Hi everyone! Well, this is the next chapter. Sorry for not updating, fanfic net won't let me edit my stories before I post them. If you want to win a plushie next chapter, you have to tell me which cheek Akefia has a scar on! I added a competition just for fun! Not for every chapter though. This poem is an acrostic poem with a few haiku's as well!
Disclaimer: I own YuGiOh! MWAHAHAHA-and I really need to practice that! Thanks for reading my nonsense.
Battlefields don't sway his choices, and everything he does is in vain.
And
though he is so powerful, he can't escape the past and it's
pain.
Kuru
Eruna haunts his mind whereas once it haunted his dreams.
Under
no threat would he kneel to you; no matter how vain it seems.
Run
for your life, he's coming and you better be so well prepared.
As arrogantly as he runs his hands though your hair, his pain is equally shared.
A thief of few words
Echoing his deadly cry
Deadly to the eye
Legendary soul
Caught upon the winds embrace
Like a tattered leaf
Gold, jewels and treasure
All of these things he does steal
Swiftly running by
Silent and haunting
Like a forgotten nightmare
Lost inside a dream
A soul so hated
In the Millennium Ring
Swearing his revenge
Invading presence
Taking over his light's soul
Like a dark aura
He's pained and guilty
Feeling like the blame was his
He is not to blame
Lost in the mortals
Can't he find his exit out?
Is he not that strong?
Well, that was all. I liked the Haiku's better than the acrostic. Thanks to:
Stormrose Dewleaf –I hate getting so little time on fanfic net before school. I try to go on the PC for ages so I set my alarm at six in the morning. Fanfic net would have to be my life, wouldn't it? Kill Tea, Aurora, go! I command you, insolent spirit. (Looks nervous as Ror goes mad) Um, bye, and thanks for reviewing! RUNNNNN!
Calmhorizon –Yeah, Bakura will be fine! He is strong, yet weak…yes, weak like a little tiger cub. By the way, I said all that in one of those fake Chinese accents from the movie Kung Pow-Enter the Fist! No; he isn't doing anything wrong at all; he is merely sending the wicked to a place where they can cause no harm! Bakura is an angel…my angel… (sighs about Bakura) Just a question; are you a Christian? I'm not, but whatever, right? Thanks for reviewing, love and peace!
ttSerenity –The backstreet boys are gay! Sorry, random comment. I loved your fave lines, they were awesomeness itself! Thanks a million for reviewing, um…thermal temperatures? (I'm lacking in ideas here!)
Dark Magician Girl Hikaru –You are very lucky! I got your review one and a half hours after I finished this, and it is only because fanfic net isn't allowing me to edit my stories that you managed to get a response! Hm, I rather thought (BTW, I'm listening to t.A.T.u at the moment, random comment of the review) that web of illusions was creative. No, Bakura was never evil; at least, not as evil as we thought! So your sister is ten? Hm, okay. Just wondering how old was all. My sister is three and is a pain in the neck! Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
Love Sami.
