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Even More Rain
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The buses finally arrived to their destination. The only thing that would have made this senior vacation spot a 'bit' more cheerful was much needed sun. Why do you ask that? Rain, my friend, rain is what made this trip just a bit gloomier.
All students had their faces smashed against the windows of their transportation as they gazed to the water droplets that crashed and slid down the glass. Among the students who were peering out the windows were no other than Goten and Trunks. The main reason why they smashed their faces up to the window was to see their breaths fog up the window, and then later make pictures in the fog with their chubby fingers... but let's not get into much detail about that...
Anyways, as I stated before, it was raining very hard outside. One would say it were raining cats and dogs, or sheets of rain fell from the sky. Yet, either way stated, you would have been soaked with or with out rain protection.
The one's who were willing to go out into the rain to get the keys to the hotel were, no other than Chichi and Bulma, dragging along their husbands. Why them? The saiyans had the protective ki around them and their wives, keeping the rain from 'ruining' their clothes.
As Goten and Trunks had their faces smashed up against the windows and breathed to make fog on the window they continued to watch people who ran out into the rain trying their hardest to not get wet. Both kids began to laugh when they noticed a random person begin to melt when they entered the storm of heavy water droplets.
"They melted!" exclaimed Goten gleefully as he clapped his hands together.
Trunks also looked out into the rain noticing the melted person; he too began to laugh, but in a more evil manner.
Goten looked back to his brother and gave the biggest smile he could muster. "Gohan! Gohan! Gohan! I saw the evil wicked ice-jin of the west being melted!"
The eldest hybrid saiyan opened one of his closed eyes lazily as his brother stared at him in the eye. One could have sworn their faces were only centimeters away. This slightly unnerved Gohan... just slightly.
"An Ice-jin, you say?" questioned Gohan as he opened his other eye only to look down at the female crime fighter who fell asleep, currently using him as a pillow.
Goten backed up as he nodded his head heavily with that huge Son Grin® plastered on his face. "Yep! The Ice-jin of the west meltered!"
"Right..." muttered Gohan as he closed his eyes once more. He was feeling very comfortable in this position... and thus, didn't want to move. Gohan and Videl lucked out that Hercule didn't catch them falling asleep on the bus like this. He went into a state of shock before falling into an unconscious state (after his 'lovely' hair was burned off) allowing for the new couple to lean on each other to become more comfortable on this bus.
But Gohan's eyes opened once more as Vegeta and Bulma walked into the bus with a bunch of cards. The female scientist handed the cards to the teacher with a smile before she walked back to her original seat.
Gohan didn't exactly like the look in Bulma's eye. She had that 'I know something you don't know' look. And most of the time she DID know something he didn't know... but then again, that's the life of a genius... err... I'm getting off subject.
The teacher stood up, and gave a sharp whistle to catch every one in the bus' attention. Needless to say, it made all the girls shriek and the guys jump at the large screech. It did wake up Videl.
One could have worn that she growled as low as an angry wolf that hadn't eaten a meal in four days. Gohan had a sweatdrop fall from the side of his head as he straightened up in his seat.
"Well," started the overly excited teacher as she smiled cheerfully to the group of students. "We're finally here!"
Many groans were heard as well as many cheers as the teacher continued to grin.
"Now! As you all know, Mister and Misses Briefs were kind enough to go out to the hotel to grab the keys to our rooms! All of your rooms have been assigned before hand; so when I call your names, please come up and claim your key!"
And thus the long list of names began for the senior class.
Vegeta and Bulma went back to their seats, both with wide smirks on their face.
Gohan gulped as he tried to lean back deeper into the chair he was currently seated in. Why was it that he didn't have a good feeling about both of his lifetime friends giving him this LOOK?
"Is there going to be blood spilled? Because the way you are smiling, it's unnerving me," warned Gohan as he nervously looked to the Briefs.
Videl also looked over to Bulma and Vegeta. She too began to have the feeling Gohan was currently experiencing.
Vegeta's raspy voice was noticed when he began to cackle a low and taunting manner. "Let us just say that the clown will be close to having a heart attack when he finds out some... change in events."
Both Videl and Gohan began to cower at the look Vegeta gave them.
'It's... it's... it's just too EVIL!' thought Gohan as he winced under the evil eyes of the saiyan prince.
Videl couldn't agree more in the bond as she too turned her eyes from the stare Vegeta was giving them.
But, thank goodness for random moments because Trunks seemed to 'magically' appear on his father's head. Vegeta growled as he turned his eyes up to his son, who was currently standing on his father's head in perfect balance.
Trunks looked down to his father grinning widely. "DAD! Didyouknowthatthewickedice-jinofthewestwasmelteredandwasreadytostealtheplasticbagsoftheearth! Did ya? Did ya! DID YA?" Now, as Goten was earlier, Trunks was now only inches away from his father's face.
Needful to say, it miraculously DID unnerve the saiyan prince as he looked into the wide eyes of the chibi.
"Did you eat coffee beans again?" questioned the saiyan prince to his son.
Trunks jumped off of his father's head, and returned the answer with a quick nod of they head. "YEP! Yepyepyepyepyepyepyepyepyepyepyep!"
Vegeta turned to his wife giving her the evil glare that he gave Videl and Gohan earlier. It also unnerved his wife... but being the wise and intelligent woman she was, she had a back up plan.
She pulled out the, WA NA NA, the PAN of DOOM!
This DID make all saiyans in the bus cower in fear. The little boys ran and hid under the seats of the bus, as the grown men seemed to vanish with their super speeds.
The only one remaining were Bulma, with the evil dented pan, and Videl.
The female teenage crime fighter noticed Bulma release an evil laugh as she made the pan disappear. And clapping her hands to wipe some 'dust' away Bulma had that triumphant smirk plastered on her face. It looked too much like one of Vegeta's smiles...
"Now that THAT'S taken care of..." started Bulma as she leaned back in her chair of the bus, "I think I can finally get some much needed sleep." Leaning her head back into the chair, Bulma closed her eyes.
But her attempts to fall asleep were in vain.
Bulma shrieked when she felt the strong arms of her husband wrap around her waist, then to be tossed over his over muscled shoulder. A smirking prince of Vegetasei firmly kept his wife over his shoulder as he began to whistle a happy tune making his way to the front door of the bus, and to the hotel room they paid for.
Videl watched as the two left; it also left quite a few students tilting their heads in confusion as they watched the couple leave the bus.
Trunks and Goten reappeared some time when every one was watching the two adults leave; the son of the saiyan prince and female, earth scientist whistled low.
"How long do you think they'll be in the room?" questioned Goten as he glanced over his is friend.
Trunks gave a shrug, "Don't know... they might be at it all day... maybe at night too-"
"WOAH!" exclaimed Videl as she began to shake her head left to right while gripping the sides to her seat. "How do you kids know what they might be doing... or talking about... adult things...?" Now, let's remember that Videl wasn't quite use to the habits of the Briefs family, same with the Son family. Videl was never aware that Gohan, his brother and father were attacked with a stainless steel pan that never seemed to be damaged or dented!
Trunks and Goten shrugged before the son of the Brief's commented, "It's nothing out of the ordinary. They're just mat-"
Videl slapped her forehead and drug her hand down her face as if trying to wipe away the embarrassment clearly noticed in her cheeks. "Cut the subject," she muttered as she heard her name being called to get her room key.
And walking up there, the teacher gave the student a worried smile. "Um, Videl... there seemed to be some complications to the reservations we made for the hotel-"
"I don't have a room!" shouted Videl as her eyes widened.
The teacher shook her head, "Oh no! It's nothing like that! You do have a room! It's just... going to be a bit BIGGER than what the other students are receiving..."
The black locked crime fighter raised an eyebrow, "My room is a suite?"
The teacher nodded frantically as she handed Videl the card. "Yes, and it's located on the top floor. But the thing is... since there are an odd number of female students and male students on this trip... you will be having some... guys in your room-"
"Who are they?" Videl questioned sharply.
The teacher looked back on the list, and scanned the paper. "It looks like you will be in the same room as Sharpener, Gohan, and Erasa." The teacher lowered the list and gave a sympathetic smile. "I'm sorry to have to do this to you... but I tried to get you in a-"
"That's fine."
The teacher blinked as she eyed Videl in a surprised way.
"You're not angry?" questioned the educator.
"Nope," stated Videl. "I would have been angry if I was placed in a room with a bunch of brainless-"
"Oh wonderful!" exclaimed the teacher with a bright smile. "I just knew that you would like this arrangement after Misses Briefs suggested it!"
Mrs. Briefs?
Videl's eyes darkened as she looked to the tall eight-story building. 'Damn you, Bulma...' she silently thought.
The black haired female was aware that her father would kill her once he found out that she would be in the same room as members of the opposite gender, and she was aware that her father might be getting the hints she left every so often that she was dating someone behind his back.
'Why me?' she asked her self.
'Because you're special,' replied a tenor voice in her head. Videl gave a small glare as she turned herself around smacking into Gohan's rock hard chest. She looked up to him, with out moving, and Gohan's smirk rested on his face. To the students around, it was a rare sight to see, for Videl... she was slowly becoming use to it.
That alone brought many 'OOOOH's!' and 'AAAAAAAAH's' and other teasing words and phrases that embarrassed newest teen couple. And turning on her heal, Videl stuck her nose in the air away from Gohan, and strides out of the bus in an annoyed way.
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Erasa, Sharpener, and Gohan almost had a nosebleed when their elevator came to a stop on the top floor. The normal rooms were huge as it was... but the suite... that's another story.
The door was already opened to their room; obviously the hotel workers were helping to bring in the fifteen bags. Each teen had two bags, however Erasa brought everything BUT the kitchen sink.
The three teens entered the front room; all had dropped jaws as they gaped at the room.
This room was like a mini-house!
It seemed to have everything from a kitchen (with fridge and stove), and a 'living room' with big comfy couches before a fireplace. A small dining room was also noticed to their left, and a big screen television to their right with a few more couches and lazy boy recliners.
"Oh... my..." started Erasa as she gazed around in wonder placing a hand over her mouth. And turning her head slightly, she screamed.
Gohan growled low as he covered his ears while closing his eyes. Sharpener jumped ever so slightly from fright as he turned to the blonde female with wide eyes.
Videl came running out from one of the rooms glancing at her friend in concern.
"Erasa! Is there something wrong!" At this time, Videl joined the others.
Gohan unplugged his ears, which started to bleed. "I hate it when that happens!" exclaimed Gohan in a hushed voice. Videl didn't miss that, however Sharpener and Erasa did...
Erasa's face expression turned into a HUGE smile as she pranced over to the kitchen. "There's a KITCHEN!"
The men and female crime fighter had a sweatdrop fall from the side of their heads.
"You screamed... because you noticed a kitchen?" questioned Gohan as he used his black sleeve to wipe away the blood dripping from his right ear.
Videl rolled her eyes as she crossed her arms, "Erasa is obsessed with kitchens."
Gohan blinked his eyes as he strangely stared at the blonde looking at all the different appliances. "Why?"
"She wants to become a world famous chef," added Sharpener as he grabbed his bags from the pile at the doorway, "the kitchen is her haven; cooking is her passion."
"Food?" asked Gohan as his smile returned to his face. Videl slapped her forehead. "What is it with saiyans and food? You're acting just like your dad."
Gohan shrugged as he slowly made his way to the kitchen, his mouth drooling.
The female crime fighter shook her head as she looked back to the living room, towards where the big screen television sat. It seemed that the blonde jock was unpacking something...
Then realization hit her in the head like a brick.
"You brought it... didn't you?" asked Videl as she ventured closer to Sharpener.
He looked up from his place at the floor, and nodded with a smirk.
She immediately jumped at Sharpener and gave him the biggest hug she could possibly muster, and even kissed him on the cheek!
"THANKYOU! Thank you! Thank you! THANK YOU!" she exclaimed as her eyes continued to sparkle.
Now... in the kitchen, which wasn't too far from the big screen, Gohan was nibbling on a foot long sandwich. He turned from Erasa after she gave him the food, and he choked, literally. His face also turned a lovely shade of white.
His girlfriend was hugging Sharpener! Not only that, but also planted a kiss on his cheek!
Gohan didn't feel so hungry any more... but that was about the time that he realized that his throat was clogged with a big chunk of bread, meat, lettuce, tomato, sprouts, cucumber, some more meat... err... you get the picture.
And quickly grabbing the glass of water Erasa was frantically handing to Gohan, he gulped down the water dislodging the food from his throat to being transferred to his not so hungry stomach.
Now... with new determination to know the reason WHY Videl had leaped onto Sharpener with such excitement, he slammed the glass down on the sink top, denting the metal sink along with breaking the glass shattering it into a million micro sized pieces. Erasa just blinked as she watched quietly while Gohan stomped all the way towards Sharpener and Videl.
Those two teens were currently sitting side by side on one of the couches with controllers in their hands eyes glued to the big screen. Videl could feel Gohan coming closer to her... but his aurora didn't show happiness... or the joy that he always seemed to possess.
She lifted her head towards him. Her eyebrow rose gazing at Gohan's angered features.
"What are you two DOING?" questioned Gohan almost a bit too harsh. Sharpener didn't seem to be fazed by his tone of voice. So he just seemed to ignore it. But Videl, on the other hand gave her boyfriend a weak smile as she held up the game controller.
"PS2...?"
Gohan paused. He blinked. His smile returned. The saiyan jumped and landed in the area beside Videl, which wasn't occupied.
"Are you playing 'Kill the Possum'? I've heard that game is the funniest one out now!"
Videl gave a nod turning her head to the television.
And when things seemed to be turning up... it just became worse...
Lightning flashed in the sky following thunder just as Gohan's parents walked into the room.
Both Chichi and Goku looked to the sky raising an eyebrow before they walked into the open door.
Goku gave a low whistle as he looked around. Gohan, hearing his father, turned his head slowly and he smiled brightly. "Dad!" And jumping up with as much excitement as he did a few seconds before jumped out and towards his father.
The parents of Gohan just stared at the teen strangely, and then Chichi glared at Goku as she 'magically' pulled out the 'PAN OF DOOM' whacking her husband with it. Goku fell over on the floor, a HUGE bump forming on the back of his head.
"What was that for Chichi?" questioned Goku sadly as he kneeled on the floor rubbing the now sore area.
Chichi glared at her husband once more and raised the pan again making Goku scream and dash out of the room. The wife of the saiyan rolled her eyes as she put the pan away for safe keeping while muttering things like... 'How dare you teach my son to be so ridiculous!' Gohan had a sweatdrop fall from the side of his head as he had his attention to his mother.
"So..." started Gohan as he tilted his head slightly. "Are you here just to check up on me and my friends?"
Chichi shook her head while wiping her hands on her skirt, "Nope. I have a job for you."
"Yeah?" questioned Gohan mentally sighing. He could hear the Hallelujah chorus already along with the sun shinning and the birds singing.
"I want you to watch Goten and Trunks."
(Insert lighting and thunder)
Gohan's face paled as the singing came to a screeching halt and the light turned to darkness. "What...?"
That was the moment both kids ran in laughing while Trunks held a camera in his hands, Goten, his arms full of cans of cheese wiz. But as Chichi and Gohan noticed the two evil children, the placed the items behind their backs and as if 'magic' again... halo's began to appear over their heads.
Goten looked up, and his face paled. "TRUNKS!"
The lavender haired teen looked over to his friends' panicked expression. "What?"
"ARE YOU DEAD!" and forgetting the items in his arms he ran to his friend as he pointed to the halo above his friends' head.
Trunks slapped his face. "No, it's just a special effect to show that we are innocent!"
Goten gave a small 'Oh...' before he grabbed the forgotten cans of cheese wiz and placed them behind his back giving the innocent smile on his face.
"I'll expect you to keep the kids until tomorrow."
And with that stated, Chichi turned to leave the room. Well... not before noticing Erasa cooking in the kitchen. And walking over to the blond female, she pointed to the frying pan, which lay on the hot stove filled with chopped vegetables and fish.
Where did she get the food?
No body knows...
Erasa looked up to Chichi, and the mother of Gohan took that time to speak to the female teen. "If any of my boys, or Trunks get out of line, you have my permission, as well as Bulma's, to whack them if they get out of their line."
And placing a bright smile on her face, she exited the room and walked down the halls.
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Okay... I haven't exactly updated lately. Mainly it has been because school has been very evil for me... yesterday I was very stressed because I had to make sure I had 80 note cards for my research paper for today...which was for a grade. I was hoping to work on one of four fics I am currently writing... but I didn't get finished till late. I don't know if I'll be able to work on any of my fics tomorrow, because it is bound to be hectic with a b-day party AND a Jazz Banquet I have to play in tomorrow... for 3 hours... in a dress... (quivers) I hate dresses...
I also encourage you to read my info page because I usually update it every week or so to explain where I am in my writing life, and in my regular life.
Thanks!
-Takuma (The Busy One)