For all of you who may be wondering why I'm taking so long, I'm not lazy, I've been on vacation! Went to the Dells from Thursday until Sunday. You know... the Wisconsin Dells. I'm telling you this because I went to Ripley's believe it or not museum and... I SAW A REAL IRON MAIDEN! Holy shit! It looks just like the Iron maiden thing in the manga that Jeanne is in all the time! That was really cool. Anyway, I'm taking this chap. to respond to some reviews. and, no, reviews that read: "rofl", or "lmao" only will not be counted. It's nice of you to review, but something besides an abbreviation would be good. Now, on with the reviews!
Chapter 1 reviews
SilverWolf-Ryuki- yes, flames can be hilarious, and yes they do usually have bad grammar. Yes, Ren is a bit OOC, but it's the price I must pay. (sigh)
Miry- checks his story yup. I'm pretty sure I updated... NEXT!
existence92- yes. I rather like these pairings too. I'm making another story, as I wrote in my last chap, and it will have Horo and Tamao in it.
Wielder of paperclips- yup. Ren and Pirka arguments are funny as hell. That's why I did it.
rezibravo- I did that.
azimatiji- yeah, I put a lot of work into that argument... not really. lol. thanks!
Akisukie Hashimoto- it's short? I thought over 1,000 words per chapter was a lot... oh well. glad you like it anyway! a lot of people who think stories are short give up after the 1st sentence.
Chapter 2 reviews
blackyuki- great! I love it too! I did!
Idhira Morillo- Yay! Here! more chapters more chapters more chapters! WOO!
Yokai no Miko- thanks! glad you like it.
cathrun- update faster? I was pulling a chapter a day up until chap six. lol. glad you like it.
Exploded toilet bowl- yeah, she ran around with a towel, but ran by so fast, Horo couldn't register it completely.
Wielder of paperclips- I get everything about your review... except for the sap part. what the heck is a sap? and where is it in my story? isn't sap from a tree? I'm so confused!
Chapter 3 reviews
blackyuki- yeah, this story is rather weird! I'm glad you noticed!
pendulumxswing- yes, good and funny at the same time is exactly what I was going for!
Exploded toilet bowl- I'm not quite sure what kind of romance this is... maybe it's crazy romance?
Akisukie Hashimoto- to be honest with you... I didn't expect it either. I had writers block and I had nothing else I could think of. Yeah, I know, that can ruin the story. oh well!
cathrum- WAIT FOR MORE THAN A DAY! WAIT FOR MORE THAN A DAY! AGGGGH! THE PRESSURE!
SilverWolf-Ryuki- Yup. it's the price I pay. OOCness is a double edged sword.
Wielder of papercilps- Yeah, I did go into that pretty quick, huh? oh well, it's no huge deal. I just figured it would be better to have him apologize to her right away... and then I think about it... and that's not like Ren. lol. Glad you found it funny!
Chapter 4 reviews
blackyuki- hmm.. you're right, you don't say much, but it's more than "lmao" so it gets taken.
Tahmik Panda- Yeah! She did find out a secret! The hair thing is one of my favorite parts in this story. The plan is unraveling as we speak!
Indhira Morillo- I'll keep updating until it's over!
Exploded toilet bowl- yep, I feel kind of bad for him... but not really. I never expected to put Hao in the story, but I just suddenly decided to. And then I realized how badass Hao is, and how easy it is to use him as a character!
SilverWolf-Ryuki- yeah, I know it's a Kwan Dao, but... that takes more energy to write. lol. I'm so lazy. I really don't care about the update soon thing, but more about people who are like, UPDATE FASTER! GYAHHH! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE! MUAHHHH!
Wielder of paperclips- I hate cliffies too! that's why I do them! so the world can feel my pain!
Those are half the reviews! when I finish, I'll write the other half. wait patiently for the rest of the story!
Oh yeah, since it seems ther is a new rule that I can't have a chapter consisting of only author notes...
Disclaimer: I don't own Shaman king
Prelude to next chapter!
Ren and Pirka were still locked in the basement.
The end!
Frank S.