Hello readers I really appreciate your reviews even if they are 'write more', and I don't mean that in a sarcastic way, I want to thank all of ya. :hugs reviewers: However all I have to say is if you don't like my story, don't review and tell me how much you hate it, it's pretty much pointless. Here's a great example of some people's lack of intellectual acuity. And it's from 'Anonymous' again...
From: Anonomyous( )
Sorry but your story should be in PG-13 before I report it. You suck bitch. Go to a baby writing center and learn to write. BITCH
When I first read this I laughed so hard I almost fell out of my chair. By the way 'Anonomyous' you spelled anonymous wrong once again, I'd have thought after me telling you before you would at least spell it right, but apparently your mental capacity couldn't handle that. My story is rated M because of the adult situations, rape and cutting yourself isn't normally featured in PG-13. Besides I rated it M just to be on the safe side. Baby...writing...center...? I think I've heard better come backs out of 1st graders. (Seriously I have) And my other reviewers agree with me when I say I can write, even though there are times when I feel as if it all stinks. Oh and about you attempting to flame my story, it's just giving me another review:sticks tongue out: oh and a very loyal reviewer and good friend of mine had this to say to you Anonymous
"You have no room to talk considering you don't write, now do you, you pretentious hag" :laughs my ass off:
Enough of my ranting on what do my reviewers think of 'Anonymous's' review? I'll gladly post them with my next author's note.
On a lighter note this chapter has fluffiness and is very dramatic.
Thank u to Holders-of-the-ShikonJewel! For such a sweet review!
To Heal Her Broken Heart Chapter 12 (chapter 3) Memories
:Disclaimer:
:I sadly do not own InuYasha or any of the characters, they belong to Rumiko Takahashi:
what happened last time...
Sango snapped open her teary eyes to find herself in Miroku's embrace. She could see the pain reflecting in his eyes, and she knew he was holding in all his emotions in for her and it was killing him inside to do it. "Miroku…" she whispered.
To Heal Her Broken Heart Chapter 12
Kagome sat up and let out a tremendous yawn as she
stretched her arms out. She smiled to herself as she strode
across the room in direction of her bathroom. As Kagome
walked she stopped at her dresser to get a fluffy white towel
and her fleece bathrobe. She closed the door behind her as
she pulled the faucet on. Hot water streamed out of the
shower head as she undressed and stepped into the shower.
A fewminutes later the bathroom door opened, white mist
erupted from the room, as Kagome emerged clad in her
bathrobe and a towel wrapped around her hair. She was in a
particularly good mood as she towel dried her hair, "I wonder
what Inuyasha is doing today?" she thought as she pulled on
a black skirt, and a long sleeved green blouse. Kagome
opened her bedroom door and jauntily walked down the steps
and into the kitchen, only to find Inuyasha sitting on a stool his
head in his hands. "Inuyasha?.." Kagomeasked questionably.
He looked up at her and on one motion had her in a warm hug
asking her if she was alright. "Inuyasha what are you doing
here?" she asked confused. "Kagome what are you talking
about? Are you alright?" he asked pulling back and placing a
hand on each of her shoulders. "Yes I'm fine just very
confused on why you are here?" she answered. "I didn't want
you to be left alone after last night" he said his eyes softening.
"Last night?" she questioned. Inuyasha sighed he really didn't
want to remind her of last night's message for he feared her
reaction. "When we came home last night there was a
message about Hojo-" Inuyasha started. Kagome interrupted
him, "Oh Hojo, you must have been talking to Sango, it's
nothing to worry about I haven't heard from him in a year, not
since we broke up anyway" "Kagome? Don't you remember
the dance at the park? What happened after we got
separated? What you did to yourself afterwards? The
therapy? Anything?" he said desperately. "Therapy? Quit
joking around, it's not like I'm mental or anything" she giggled.
"How can this be she didn't simply forget everything that's
happened to her...I know I wouldn't be able to...I should take
her to see that therapist of her tomorrow" he thought as
Kagome was searching through the empty cabinets of the
kitchen. "Oh I need to go shopping!" Kagome exclaimed as
she shut the refrigerator door. Inuyasha quickly glanced down
at his watch, "1:38?" "Ayame has been gone since 9:30, I
better call her" me muttered pulling his cell phone out of his
pocket and dialing Ayame's phone number.
The main chorus of Ai no Uta woke Ayame from a deep
sleep, she groggily reached into her jacket and took out her
cell phone. "Moshi moshi Ayame here" she said into the
phone. "Ayame? Where are you?" asked Inuyasha. "I'm- oh
shit I have no idea where I am!" she cried realizing she was in
an unfamiliar bed. Then she spotted the note Kouga wrote
her, "Wait Inuyasha I found a note by me, 'Ayame, Please
don'tpanic when you wake up, you fell asleep on me and I
brought you back to my house, I only did it because I didn't
know where you lived or I would have brought you home. -
Kouga' It's alright I'm at Kouga's," she said. "Ayame be
careful I don't trust that bastard" Inuyasha spat out. "I'll be fine,
I'll give you a call when I'm on my way back, Ja-ne" she said
hanging up the phone. Then there came a knock on the
bedroom door, "Ayame?" Kouga's voice echoed on the other
side of the door.
"Hey Inuyasha? Who's Ayame?" Kagome asked once he had
hung up the phone. "You don't remember Ayame?" Inuyasha
said in disbelief. "Nope" she said putting a finger thoughtfully
to her chin. "What about Sango and Miroku?" he asked
quickly. "Yes how could I forget them?" Kagome answered
with a giggle. The home phone rang shrilly through the house.
Kagome ran over to it and picked it up. "Moshi Moshi,
Higarashi residence Kagome speaking" She said in to the
receiver. "Kagome dear I've got some bad news." said Ms.
Higarashi's voice from the opposite end of the line. "Hi Mama,
what the bad news?" Kagome asked twirling her finger in her
hair. "Our flight was delayed because of a sudden blizzard,
and I'm not sure how long it will take until we can get back" he
mother said with much stress in her voice. "Oh that's horrible"
Kagome answered. In the background Kagome could hear
Souta saying, "Tell nee-chan I said hi, tell nee-chan I said hi!
Please Mama!" "Oh and Souta says hi, well I'm going to let
you go, I'll be home as soon as I can" Ms. Higarashi said with
a small laugh. "Oh k Mama, I love you see you soon." Kagome
finished as she placed the phone back on the charger. "Well
Mama and Ji-chan and Souta's flight was delayed and they
aren't sure when they are going to get back" Kagome
explained. Inuyasha just nodded.
Sango and Miroku ate quietly, every second that passed
seemed like an eternity, the silence was vexing, the tension in
the air augmented to such a point she felt like screaming. The
silence was eating away at Miroku too; he pressed his palms
to his forehead and sighed softly. Sango opened her mouth to
say something to break the silence but nothing seemed right
to say so she closed it again. Miroku lifted his head off his
hands and turned his gaze towards Sango. She too turned to
him and their eyes locked. His eyes were like windows to his
soul, and his heart, she could see that pain, the anguish and
the love. A pink tint dusted across Sango's cheeks as Miroku
brought his hand up to her cheek and traced the outline of her
jaw with his thumb. Her face broke into a small sweet smile.
Miroku too could see her feelings through Sango's soft brown
eyes. As if there was a force drawing them together, they
slowly got closer and closer, she could feel his breath warm
on her face, Sango's eyelashes fluttered closed. A sudden
thought of Kagome's horror stricken face flooded Sango's
mind and brought her out of the haze. She put her hands on
Miroku's chest and pushed herself away from him. "Sango
what's wrong?" he asked worried. "Miroku it just doesn't feel
right, Kagome is miserable and I'm not." Sango said putting
her arms around herself. Miroku sighed and walked behind
her. "Sango... Kagome wouldn't want you to think like this and
you know that" he said hugging her from behind. "I guess
you're right" Sango replied putting her hands over his.
"Besides.." he added quickly, "Kagome is with Inuyasha and
we both know he wouldn't let anything happen to her" "I just
want things to be normal again" Sango sighed, but it was cut
short by her squeak. "Miroku! Keep your hands to yourself or
you can leave!" she growled slapping his hand away from her
backside. "What! I was just trying to make things normal
again" he said in his own defense. Sango rolled hereyes.
Ayame opened the door. "Are you feeling better?" he asked
concerned. "Yes I am" Ayame said feeling the tension
between them. "Would you like me to take you home?" he
asked not moving from the doorway. (Let's all pretend Ayame
walked to the store and Kouga drove her in his car to his
house) "Could you drop me off at Kagome's" Ayame asked
sweetly. "Anything for you" he said softly. A blush spread
across her face, "Ar-arigatou" she stuttered. Kouga walked
across the room and picked up his keys from an end table,
"This is your room?" she asked in realization. "Yea" he
answered walking up beside her. Her blush grew darker, as
she realized something. "That means I slept in his bed!"
"Ayame? Earth to Ayame?" Kouga said waving his hand in
front of her face. "Oh yeah gomen nasai" she said putting her
hand up to her burning cheeks. "I'll bring you to Kagome's,
you just have to tell me where to go" he said smiling. Ayame
smiled and followed him out of the room. When they reached
the living room, three young children were playing Sugoroku,
(a children's dice game) laughing and giggling. "This is
Hayhai"(fast) Kouga said pointing to a 6 year old boy with
brown hair and blue eyes, "Sui-Topi"(sweet pea) he said
pointing to a 5 year old girl with brown hair and green eyes.
"And finally we have Suekko"(youngest child) he said pointing
to the 2 year old boy, he had the same brown hair but with
dark brown eyes. Ayame smiled at the children who returned
to their game, "These are your brothers and sister right?" she
asked watching the children, "Yeah, they can be quite a
handful" he laughed scratching the back of his head. "I bet"
Ayame said smiling again. "It's been a while since you smiled"
he pointed out. Her face grew solemn at the comment, "Baka
baka baka!" he thought mentally slapping himself. "I'm
sorry..." he said softly, "I'll take you home now" Kouga
muttered taking her elbow, and leading her out the door.
Ayame followed him silently out to his car. "Take a left here"
she said a few minutes into the ride. "Why are you sorry?"
Ayame questioned breaking the silence. "You've been
through hell and back again, and I had to make a stupid
comment that you haven't smiled" "I'm such a baka" he said
glumly. "What are you talking about Kouga, Your not making
any sense." Ayame replied turning in her seat to face him. "It
seemed like a good thing to say at the time" Kouga stated
glancing at her. "Don't w- take a right here- worry about it, you
have no reason to be- take a left here and it's the second
house on the right- sorry" she said while giving him directions.
Kouga pulled the car into the driveway, and looked over to her.
"Arigatou for the ride" she said opening the car door.
Suddenly the front door opened and Inuyasha walked out with
Kagome tagging along. Inuyasha let out a very vicious growl
when he saw Kouga. Ayame ran up to Kagome and threw her
arms around her, "Kagome! Your awake!" Ayame squealed.
"Yeah, but who-" Kagome didn't get to finish the thought
before Inuyasha interrupted, "Ayame could you go get my cell
phone I left it in Kagome's room" She nodded then walked
into the house. Kouga walked up to Kagome, "Are you
alright?" he asked. "Yeah...Why does everyone keep asking
that?" Kagome replied. "What the hell did you do to Kagome
inukurro!" Kouga bellowed. "I didn't do anything!" Inuyasha
yelled back cracking his knuckles. "Wanna fight then koinu?
(puppy) Bring it on!" Kouga said taking a fighting stance.
Kagome grew irritated and stepped in between them. "That's
enough! Stop acting like children!"Kagome shouted as the
guys grew silent. She turned to Kouga, "Yes do you need
something Kouga?" "No just wanted to see how you've been"
he said smiling. "I'm fine arigatou" Kagome said stretching up
to kiss him on the cheek. Ayame stood in the doorway, doubt
filled her mind as she watched Kouga from afar. Tears slowly
gathered in her eyes as she came to a realization. Ayame
dropped her head in defeat and slipped away un noticed.
Behind Kagome Inuyasha erupted into some choice curses
and loud growls. "I'll see you later Kagome! Tell Ayame I'll talk
to her tomorrow" Kouga said as he drove off. Kagome
giggled as she stared at Inuyasha. His arms were crossed
and his jaw set. Inuyasha had 'the look' on his face, She
couldn't help but laugh at him. "It's alright Inuyasha I like you
better..." she said her voice barely above a whisper, as she
stepped closer to him. He looked into her eyes, they were
dull, missing that warm and welcoming spark, they seemed
almost empty. It pained him to see her like that. Kagome
giggled again as she took the final step. She was inches from
him her breath hot on his face, his eyes darkened slightly as
she slid an arm around his neck. Inuyasha's lips brushed over
Kagome's. But there was something missing there too, she
felt cold, like she was missing a part of her, the part that was
locked inside if her. He pulled back, and left her questioning
his actions. "What's the matter Inuyasha?" she asked her
arms still around his neck. "Uh...I just have a lot on my mind
that's all" he said snorting at his pathetic answer. "Oh alright
then" Kagome said quietly. "I'll see you later I have some stuff
to do" Inuyasha mumbled as he hugged her bye. He slowly
walked off to his house, passing Sesshomuru. Sesshomeru
remarked, "You look like hell little brother" half jokingly.
Inuyasha didn't even pay his brother a passing glance as he
walked down the hall and into his room. He fell backwards
onto his bed, pressed his palms to his eyes, and whispered,
"Kagome what's become of you..."
Sorry for the long wait I had meant to update before I left for Illinois but my computer freaked out and wouldn't let me get on the internet, stupid thing! And I am so proud of myself I updated this the day after I got back! (I got back at like 9 pm) But anyways what did you guys think of it?