(Changed some stuff in this chapter)
Hey people, me again! I'm not getting many reviews, but I looked on the hit count and about 14 people actually read the first chapter and then went on to the second, so I'm happy. It would be nice to get just 1 review, but that's okay.
Review Responses:
TheLadyG- Thank you so much for your kind review, I was a little worried about people not knowing GG very well, but you have reassured me. Truth be told though, I'm more worried about Gilmore people not getting the YYH stuff. Also, I just want to say that I love your story "Motherly Love" People reading this, if you're looking for a good YYHxHP story, check out "Motherly Love."
NOTES:
-I redid some stuff in the "Koenma" scene in the first chapter. Nothing important, but you can check it out if you want.
-This will be my last short update! I will probably submit a longer chapter (at least 9 pages) sometime next week, and if I haven't just e-mail me a reminder and I'll get right on it.
- I know that it would have to be 9:00 AM in Tokyo to be 8:00 PM when the gang got to America, but please just disregard the laws of time when you read that part.
-I forgot the disclaimer in the first chapter so here it is. Disclaimer: Guess what? I don't own ANY TV shows. It's a shock I know. I mean who would've guessed that someone didn't actually own the TV shows they wrote about on a fanfiction site? The name of the site is so terribly unclear, so I can see why you would think that
There you go! My sarcastic disclaimer. Now enough chitchat, on with the story. Oh, and I apologize in advance for any Gilmore OoC-ness.
----- With Lorelai and Luke -----
"Hi, it's Rory, I'm not here right now, Leave a message and I'll call you back. Bye. BEEP." Lorelai closed here cell phone angrily. The only thing she wanted to do was to tell her daughter her wonderful news and she couldn't get through!
"Something wrong?" asked Luke. "Voice mail." said Lorelai in explanation. "Oh." Luke nodded his head in understanding.
He paid the check and they got up to leave. While they were walking to the car in the parking lot Luke reached in his pocket. "Oh. I almost forgot, here's your ring." he said with a smile on his face as he pulled it out and gave it to her.
Lorelai opened the box and smiled when she saw the ring. "Luke, it's beautiful."
"I thought you might like it." said Luke with a smile.
They got in his truck and Luke started to drive home while Lorelai tried to call Rory for the 3rd time that evening. Suddenly Luke had an idea.
"Hey, my house is the other way." said Lorelai when Luke turned the opposite direction down the street.
"I know. I want to show you something."
"Luke, what could you possibly show me that would top the great thing that has happened tonight." asked Lorelai.
Luke just smiled at her and pulled up to the Twickham house.
"You wanted to show me the Twickham house?" asked Lorelai with a confused smile.
"No," said Luke "I wanted to show you our house."
"Our house?" asked Lorelai with a small laugh. Then she realized Luke was serious.
"Oh my gosh, Luke. You bought this house? But, I already have a house." said Lorelai a little worried.
"I know you have a house." started Luke, "but I always thought that if I ever got married and, you know, started a family," he said saying the last part in a tone that suggested he thought that probably wasn't going to happen anytime soon, "I'd want to live here. We don't have to move if you don't want to though, I know you like your old pla-"
Lorelai kissed him mid-sentence.
"Luke, this is fine" she said smiling. She had never been happier than she was right now.
"You bought us a house." she said staring at it in wonder.
------ With the Boys -------
"I can't believe the clothing store was closed!" shouted an angry Kuwabara.
After they had eaten, they boys searched around town for a clothing store, but when they finally found one, it was closed!
"Well, it is almost 9:00 at night here." informed Kurama.
"Oh yeah. I forgot about the time difference…"
"Trust you not to notice the moon was out instead of the sun." replied Hiei with a smirk.
"Ya' know what Hiei, one day I'm gonna-"
"Look, we're here." interrupted Kurama not wanting the fight to escalate any higher. He opened the mahogany door and they all walked inside.
"What do we do now?" asked Yusuke.
"I don't know about you idiots, but I'm going to bed." Said Hiei as he went up the stairs
"That's a good idea." said Kurama to Kuwabara and Yusuke. "It'll help us get adjusted to this time zone."
Kurama headed up the stairs to his room as Yusuke and Kuwabara completely disregarded what he had said and stayed downstairs to beat on each other and watch TV.
When Kurama walked past Hiei's room he saw through the open door that the window was open. He walked inside and looked out the window to see Hiei in the tree outside with the bandana covering his Jagan removed.
The Jagan eye closed and Hiei put the bandana back on.
"Find anything?" asked Kurama. Hiei jumped back inside and shook his head.
"No demons, but there were two really odd
energy signatures."
"Human ones?"
"Hn. That was the weird thing, I couldn't tell. I couldn't even see where the signatures were coming from."
"Hmm…" Kurama turned and left the room to go to his own.
'One odd energy signal might be the demon thief, but two? An accomplice possibly?'
Kurama got in to bed and fell asleep. Still pondering these strange clues.
---- Author's Note ---
Sorry again for the short chapter guys, remember, next week expect a much longer chapter. Don't forget to review!
