THANKYOU EVERYONE WHO REVIEWED FOR CHAPTER 5! ::HUGS!::
Animeprincess1452: Awwwws! Thank you! ::hugs:: Trust me, Vegeta's only going to get worse. Hope you enjoy this chapter!
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Guardian of the Forsaken: I just hope it rains soon... ::looks out the window:: I see a few clouds! But they aren't exactly... rain clouds... --; Thanks for the complement for the story! And I hope you enjoy this chapter! -!
Mystic Warrior: Awwws! Thanks!
Kathryn: Thanks for the complement!
Saiyan Queen: Trust me, Vegeta's just going to be rubbing the bonding thing in Gohan and Videl's face later on! Thanks for the complement about to story too!
Shloki: Awww! Thankyou! ::hugs!::
J.Snoop: That's a good suggestion! I will be using it in later chapters! Thanks!
Marshmellow13Dragon: oO; 5 people? Lol! Awws! ::hugs them all:: You're so sweet! And thanks for the suggestion! I think Goku might be making an early appearance. ::smirks:: Hope you enjoy this chapter!
Limelie: Hunting... that could work... but then they would get hit by hail... :: places a finger on her chin:: Am I that evil? ::cackles:: Of course! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! ::coughs:: ¬¬; You didn't see that... -; Hope you like the next chapter!
SilverRainbow223: Awws! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy the fic so far!
PunkOnna: Starve... eh? I guess this chapter will explain the issue in detail... :) Hope you like this chapter!
TK Lee: Piccolo? ::cackles:: That is PERFECT! ::hugs!::
Caliko: I'm so glad you like this chapter! I hope this update was fast enough too! oO;
Mrvampire: Thank you so much for the complement! I know! Isn't Gohan torture wonderful! It's like a breath of fresh air! Well... something... like... that... I think... -;
DBZ lover1: oo... I hop you enjoy this chapter! I hope the update is fast enough... -;
And thanks to everyone who gave a suggestion! ::hugs:: You all are so sweet!!!!
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Chapter 6 – No Food
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"Gooooooohhhhhhhaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!" whined Goten sitting on Videl's lap yet again. "I'm hungry!" it was at that time, Goten's stomach began to rumble a loud as Goku's did whenever he was hungry.
The teens looked up to the roof thinking the stomach rumble was very loud thunder. But I must say that it is a shame at what very little knowledge these teens have about saiyans... The 'miraculous' things the teens saw earlier were explained in, yet again, lies. Most of them were explained as Bulma's new experiments with light. And to Gohan's surprise Sharpener and Erasa believed every word he spoke! Videl wasn't so convinced.
After all the lies were told, Gohan turned to the saiyan prince, who remained quiet and shook his head at the teen. He even heard Vegeta whisper something like, "Kid... you're digging yourself into deeper shit. And I'll laugh my ass off when I see the truth forced out of you."
Gohan shook his head and looked up into the sky. 'You are so cruel sometimes Dende! You know that?!'
"Gohan." The teen looked over to Videl. She was obviously pissed off. "For the tenth time, WHO THE HELL IS DENDE?!" A sweatdrop could be seen from the side of the teen's head.
Goten looked in between the two teens, and he began to laugh. But to hide it, he covered his mouth with his small palms. The laugher was still heard by the teen that carried him.
"What's so funny Goten?" she asked him raising an eyebrow. 'Great, now Gohan's brother is mocking me...' she mentally thought slapping her forehead.
Goten gave a big toothy grin as he looked to his brother's friend. "It looks like both you and my brother are reading each other's minds! Are you bonding with him?" he asked innocently.
For Videl, this was becoming more confusing by the moment. She looked over to the two blondes, who just seemed to watch this who issue as if it was a live soap opera. 'Soap opera... Yeah right...' She paused, and winced, 'It IS like a soap opera! A very weird one at that... Oh man... I hope I wake up soon from this horrible dream...' she thought.
And to Gohan, it started to make sense. He WAS bonding with Videl! He slapped his forehead yet again. This was so confusing, and too complicated. He looked up into the sky, 'I wish dad was here...'
Gohan was brought back to reality when he felt his pants being tugged on. Gohan looked down and noticed Trunks looking up at him. The young hybrid prince pointed up to Gohan stating, "You know... you're losing brain cells by smacking your head that hard." Trunks looked up to the teen tilting his head to the side, "Did you accidentally crack your skull? It sounded like some kind of bones were crushed, like the time dad almost killed Yamcha. Oh that was a sight to see!" exclaimed Trunks balling his fists into the air almost as if he was cheering on his dad.
Trunks turned back to his dad, "Could we pick on Yamcha again? I know the perfect prank!"
Vegeta gave a smirk. "I think we could make time for that, but not now. We're trying to destroy another person's life right now." The prince's gaze turned to Gohan, and the smirk widened, "We haven't completely succeeded... yet."
"GOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNN!" exclaimed Goten becoming mad. He crossed his arms and glared at his brother, let's not forget stopping his foot. And yes, when saiyans get mad and hasty, there is damage done. Goten's foot went thru the floor, making a foot sized hole and the house began to shake.
"EARTH QUAKE!" exclaimed Erasa as she dived to the floor along with Sharpener and Videl.
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Piccolo's eyes shot open as he felt some strange new force on the planet. "Dende," stated the warrior Namek. The younger Namek looked up to Piccolo with crossed arms.
"Could you make it fast? I want to see the damage done! I want to see Gohan suffer!" exclaimed the young kami. Piccolo gave a small glare to Dende, and the young Namek cowered.
"As I was saying... The storm that has covered the land completely seems to have some strange evil force to it," stated Piccolo in his serious voice.
"Evil? But we haven't seen any evil since Cell," said the young kami with wide eyes. Piccolo shook his head.
"This is most defiantly a new evil that I sense. And it's stronger than any enemy that we have fought before, and I don't think the Z warriors can defeat it... We might have to revive Goku," exclaimed Piccolo.
Dende blinked, "But... Goku asked for us to not revive him! Should we go against his wishes because of a bad vibe you have?" Piccolo glared down to Dende.
"He will need to be revived! This new enemy will be using the earth's resources to destroy everything! Goku MUST be brought back!" explained the older Namek. "And I need to go down and warn Gohan! We need to prepare for this evil! Make sure you contact the Namek's for the dragonballs! We're going to be needing them!"
With that, Piccolo dove off of the lookout's edge and began to fly into the darkened clouds.
Dende crossed his arms as he watched Piccolo fly off. "I hope he knows the clouds have lightning and hail in them!" Not far in the distance, the sound of lighting crashing in the clouds could be heard as well as bright flashes were seen. Dende winced.
"I think I should have warned Piccolo earlier..." He further winced when he heard Piccolo's string of curses being exclaimed in the sky, let's not forget the small stream of smoke being left behind the older Namek as he flew off. "Ouch."
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"I'm HUNGRY!" exclaimed the young child rubbing his rumbling tummy. "Could you make me something Gohan?!" asked the child falling over. Gohan had a sweatdrop fall from the side of his head as he looked to his young brother. 'He's most defiantly the child of Goku...' He shook his head, and walked into the kitchen.
Videl picked up Goten, who was rolling around on the ground. From what it looked like, something may have been eating him from the inside out! "Goten?" she asked him blinking.
"Soooooooooooooooo, hunnnnnnnngrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyy."
"But... you just ask your brother to make you something five minutes ago..." stated Videl trying to get the kid's mind off of food. She heard the older male in the room snort as he watched Videl.
"He has the right to be like that. These children have very high metabolisms, and very high energy which could be used for TRAINING." He glared down at the two boys. Goten seemed to forget his 'hunger pains' and he tried to become invisible. Trunks tried to hide too from his dad's glare, but it didn't seem to help that much...
"Like Gohan?" asked Videl as she began to run her hand thru Goten's spiky hair. "I just found out from this little tyke," she pointed to Gohan's younger brother, "That he was trained to fight in martial arts when he was four. I think that's a bit too young for a child to learn how to fight... although I've never seen him fight before... I guess it's given us the impression that he isn't strong."
The humans heard Vegeta burst out laughing. Videl furrowed her eyebrow. "You think Kakarot's spawn is WEAK?! Oh, that's a classic!" He began to laugh even harder. All humans in the room watched Vegeta for a moment before he calmed down again, "Tell me. How strong do you think I am?" asked the prince in a very amused tone.
Videl placed a finger on her chin and thought, "Well, I tried to pull away from you, and I couldn't pull away. I don't think you even noticed... so I must say you are very strong..."
Vegeta crossed his arms in a smirk as he looked to the two other humans. Sharpener had seemed to fall asleep thru all this commotion, so Erasa added onto Videl's thought.
"You seem to be very strong because we can see your muscles!" exclaimed Erasa with a smile. Vegeta gave a smirk and closed his eyes; a little ego boost was all that the prince was getting. "But I must say... no one on the school campus thinks Gohan is strong since he always wears lose clothing... and he fails gym class!"
"So if Gohan DOES, by some chance, have muscles as we had seen in an old picture, he must be hiding them pretty good," added in Videl.
Vegeta looks up to Videl and raises an eyebrow, "Gohan FAILS gym?"
She nodded, "Yeah. It's like he's afraid to do any of the activities done in class."
"Is that so?" asked Vegeta. Both girls nodded. Vegeta thought for a moment before he got up, and looked around the room. It seemed that Chichi didn't have anything breakable in this room, or anything that was expensive. He turned back to Videl, "Do you have anything very heavy?"
Videl looked up to the prince raising an eyebrow as she pulled out a small capsule case from her pocket. She looked at eight different capsules that were carried in it. She pulled one out, and tossed it to the ground.
When the smoke cleared, a few large punching bags, which were neatly stacked up, appeared. Vegeta gave a smirk. "Which one can't you carry?" he asked her.
"The black one," she stated. Vegeta nodded as he picked it up with no effort what so ever.
"You wouldn't mind if this got destroyed... would you?" asked Vegeta before he put his plan into action. Why was Vegeta acting so nice to these females? Well, for one, they weren't annoying. Two, he was trying to ruin Gohan's life so the possibilities for getting a good spar could be at hand. And three. Gohan's friends deserved to know the truth. With the horrible lies that Gohan was telling them, the truth needed to come out, and in the most painful way possible.
Videl blinked for a moment before she shook her head. "I don't mind. I could ask my dad for another one, I guess... Why do you ask?" questioned Videl.
Vegeta gave a smirk, "You'll see." The prince put his hand to the punching bag and made a rather large ki ball in the bag. He looked to the doorway that led to the kitchen, and smirked. "GOHAN! GET YOUR ASS OUT HERE! WE'VE BEEN ATTACKED!"
With in no time, Gohan 'appeared' in the room very panicked. "Wha? What's going on?!" That was when Gohan noticed the punching bag zooming towards him. Balling his fists, Gohan rammed his fist with the bag causing it to break on impact. Now... let's not forget about that ki ball that Vegeta put in the bag. The way Vegeta put it in the bag made it resemble as a bomb. Not a bomb that would completely destroy the house; he didn't want his wife to be chewing him out later on. This was a bomb that destroyed anything within a two to three foot radius.
So the bomb exploded. Some of the sand in the bag disengaged from the energy bomb, and the rest spread around the room making a HUGE mess. Vegeta had to put up his energy shield so the human's wouldn't be harmed by it.
Videl and Erasa gasped as the smoke cleared. Gohan had destroyed the bag with one hit! And not only that! The bomb in the bag had burned Gohan's loose shirt off revealing his muscular chest and arms. They were a bit burned, but it wasn't anything a saiyan couldn't handle.
Videl was speechless. "My kami... G-Gohan?"
Gohan's lip twitched as he glared at a smirking prince. "What do you think girls?" asked the prince as he turned his head looking at both of their reactions.
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I can't believe that I put that in the fic... Now... I was quite surprised that I got about 15 reviews just for the last chapter! And I was jumping with joy when I checked my e-mail this morning. I thank you ALL for even taking the time to read this fic. Now... I must say I am still getting use to writing fics that are over five pages long...so I'm making the review rate go up. Of course, 5 reviews will guarantee the next chapter will come out soon, maybe a few days... But I'm now making it 20 reviews will make it come out the next day. I know! Before you start throwing tomatoes at me, I must make it known that it's hard to write this much in this short time! So I guess I've 'upped' the 'price' for the next chapter to be sent out the next day. Oh yeah... I should also warn, I might not be in to write any fics next week because I'll be out of town. ::dun dun DUNNNNNNN:: Anyways... till next time!
-Takuma
Animeprincess1452: Awwwws! Thank you! ::hugs:: Trust me, Vegeta's only going to get worse. Hope you enjoy this chapter!
Drizzt- THANKYOU! ::clings:: you are an ANGEL! -! I greatly appreciate the complement!
Guardian of the Forsaken: I just hope it rains soon... ::looks out the window:: I see a few clouds! But they aren't exactly... rain clouds... --; Thanks for the complement for the story! And I hope you enjoy this chapter! -!
Mystic Warrior: Awwws! Thanks!
Kathryn: Thanks for the complement!
Saiyan Queen: Trust me, Vegeta's just going to be rubbing the bonding thing in Gohan and Videl's face later on! Thanks for the complement about to story too!
Shloki: Awww! Thankyou! ::hugs!::
J.Snoop: That's a good suggestion! I will be using it in later chapters! Thanks!
Marshmellow13Dragon: oO; 5 people? Lol! Awws! ::hugs them all:: You're so sweet! And thanks for the suggestion! I think Goku might be making an early appearance. ::smirks:: Hope you enjoy this chapter!
Limelie: Hunting... that could work... but then they would get hit by hail... :: places a finger on her chin:: Am I that evil? ::cackles:: Of course! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! ::coughs:: ¬¬; You didn't see that... -; Hope you like the next chapter!
SilverRainbow223: Awws! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy the fic so far!
PunkOnna: Starve... eh? I guess this chapter will explain the issue in detail... :) Hope you like this chapter!
TK Lee: Piccolo? ::cackles:: That is PERFECT! ::hugs!::
Caliko: I'm so glad you like this chapter! I hope this update was fast enough too! oO;
Mrvampire: Thank you so much for the complement! I know! Isn't Gohan torture wonderful! It's like a breath of fresh air! Well... something... like... that... I think... -;
DBZ lover1: oo... I hop you enjoy this chapter! I hope the update is fast enough... -;
And thanks to everyone who gave a suggestion! ::hugs:: You all are so sweet!!!!
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Chapter 6 – No Food
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"Gooooooohhhhhhhaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!" whined Goten sitting on Videl's lap yet again. "I'm hungry!" it was at that time, Goten's stomach began to rumble a loud as Goku's did whenever he was hungry.
The teens looked up to the roof thinking the stomach rumble was very loud thunder. But I must say that it is a shame at what very little knowledge these teens have about saiyans... The 'miraculous' things the teens saw earlier were explained in, yet again, lies. Most of them were explained as Bulma's new experiments with light. And to Gohan's surprise Sharpener and Erasa believed every word he spoke! Videl wasn't so convinced.
After all the lies were told, Gohan turned to the saiyan prince, who remained quiet and shook his head at the teen. He even heard Vegeta whisper something like, "Kid... you're digging yourself into deeper shit. And I'll laugh my ass off when I see the truth forced out of you."
Gohan shook his head and looked up into the sky. 'You are so cruel sometimes Dende! You know that?!'
"Gohan." The teen looked over to Videl. She was obviously pissed off. "For the tenth time, WHO THE HELL IS DENDE?!" A sweatdrop could be seen from the side of the teen's head.
Goten looked in between the two teens, and he began to laugh. But to hide it, he covered his mouth with his small palms. The laugher was still heard by the teen that carried him.
"What's so funny Goten?" she asked him raising an eyebrow. 'Great, now Gohan's brother is mocking me...' she mentally thought slapping her forehead.
Goten gave a big toothy grin as he looked to his brother's friend. "It looks like both you and my brother are reading each other's minds! Are you bonding with him?" he asked innocently.
For Videl, this was becoming more confusing by the moment. She looked over to the two blondes, who just seemed to watch this who issue as if it was a live soap opera. 'Soap opera... Yeah right...' She paused, and winced, 'It IS like a soap opera! A very weird one at that... Oh man... I hope I wake up soon from this horrible dream...' she thought.
And to Gohan, it started to make sense. He WAS bonding with Videl! He slapped his forehead yet again. This was so confusing, and too complicated. He looked up into the sky, 'I wish dad was here...'
Gohan was brought back to reality when he felt his pants being tugged on. Gohan looked down and noticed Trunks looking up at him. The young hybrid prince pointed up to Gohan stating, "You know... you're losing brain cells by smacking your head that hard." Trunks looked up to the teen tilting his head to the side, "Did you accidentally crack your skull? It sounded like some kind of bones were crushed, like the time dad almost killed Yamcha. Oh that was a sight to see!" exclaimed Trunks balling his fists into the air almost as if he was cheering on his dad.
Trunks turned back to his dad, "Could we pick on Yamcha again? I know the perfect prank!"
Vegeta gave a smirk. "I think we could make time for that, but not now. We're trying to destroy another person's life right now." The prince's gaze turned to Gohan, and the smirk widened, "We haven't completely succeeded... yet."
"GOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNN!" exclaimed Goten becoming mad. He crossed his arms and glared at his brother, let's not forget stopping his foot. And yes, when saiyans get mad and hasty, there is damage done. Goten's foot went thru the floor, making a foot sized hole and the house began to shake.
"EARTH QUAKE!" exclaimed Erasa as she dived to the floor along with Sharpener and Videl.
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Piccolo's eyes shot open as he felt some strange new force on the planet. "Dende," stated the warrior Namek. The younger Namek looked up to Piccolo with crossed arms.
"Could you make it fast? I want to see the damage done! I want to see Gohan suffer!" exclaimed the young kami. Piccolo gave a small glare to Dende, and the young Namek cowered.
"As I was saying... The storm that has covered the land completely seems to have some strange evil force to it," stated Piccolo in his serious voice.
"Evil? But we haven't seen any evil since Cell," said the young kami with wide eyes. Piccolo shook his head.
"This is most defiantly a new evil that I sense. And it's stronger than any enemy that we have fought before, and I don't think the Z warriors can defeat it... We might have to revive Goku," exclaimed Piccolo.
Dende blinked, "But... Goku asked for us to not revive him! Should we go against his wishes because of a bad vibe you have?" Piccolo glared down to Dende.
"He will need to be revived! This new enemy will be using the earth's resources to destroy everything! Goku MUST be brought back!" explained the older Namek. "And I need to go down and warn Gohan! We need to prepare for this evil! Make sure you contact the Namek's for the dragonballs! We're going to be needing them!"
With that, Piccolo dove off of the lookout's edge and began to fly into the darkened clouds.
Dende crossed his arms as he watched Piccolo fly off. "I hope he knows the clouds have lightning and hail in them!" Not far in the distance, the sound of lighting crashing in the clouds could be heard as well as bright flashes were seen. Dende winced.
"I think I should have warned Piccolo earlier..." He further winced when he heard Piccolo's string of curses being exclaimed in the sky, let's not forget the small stream of smoke being left behind the older Namek as he flew off. "Ouch."
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"I'm HUNGRY!" exclaimed the young child rubbing his rumbling tummy. "Could you make me something Gohan?!" asked the child falling over. Gohan had a sweatdrop fall from the side of his head as he looked to his young brother. 'He's most defiantly the child of Goku...' He shook his head, and walked into the kitchen.
Videl picked up Goten, who was rolling around on the ground. From what it looked like, something may have been eating him from the inside out! "Goten?" she asked him blinking.
"Soooooooooooooooo, hunnnnnnnngrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyy."
"But... you just ask your brother to make you something five minutes ago..." stated Videl trying to get the kid's mind off of food. She heard the older male in the room snort as he watched Videl.
"He has the right to be like that. These children have very high metabolisms, and very high energy which could be used for TRAINING." He glared down at the two boys. Goten seemed to forget his 'hunger pains' and he tried to become invisible. Trunks tried to hide too from his dad's glare, but it didn't seem to help that much...
"Like Gohan?" asked Videl as she began to run her hand thru Goten's spiky hair. "I just found out from this little tyke," she pointed to Gohan's younger brother, "That he was trained to fight in martial arts when he was four. I think that's a bit too young for a child to learn how to fight... although I've never seen him fight before... I guess it's given us the impression that he isn't strong."
The humans heard Vegeta burst out laughing. Videl furrowed her eyebrow. "You think Kakarot's spawn is WEAK?! Oh, that's a classic!" He began to laugh even harder. All humans in the room watched Vegeta for a moment before he calmed down again, "Tell me. How strong do you think I am?" asked the prince in a very amused tone.
Videl placed a finger on her chin and thought, "Well, I tried to pull away from you, and I couldn't pull away. I don't think you even noticed... so I must say you are very strong..."
Vegeta crossed his arms in a smirk as he looked to the two other humans. Sharpener had seemed to fall asleep thru all this commotion, so Erasa added onto Videl's thought.
"You seem to be very strong because we can see your muscles!" exclaimed Erasa with a smile. Vegeta gave a smirk and closed his eyes; a little ego boost was all that the prince was getting. "But I must say... no one on the school campus thinks Gohan is strong since he always wears lose clothing... and he fails gym class!"
"So if Gohan DOES, by some chance, have muscles as we had seen in an old picture, he must be hiding them pretty good," added in Videl.
Vegeta looks up to Videl and raises an eyebrow, "Gohan FAILS gym?"
She nodded, "Yeah. It's like he's afraid to do any of the activities done in class."
"Is that so?" asked Vegeta. Both girls nodded. Vegeta thought for a moment before he got up, and looked around the room. It seemed that Chichi didn't have anything breakable in this room, or anything that was expensive. He turned back to Videl, "Do you have anything very heavy?"
Videl looked up to the prince raising an eyebrow as she pulled out a small capsule case from her pocket. She looked at eight different capsules that were carried in it. She pulled one out, and tossed it to the ground.
When the smoke cleared, a few large punching bags, which were neatly stacked up, appeared. Vegeta gave a smirk. "Which one can't you carry?" he asked her.
"The black one," she stated. Vegeta nodded as he picked it up with no effort what so ever.
"You wouldn't mind if this got destroyed... would you?" asked Vegeta before he put his plan into action. Why was Vegeta acting so nice to these females? Well, for one, they weren't annoying. Two, he was trying to ruin Gohan's life so the possibilities for getting a good spar could be at hand. And three. Gohan's friends deserved to know the truth. With the horrible lies that Gohan was telling them, the truth needed to come out, and in the most painful way possible.
Videl blinked for a moment before she shook her head. "I don't mind. I could ask my dad for another one, I guess... Why do you ask?" questioned Videl.
Vegeta gave a smirk, "You'll see." The prince put his hand to the punching bag and made a rather large ki ball in the bag. He looked to the doorway that led to the kitchen, and smirked. "GOHAN! GET YOUR ASS OUT HERE! WE'VE BEEN ATTACKED!"
With in no time, Gohan 'appeared' in the room very panicked. "Wha? What's going on?!" That was when Gohan noticed the punching bag zooming towards him. Balling his fists, Gohan rammed his fist with the bag causing it to break on impact. Now... let's not forget about that ki ball that Vegeta put in the bag. The way Vegeta put it in the bag made it resemble as a bomb. Not a bomb that would completely destroy the house; he didn't want his wife to be chewing him out later on. This was a bomb that destroyed anything within a two to three foot radius.
So the bomb exploded. Some of the sand in the bag disengaged from the energy bomb, and the rest spread around the room making a HUGE mess. Vegeta had to put up his energy shield so the human's wouldn't be harmed by it.
Videl and Erasa gasped as the smoke cleared. Gohan had destroyed the bag with one hit! And not only that! The bomb in the bag had burned Gohan's loose shirt off revealing his muscular chest and arms. They were a bit burned, but it wasn't anything a saiyan couldn't handle.
Videl was speechless. "My kami... G-Gohan?"
Gohan's lip twitched as he glared at a smirking prince. "What do you think girls?" asked the prince as he turned his head looking at both of their reactions.
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I can't believe that I put that in the fic... Now... I was quite surprised that I got about 15 reviews just for the last chapter! And I was jumping with joy when I checked my e-mail this morning. I thank you ALL for even taking the time to read this fic. Now... I must say I am still getting use to writing fics that are over five pages long...so I'm making the review rate go up. Of course, 5 reviews will guarantee the next chapter will come out soon, maybe a few days... But I'm now making it 20 reviews will make it come out the next day. I know! Before you start throwing tomatoes at me, I must make it known that it's hard to write this much in this short time! So I guess I've 'upped' the 'price' for the next chapter to be sent out the next day. Oh yeah... I should also warn, I might not be in to write any fics next week because I'll be out of town. ::dun dun DUNNNNNNN:: Anyways... till next time!
-Takuma