Hey! I've decided to update about twelve hours earlier than usual, it's like six thirty in the morning where I am and I'm tired as anything! Still sick and I hate it. This chapter is dedicated to Flidar, who reviewed so many times, and inspired me to write this poem. Thanks! Read on!
Disclaimer: I don't own YuGiOh, Bakura or Ryou. I own a light, but it's a different sort of light than what Bakura's talking about.
I am the shadow that watches while you fall asleep.
I am the shadow that through darkness shall creep.
I am the shadow that keeps you safe through the night.
I am the shadow that loves you, and you are my light.
I am the darkness that when you're scared holds your hand.
I am the darkness that nobody could ever understand.
I am the darkness, and yet, half of me seems so bright.
I am the darkness that needs you, and you are my light.
I am the thief that can see you, while to me, you are blind.
I am the thief who would leave all your sanity behind.
I am the thief that has nothing, except this cruel plight.
I am the thief that ravishes you, and you are my light.
I am the spirit that possesses you, and makes you feel pain.
I am the spirit that makes you feel lonely once again.
I am the spirit that may leave you tonight.
I am the spirit that holds you, and you are my light.
I am the killer who frees you, and keeps you with me.
I am the killer who confines you in jealousy.
I am the killer who stopped killing to make you feel alright.
I am the killer who keeps you, and you are my light.
I am the sinner who loves you more than anything I know.
I am the sinner who's blind from your emanating glow.
I am the sinner who, against you, I had to fight.
I am the sinner that loves you, and you are my light.
There you have it! Anyway, I'll make this quick. Thanks goes to:
Flidar –You reviewed like, nine times! Okay, I'll start from your first review and work my way up.
It was really eleven days since I started this thing? Wow, seems like longer. I'm really glad you liked them! I cannot believe I made you cry, and you thought it was Kura's best poem! Wow, thanks! I'm really glad you love the Ryou and Bakura pairing, they're my fave pairing too! They belong together. An angel and a demon. He is possessive about Ryou, you're right, and he's in denial. I know, I hate the one review per chapter rule! Once I accidentally pressed send review without having written anything and afterwards I couldn't go back and review that chapter! Gah! Yeah, those death glares are dangerous; you want to watch out for those. They do understand each other, at least a little bit. But they both lived in the same millennia; died in the same millennia…it all works out. No, I don't think Kura would ever bow to Pharaoh. You're addicted? Wow! No ones ever said that they're addicted to my poems! Thank you so much! By the way, I ADORED that little skit with Bakura and Ryou and you, and the expensive immortality water! I hope you both caught Ryou so he can be with Bakura. One more thing, can I have some immortality water, so I can be with them? I am Ryou's Hikari, after all! They could not be whole without me. About that story you were thinking of, I would LOVE it if you used my poems! You are welcome to every one of them as long as you give me credit! Don't worry, you spelt unconsciously right.
If you want me to help you, I'm sure I could, only how could you get the story to me? Do you want me to email you with my email address, because my email isn't displayed on my bio, so you'd have to wait for my email first if that's the case. By the way, where do you live? Your bio is completely empty, no writing. There is a minimum age for being an authoress, you have to be thirteen, but don't worry, loads of people are underage on this site, and I might be one of them, you never know…Thanks for all the great reviews! I took up more space in your review response than in my poem! Scary!
Dark Magician Girl Hikaru –I'm really happy you liked it; I like my poems to be dark and intriguing. Sorry about keeping you up any longer than you should be. Thanks for the review!
Sakina The fallen Angel –Hey Sakina! I'm so excited to get a review from you! How have you been? Poor you, you have exams? It's times like that; when other people have exams that I say "It's good to be young!" I'll keep writing. If you don't want death to be your best friend, death will gladly go away, if you just ask it. You're being unjailed on Thursday? YAY! Can't wait! Did you get my last email? Email me! Thanks for the review!
Rin-almighty-yaoi-lover –Really, you wanted to be the first reviewer to your story that much? I cannot wait for the Bakura and Ryou story! Thanks for hoping I get better! I need it, I'm still sick today. Thanks so much for the review. I'd keep writing, but my mum no longer lets me stay on the computer past seven in the morning, and that has already passed. Bye!
I got a LOT of reviews! Thanks guys! You're all the best reviewers in the world! Oh, and check out my other fic, Domino City Karaoke Contest!
Love Sami, Ryou's Hikari.