Full Speed And Don't Lose The Girl
Alrighty folks. Here's the update! It's kinda long, atleast I think it is, and I hope you don't mind. Sorry it took a few days for me to upload. Everything's been busy since I got home. I'll try to write as much as possible before school starts on the 22nd. Although I'm kinda stuck, which is why this chapter ends so... weird. > Sorry, I couldn't think of anything else to do. It will continue in the next chapter though. Ok, so onto my reviews and my flame!
Aviarianna O Lorien: Aww thank you! I really appreciate it! A cookie for you! hands a chocolate chip cookie
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Phantom Hobbit: Hehe thank you very much. I must obey the Oompa Loompas, so here you go! Cookie for you of course! hands cookie
Maya Clearwater: Another RHPS lover? Yay! Cookie for you too! hands cookie
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Turtle Sister: Yes, I know I'm really weird. XD looks aroudn shifty eyed You just might be in the story.. a cameo chapter is in the works... :D sad nod Yup.. Meghan touched the chocolate. XD hands cookie
Vampirehelsing: You are correct! Gdo for Astrid but not for Meghan. XD Aww Italy? Sounds like fun you lucky person.. you. XD hands cookie
sangowings: Thank you! I don't think it was genious but I rather like the idea, and must say I have attempted it many, many times. Slipping on the floor in the theater isn't fun. XD cookie to you too
inlovewithpsychos: Hey! Thank you so much for reviewing and reading it! I liek your story too! Yeah I saw a bunch where other people got the last golden ticket, and this idea came, and worked! cookie for yous
Now for a reply to my little flamer!
Kill Mary Sue: I agree with you when you say "What crap." And I do believe I "Should give it up." But knowing you hate it so much, I think I'll just continue.!
"Full speed and don't lose the girl!" bellowed Willy's voice as he ran to the side of the boat to see Meghan trying her best to keep on the surface. "My chocolate…" Willy said softly as worry crept onto his face, and into his eyes. Although Astrid stared at him, and couldn't figure out if it was for the chocolate, or it if was for Meghan.
As the boat hit a very large wave, Astrid hit the deck, her fingers gripping onto something under the bench. "Aha!" she cried to her self as she pulled down a rather large peppermint with the middle amiss. As he heard her cry, narrow eyes turned to see what Astrid had found. "Oh yes! My peppermint life-saver!" he said in a high-pitched tone. Astrid handed the extra strong licorice rope to Willy, along with the large mint before standing next to him.
"Meghan! Grab the mint!" Astrid yelled as she saw her friend surface. Willy quickly threw the large mint out to the struggling girl as the Oopma Loopmas paddled quickly.
Meghan grabbed at it and missed. But upon seeing she was about to be sucked into a whirl pool, the chocolate covered figure swam as hard as she could forwards and latched on.
Willy and Astrid quickly pulled the matching red licorice rope in towards them, throwing the excess onto the floor behind them. Chocolate filled Vans caused Meghan's attempts to kick in order to speed up the process failed, only causing her to disappear below the surface momentarily before popping back up.
As soon as Meghan was only a foot away, Astrid reached forwards and grabbed her chocolate covered hands while Willy backed up. "Willy! Help me please!" she begged while trying to pull Meghan in. "Yeah, about that… No." Wily replied firmly. "Damnit, if you don't help me, you will be responsible for a death in this factory!" Astrid yelled. "D..death?" he asked him self softly before sighing and stepping forwards. The physically tired girl was quickly slipping away despite Astrid's death grip. Although dear readers, Willy seemed to see so, and decided that then would be the best time to help out. Together both Astrid and Willy hauled the girl out of the chocolate river, only to have her land on top of them, covering them with the melted chocolate.
"Thank you.." she said with a nervous grin, before rolling her eyes at her now chocolaty companions. Poor Willy sighed as he climbed back up to his post and yelled to the Oopma Loopmas "To the Cleaning Room." He then turned his vicious gaze on Meghan. "Thanks to you and your stupidity, my WHOLE river is ruined. ALL of this chocolate has to be drained and gotten rid of, then replaced. All thanks to a certain Meghan Colburn." Anger flashed in the violet-blue eyes as he watched Meghan's chin tremble slightly.
Hey, who would want to be yelled at by their idol/favorite character?
Meghan bit her lip as she hung her head and apologized, a few tears trailing down her chocolate covered cheeks.
Although Willy didn't notice as he said "You better be sorry. Now I've got three little kids, and a fam…" he stopped mid-sentence as his lovely face contorted. "Fam.. amm.. am.." again the same look appeared. "Family?" Astrid whispered. "Yeah… that.." Willy said with a gulp.
"Come now, we mustn't dilly, or dally." Willy said in a determined, yet slightly high-pitched voice as the boat stopped at a room reading 'The Cleaning Room.'
Meghan and Astrid quickly scrambled off the large gummy boat and followed Willy in through the large door. They peered around the room and saw Oopma Loopmas showering in what seemed to be grape soda.
"Doesn't that make them sticky?" Astrid questioned, voicing the question that appeared in Meghan's eyes.. Astrid knew exactly what was going on with Meghan and didn't reveal the fact that she did know, when Willy peered at them both.
It took quite a bit to upset Meghan in such a way, causing her to remain silent, as a dead look overtook the once sparkling chocolate orbs. Yes, she was incredibly stubborn.
"No. They're skin doesn't allow them to get sticky. It gets them squeaky clean." Willy replied after a long pause. "Oh." Was all that Astrid said as she shrugged to Meghan, who made no movement back.
"This way little girls." Willy said with a small grin as he glanced at Meghan. He had been for some sort of enraged reaction from her, and was slightly disappointed when none was found.
The smile quickly faded from his face as he turned to the large building behind him that looked like a carwash.
"This is my brilliant Wonka Wash! Soon to replaced all showers and bathtubs in every home!" Wonka said proudly as his right arm swept back to reveal the rectangular structure behind him. "Whoa. This is bigger than our apartment!" Astrid exclaimed quietly. She looked to Meghan and saw the look of agreement pass over her face quickly before it died away.
"How are you going to fit this in a normal sized house?" Astrid questioned as she watched Willy begin to drop his cane, hat, gloves, jacket, and 'W' pin into the marked collective bins.
"I'll shrink it down of course…" he said in a very uncertain tone. "Ok fine. I don't know yet but I'm working on it." Willy added before stepping forwards. Meghan hung back and waited for Astrid to go in front of her, although she was stopped. "Ah, ah, ah!" Willy exclaimed as he jerked his head in the direction on Astrid's head. "Glasses off." He added before looking to the bin marked "Glasses."
Astrid sighed before gently placing them in and walking in behind Willy, but before Meghan, into the large wash.
Clamps were quickly wrapped around Willy's shiny, perfect black shoes, Astrid's faded black low-top All Star Converses with the checkered toes, and of course Meghan's black and white Vans. Astrid opened her mouth to say something, but was quickly stopped as her mouth was filled up with cherry soda. "Ew, we're going to be all sticky!" she exclaimed after they had been thoroughly drenched.
"Heh heh, oops. Sorry! Turn on the normal wash!" Willy apologized nervously before turning to the Oopma Loopmas behind a glass window. "Please turn on the normal people wash, kay?" he asked again while watching the Oopma Loompa cross his arms and bow quickly before pushing a button. Warm water poured down on the three before they were rushed forwards and robotic hands quickly scrubbed through Willy's chocolate shoulder length locks, Astrid's mid-back length, light brown with the black under-sided locks, and Meghan's chocolate brown, blonde streaked tresses.
More water gushed down on them, Willy's black pants, shoes, and vest soaking wet. Along with Astrid and Meghan's t-shirts, jeans, and shoes were dripping water, and with of course their hair.
But there wasn't a drop of chocolate on any of them anywhere, and all was going well. The Wonka Wash worked.
"Almost done." came Willy's voice as he was moved forwards between two large hair driers. Astrid looked at Meghan, a worried look on both of their faces, the one on Meghan's disappearing immediately. "Won't this shrink our clothes?" Astrid asked. "It shouldn't…" was Willy's reply as they moved forwards.
"Oh great." Astrid muttered as she was sent forwards with Meghan behind her. Both came out, hair afro-like, jeans tighter and now mid-calf length, and with their shirts reaching their belly buttons, not to mention much, much tighter.
Meghan blinked as se looked down at the silver barbell in her naval that was now exposed and at her much shorter clothes. The girl looked like she was going to explode but was cut off by Willy. "Must be little girl's clothing, because it has happened before.."
Finally Meghan snapped. She pulled herself off the track, and lunged at Willy. "I am not a little girl damnit!" she screamed as she tackled him to the floor. Astrid sighed before mumbling "Here we go again." While walking over and prying her furious friend off of the chocolatier.
A slightly dazed, wide-eyed Willy looked up to see the kicking and screaming girl restrained by her friend. Small scratches now adorned his pale cheeks, and a small trickle of blood came from the right corner of his mouth.
"I am SO sorry!" Astrid exclaimed as she peered over Meghan's shoulder at Willy. He put his fingers to the corner of his mouth and blinked a few times before...
Yeah, sorry. That's where I got stuck and yeah. But I figured I should update.. and yeah.. >O Feel free to throw insults, sticks, rocks and anything else you want at me!