all, hence the long time between updates. And even when I was updating I was just doing it so that I would be done with this story and that's just not right.
Here are some tentative previews below and remember if you want to be notified email me. You don't have to review but please just send me your email and I shall notify you the exact day I posted back up on fan fiction dot net. I'm excited to do this so I'm going to get to work on this post hast, so bye bye. I love you if you chose to stick with the story. If you send me your email I might even send you a preview. So yeah, bye love you all.
From chapter one Kagome's POV
My head was pounding as I stumbled out of my math class. The class had been excruciating to sit through. Mr. Yu's voice had been painfully monotone as he droned on about triangles. Ugh. I tried to find my way outside, while stumbling through the catacomb that my mind was making the hallway I was in. Really it was just a straight shoot, tell my head that simple little fact. The people swarming out of the many classrooms didn't help matters either. My head was swimming and my head was trying to tell my feet to move with the crowd. I sighed and moved to the wall. I leaned my back against it and waited for it to clear out.
All was going well until the door next to me swung open and struck my head. I went down. And the people? Oh the people. The generous, kind people stepped over my collapsed form. I sighed and stayed where I was. My head was swimming anyway, why fight it? I closed my eyes momentarily until I heard my brother's voice penetrate my attempts to calm my poor head. I pried an eye open to see Miroku standing there with a stupid grin on his face. His friend was next to him. There was no doubt in my mind that they were both probably stoned off their asses. Miroku extended a hand out to me. I glared at it and was surprised to see his face look a little forlorn for a moment. His dopey grin returned moments later as I climbed to my feet. He put his arm around me in a brotherly fashion and guided me out of the hall.
"I saw what time you got in last night little sis." He smirked. Little sis? Last time I checked this was my twin brother. I rolled my eyes and separated myself from his arm when we reached the end of the hall.
I kept walking until I caught sight of Sango out in the middle of the quad under a scrawny tree leaning against my backpack. I walked over to her and sat down. She was just about asleep. Kiddies this is why you do not go clubbing on a Sunday and if you do make sure there are no tests coming up on Monday. We were both trashed and worst of all there was a screaming mass of screaming females gathered around the makeshift stage at the other end of the quad. It made my head al the worse. Sango groaned groggily in acknowledgement of my presence. I mumbled a few nonsensical made up words that chalked up to being random noises really. You can't really call them words.
"What are the screaming masses screaming about?" I yawned as I leaned against my backpack Sango yawned loudly.
"Homecoming queen nominations." She muttered.
Another chapter Inuyasha's POV
I watched her as she gathered up her things grinning with another brown haired girl. I knew every single thing about this girl. She laughed at something the other girl said and tucked strands of her raven black hair behind her ear. Miroku's sister. She's been screwed over greatly and she didn't deserve to have this happen to her again. This wasn't fait. It was just wrong to do this to her again. I got up and left the classroom. I shook my head as I passed the teacher who taught English. Everyday she was asleep at her desk. She'd write the assignments for the day on the board. The only time she was awake was for tests and if the principal walked in the room. Somehow she always managed to jerk awake the few times he did walk in. It made me suspect she wasn't really asleep at that desk of hers. She was simply fake it so she wouldn't have to face us. Had years of teaching taken that much out of her? Pathetic.
I found Miroku leaning against my car expecting a ride. I knew he had totaled the car that he had shared with his sister. I unlocked my door and then reached over to unlock the passenger door. He got in and sighed. He had a thin layer of sweat coating his face and his breathing was shallow. This was to be expected. This was the first day he was off Heroin. So far he was doing good. He'd made me promise I wouldn't make him get into a methadone clinic unless he took it again. He wanted to be strong. He wanted to be stronger than a drug. I admired him for coming today.
"How you doing?" I asked concerned over his shallow breath. He shook his head and then rested against the seat closing his eyes.
"So far so good. I'm just really tired right now." He said. I nodded and started the car. Kagome and her friends walked past the car, all three smiling. I shook my head and started off for the Higurashi house.
That's all for right now. I'm getting tired. It's 4:20 in the morning. I'm now officially an insomniac. Yesterday I passes out from exhaustion around 7 AM and my mom woke me up at 9 to take me to the Cerritos mall to go jean shopping. What a joy. Two hours of sleep. I went to bed and I tried to got to bed but after two hours of tossing uncomfortably I finally got up and wandered around finally listening to a bunch of CDs till I passed out. Life is unfair.
I will see you very soon.
Third time: Send me an email with your email and I will notify once reposted, promise. Actual chapters shall be better than the above. That was just a haphazard preview. Kagome's POV was probably closer to what I'll use over Inuyasha's POV above but we'll see. Very soon. By October. If I lag email me and bitch at me. I need people yelling at me to get my ass moving. I'm kinda lazy. The worst thing is that I'm home alone with absolutely nothing to do since I'm currently not talking to Jessie or Misti, the latter who simply uses me for Ciggs, and I can't get myself to work on anything at all. This should be better in September when I'm looking for anything to do over my geometry, which I failed last year and I have to take it again this year. Sigh. Toodles. Lots of love.
SOON SOON I SWEAR!
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