Hi everyone! I have finally sorted out the problem with my computer, and can edit my fics now! Hurray! I was wondering if I could ever put that odd dividing bar in one of my fics again… Alright, this poem is about Gozaburou…I hate him, he sucks but I must have a few chapters for him at least. Read on.
Disclaimer: I don't own YuGiOh because I just don't, okay? What is with you!
Gozaburou…
The very name brings bile upon my lips
For you caused my crushing apocalypse.
My world collapsed because of your cruelness
And you are the reason for my icy coolness.
Gozaburou…
I saw you as I stood by the lone door
And wondered what I was waiting for.
You were a devil who I challenged there
I waited for you, why the hell did I dare?
Gozaburou…
The chess game stretched to hours to me
But seemingly minutes to you, my destiny.
I played my final winning move to win
That was the day my suffering would begin.
Gozaburou…
I know now that you lost your beloved son
And that was why you had come undone.
But that was no excuse for any fuss
And won't excuse the way you treated us.
Gozaburou…
Ignoring Mokuba, you focused on my skill
And I was driven; made to bend to your will.
You wanted me perfect; I just waited; hopeful
For a time that to me would seem truly beautiful.
Gozaburou…
I longed to erase that cursed, sudden adoption
For you filled my mind with such corruption.
Now I am cruel like you; icy and statuesque.
Remembering the lashes as you beat me on the desk.
Gozaburou…
The scars you caused can never be all erased
And many a time my priorities have been misplaced.
When I find a long forgotten mark caused by you
I am disillusioned; disorientated and don't know what to do.
Gozaburou…
Mokuba and I hate you; why'd you re-enter our lives
And cause us to resent? I hate it when a devil survives.
But now you are so non-existent; erased; not meant to last.
And with you goes my caring and the fear of my old past.
Gozaburou…
That was a pretty good poem; certainly better than the last one! I got it done really fast too, in sixteen minutes! Normally it takes thirty minutes or more, but I guess I had loads of ideas for this chapter! Thanks:
Samuraiduck27 –I am very glad you liked it! Yeah, Noah is an awesome character, so perfect; yet like Seto so flawed by his timeless past. His living brain in that orb, his only body a virtual mockery of what her really was…I'd better stop myself; I could go on for pages… I will always keep up the work; be it wonderful like you said, or terrible. Thanks for reviewing!
HikariKayko –I am very glad you liked it! Thanks so much for your compliments and your praise, and for reviewing!
Computerfreak101 –Aw, it was really that good? Thanks so much CF101! You rock; I hope I updated soon enough for you! Thanks for reviewing!
Black Dragon of the Bayou –I am glad I have consistency! Noah is my fourth fave character…and to me honestly there is no character as perfect or as ideally intriguing as he is. Should he be a permanent character he would be my second fave, but as he leaves, I kept Seto second. Your welcome! I had no idea about Jeke until early this year, and at first I though he was a girl because all I had seen were pictures of him with his pink hair and girly eyes but then I saw a picture of him with no top on and that cleared things up a lot. (My eyes were scarred!) I used to admire Goku (though Vegeta, (love him) Trunks (Love him more!) and Gohan (he's awesome!) were better!) a lot when DBZ was my fave series. And Serena is an awesome character, I know, but I just like Yugi more! Thanks for reviewing!
RoseGoddess874 –Aw, thanks so much for your awesome praise! I am glad you liked it! I will check out your fics if they seem good, but I only choose fics with certain criteria, which is specified in my bio. Thanks for reviewing!
Yugi's Light Keeps Me Pure –Hey, just for a random question what did you have in mind when you came up with your username? I have a guess but I think it is wrong. I am glad to have updated too! Yeah, Noah rocks beyond all meaning; he's my fourth fave person! I use parenthesis's if I feel I want to add to a ling but not take away from the original rhyme or line. Thanks for reviewing!
ttSerenity –Well, that must be how the American grading system works. I think Australia is like a cross between England and America. My British cousin is eleven and he is in high school, and you are older than me and you are in year seven! Fantabulous? Is that a real word? No offence, but I'm confused because I typed it in on the computer and no red line came up to signify a false word…odd. Thanks for reviewing, HIV!
If I didn't respond to your review, I got it after posting this!
Love Sami.