Hi guys! Look, I'm really not feeling well, so I just want to warn you this isn't my best work, but if you could read it and review it that would really brighten my day! This is about the Spirit of the Ring looking back on his childhood and his ancient life. Read on.


Look at me in the corner there,

How weak and pitiful I look.

My eyes tremble under my white hair,

As my body shakes, yes, Ra, it shook.

And I began to cry as I watched the war,

Upon my village, my family.

What did the Pharaoh attack us for?

And why were we so crucially,

Part of the Items Millennium,

That took our lives, took our death?

Where was this place that I had come,

To rest my legs and pause my breath?

They taught me how to thieve,

And the scared boy was no more.

I now knew what to believe,

And why my heart was so sore.

Upon the death of my innocence,

I swore revenge upon my foe.

And through my solid arrogance,

No one saw the torture below.

My screaming soul, it writhed inside,

And I would never let it out.

And as a thief, I had to hide,

And I could never cry or shout.

For enemies lurked all around,

In the bushes, trees and they all knew,

How to walk without a sound,

And they would make quick work of you.

They hid and waited for my troop,

Of thieves and robbers, men so brave.

And ambushed my forbidden group,

There were very few that I could save.

But I rebuilt, I stood again,

And as for thieving, I was king.

I took all the bitter pain,

Like I do now inside the Ring.

Yet no one ever sees me,

I lurk inside the purest mind.

And though it really needs me,

It would rather I be left behind.

So while you watch the sobbing boy,

With eyes so fearful, terror imminent,

And clutch your worn out childhood toy,

Remember the boy was confidant,

Once the chaos had to end.

Remember the fearful merriment,

And remember, I'm death, your best friend…


Well, that's about it. Please review! Thanks:

Rin-almighty-yaoi-lover –Hey Rin! Glad you liked the chapter! I update too fast? Sorry, but I like to keep the readers satisfied, I hate it when authors don't update stories for months. Once, one authoress did that, and when she did update she ended it that chapter, and it was a cop-out because she was sick of the story and couldn't be bothered making it a lot better. I do NOT want to be like her! Anyway, thanks for the review! By the way, I'm extra glad you liked my story for you! I put it up a bit earlier, just because I knew you couldn't wait to see it. My little one-shot for you got me seven reviews in one day, thanks!
I owe you! You were, naturally, the first reviewer for it! Everyone liked it, and a few people said they hoped you liked it too! Thanks!

Stormrose Dewleaf –Hey Stormrose! I'm glad you thought that the last chapter was cool! I don't think it unnerved anyone, if it did, they didn't review. Thanks for the review!

ttSerenity –Glad you liked it, and that you picked out your fave line! My personal fave was: 'of hells feared devils, the devils hounds, Corrupt you with their painful sounds.'
By the way, did you add that science remark to spite me? What is with the acid, woman? Gah! No offense, but it drives me mad. Thanks for the review!

Dark Magician Girl Hikaru –Brilliant review! You like long and psychotic? Cool, so do I! Oh well, I know about the links not being shown properly. I get so annoyed when I can't get to one of my fave fics because the link is down. It really makes me angry…Glad you liked chapter thirteen and fourteen.
Don't apologize for your little bit of ranting, it made the review better! I like little rants! Thanks!

Thank you guys so much for reviewing! I've got the best reviewers in the world!

Love Sami, Ryou's Hikari.