Black Demon chapter three: Down flame me or I'll flame you back.
This chapter has a few different levels; one is the actual story and the other a review. Okay, they weren't being total gits but I've got a few things to tell you about your review. Number one, I know my story is confusing, that's why I've broken it down in to shorter chappies. Number two, if you were accusing me of being an anime Rave master fan I'm gonna have to ask you to not say it again; while the anime is good, I much more enjoy the manga. And what are you talking about? On the fourth to final panel on the chapter 'the longest day in Musica's life' he is thinking "Melodia...I just hope I'll se you again some day." And my final point, Reina is so not about thirty! How come her bio only says she's twenty-three and Musica's eighteen so that isn't a big gap. I'm sorry to have to make my stand and take up some story space but I couldn't stand being told some thing that's not true, It's like some one telling me that Musica was the worst character in all time! It's just not true! Oh and thanx about the grammar thing, I actually suck and get my work spell checked by word.
Any ways... Back to the story.
Hundreds of feet above Blues city the Oracion ship hovered. They'd been attempting to track Musica for ages. When Reina and Jegan had gotten in to a fight Haru and Elie had dragged the unconscious Musica back to the silver nights ship.
"Down there." Julius laughed as he pointed at a large flame down by the port. "Ah the beautiful destruction." He smiled stupidly.
"I think he's right." Reina said looking down over the in the direction of the apparent appearance of Musica. She smiled to her self as she looked down and saw what was going on. Musica was fighting with Haru. Not only was he fighting, he was winning. Nothing could beat the chaos dragon, nothing at least that Haru was in posesion, or even knew, of.
"Hn." Haja acknowledged Haru's need not to attack but he also saw that the Rave master would eventually strike, bringing down the, in his POV, best dark bring wielder there could've ever been. He had actually been a friend of the Rave master's that meant he knew his weaknesses, why he would or wouldn't fight people. It was an ideal plan and he had the two Gales to thank for that. Two best friends, turned against each other and eventually destroying each other, or so he thought. He didn't actually know why either Gale had died. 'It has begun.' He thought.
"I wanted to destroy that impudent little brat" Berial complained. Reina and Haja both looked at him in disgust, Julius didn't notice and Jegan just sighed at Berial stupidity.
"Oh shut it Berial, we don't want the Rave master dead yet anyways." Haja told him.
"We don't" Reina exclaimed. "Why not"
"And I would trust you people with that information" Haja turned to go back in to the ship. "We'll land and collect Musica. Then we must get going and make sure that no one follows us." Reina sighed and got ready for the landing.
"You don't like him around do you" Reina asked Jegan.
"I'm the dragon lord, not him."
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Musica stood looming over Haru. His silver sword ready to make the final blow. The dragon wrapped around Musica. As Haru looked up at Musica he noticed some of the differences, his eyes the subtlest. They were solid black, nothing, not even a reflection of the light. They were eyes of a soulless man; they looked like the dragon's eyes.
"Musica" Elie shouted from the sideline. "People were on that ship! Hebi was on that ship! If you don't get out of the way now he will definitely die, that's if he isn't dead all ready" Musica looked around at her. He opened his mouth to speak but didn't get a chance. Haja hit Musica to the ground.
"Rave master" Haja started"You needn't worry, for now you are aloud to live. We will kill you when we are ready to." Berial grabbed Musica's leg and pulled him across the ground back to the ship, grumbling all the way.
"Musica..." Haru winced as he sat up. He was bleeding and needed bandages, he had to be worse off then Musica had been in the fight against the guardian of King's tower.
"Haru" Elie called. She sat next to Haru and laid him back down. "Don't strain your self." She looked up at the Oracion six ship and then back at what had once been the Silver nights ship. Hundreds of people had started to look amongst the ruins. She hoped that Hebi and the other crew would be okay though she knew they probably weren't.
To be continued
He he… There are a few spelling mistakes so sos about them!
