Hi everyone! I am finally back! (Darkens eyes) I cannot believe this; I got flamed! (Ashton Kutcher shows up.) Ashton: Dude, you just got flamed! Me: Go away now or I will hurt you! Anyway, I hate getting flamed, it makes me feel so horrible…I want to ban them from the fic, but they are anonymous.…they could have been less harsh…Oh well, this chapter is about an episode in the Virtual World season, but hardly any mention of Noah, and you should remember what part I am talking about. Lots about Mokuba; people seem to like it when he's in a poem! Read on!
Disclaimer: I own neither YuGiOh nor Ashton Kutcher. (Dude, you just got Punk'd!) Oh, nor Punk'd.
The last dying thoughts that slowly ran through my head
Before my mind became useless, and my conscience dead
Were how you'd been there and kept me from being alone
But the thoughts flew away as we both turned to stone.
It wasn't fair, I'd still had life points, and I could have won
But he drew you; his trump card, and the battle begun.
Forced to choose between you or the duel's victory
And it was so hard to know I could be losing my company.
But harder was the thought that you'd be gone from my life.
And my thoughts paced, my mind ran, making a decision.
That you were worth more than any stock or provision.
That decision having been made, I told Noah my choice.
And then he laughed, but Yugi interrupted with his voice
Saying if we could get through to Mokuba, he'd be freed.
I didn't need that runt's help, in the form of a good deed.
But soon I realized he was right, and I called out to you
Mokuba, you once saved me, so what I said was true
About how you drew me the Blue Eyes, my inspiration.
You made me remember my dreams; I had a revelation
That if one picture by a child gave hope to me then
Then I could still survive; waiting for a time when
Gozaburou would have his back turned; un-expecting
And I would take over while he remained un-detecting
So thanks to you we escaped the madness; pain and abuse.
Free from a world that brought suffering and was obtuse.
You fell from Noah's clutches and I breathed in relief
'That nightmare was over' or that was my belief.
But as you looked at him, thoroughly and truly disgusted
That plainly and simply told Noah he was then distrusted
And you ran to me; arms outstretched, for our sweet embrace
I saw a maniacal look come over that little punk's face.
I'd been ready then, to show a public display of affection
But the virtual punk wasn't going to quit after his rejection.
So as you ran to me; smiling, I ignored Noah's smile
Not noticing the smirk, so bitter and utterly vile.
Just inches away you were, and I suspected nothing.
I should have known that Noah was planning something.
So now here we stand; statues of stone, mindless.
No more thoughts over which to care for and obsess
As I always thought nothingness would be eternal bliss
Now it suddenly seems terrifyingly endless being like this.
Don't think I didn't see that lone tear running down your eye
And don't believe that being like this doesn't make me want to die.
Ooh, I watched that ep earlier in the week; how sad for me! Oh well, anyway, here are the replies; thanks:
ttSerenity –And unlike you, I cannot sleep without my TV on or music on. Preferably Evermore or The Rasmus…they are good night songs…Thanks so much for the praise, and I will always keep dreaming! Thanks for reviewing, um…Nitrogen.
Samuraiduck27 –Really? Aw, thanks so much, I am glad you liked it that much! I hope to keep up the amazing work! Thanks for reviewing!
Stormrose Dewleaf –Yeah, I know, Yugi's Light writes the best poetry ever! Better than mine! I had a fairly good trip; I saw five seals and climbed a cliff right next to the ocean and I went fishing…all sorts of stuff. Thanks for reviewing!
Mariku-san –YAY! Mariku, you're back! I am so glad you liked it! Um, Yami's POV? Hang on (checks chapter) No, it was my POV! Or some nameless person watching Kaiba's whole life…Thanks for reviewing, you rock!
Rayyu –Well, you must have had some interest in them if you read them all up to chapter sixteen! To tell the truth, I don't like people like you; reading fics, then thinking that they don't like them, but then they read every chapter and decide to flame the writers. If you didn't like it why did you keep reading? I try to be as polite as I can with flamers, but I am losing my patience. May I suffer in and die in the burning flames of hell? I very well may, seeing as I am into that sort of stuff (Gothic) but I think you are more likely to deserve it. I am merely trying to express myself, and reviews like the ones you sent me crush my spirit and really make me feel terrible. If you ever sign up to fanfic net (god forbid) then you will know what it is like. Thanks for reviewing, but don't do it again unless you have something nicer and more creative to say.
Computerfreak101 –Yeah, drama is awesome! I know what you meant about those two lines; they were my fave lines as well! I thought it gave a rather sad ending to the whole thing really…Thanks so much for reviewing, you rock!
Ceribi Moto –I forgive you! I am glad you HAD to read those chapters! Are they honestly incredibly excellent? Aw, thanks! I loved your review; it is nice to have someone supporting me so much! You rock! Yeah, 'Thank You' was intended to be sweet; full of brotherly love…Thanks for reviewing!
Yugi's Light Keeps Me Pure –Really? Wow, WONDERFUL is awesome praise! Yeah…I like using questions at the start or ending of each verse. Sadly fanfic was screwy and I couldn't edit it, so it ended up all weird in the formatting, but oh well. Yep, everyone should remember when he was STANDING ON THE LEDGE OF A CASTLE! Ooh, Alicia Keys! Sorry, TV is on… I think those lines were everyone's faves, including mine! Glad you thought so! Deep and symbolic? Wow, that is just such an amazing compliment! Thanks for reviewing!
ttMai –Aw, thanks! I am so glad you really liked it! So they all sound like Seto? Good, I would hate it if they sounded like anyone else! What, you mean the guppy bit? What bit about Yugi didn't you think much of? Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
If I didn't respond I haven't gotten your review yet!
Love Sami.