A/N:Hey yll!I've been through a lot this last weekend and it's been both tiring and exciting.For those of you who wonder what about,it had to do with adoption,first visits and lots and lots of crying...just a mushy sob story I blabbed to everyone once I got home late Sunday.But anywho,I've got some fresh ideas for this one and yes,more of what y'll expect!So,without further ado,here's replies!

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Ananomous:Funny.I've never known,seen or heard of that as a last name.But that's totally besides the point,I've read and even seen some of the other reviews you've left on other pll's storys.It's acutally called chain spam,but I'm not going to say anymore.You seem to point out some good points and the whole 'bad mood' thing kind of makes me suspicious.But I don't hold grudges!Just make sure you throughly read a story before doing something like that.This is place is about reading and supporting others trying to become writers,etc.

CelloSolo2007:Geez!OK,ok.I realize it seems I didn't quite get her name precise.That's my cousins name also and assuming that was close to how this Haley was spelled...I dunno.Snap descision,I guess you can say.But since it's not a radical change to anything,I wouldn't mind at all spelling it without the "I".Although I like "Hailey" better.I know the concept of making and 'spelling' things as right as you can.

MegaLaManiacOfTheNorth:Hmm...never heard of that song.Sounds cool though,I'll have to look into it sometime.Yeah,it seems that sooner or later something like this would happen here.Knowing chatrooms and other places you can get bashed at.Well,update you're story soon or if you have already since this weekend I'll have to read it then.Voodoo doll?You're so mean...but smart!Nah,it's not nice to go after someone like that.Revenge in moderation is bad enough,but too much is overwhelming.A quote?Not really,I come up with them sometimes.Like,Look on to the Dawn of the Future;ignore the Window to the Past.

YFWE:NOT FUNNY?That was on of the funniest,well-presented fics I've seen on this site!You have an awesome sense of humor.I have yet to see him put a fic on this site for us to view.Then again,it's the decision of this site if he's breaking rules or whatever.lolz,you 'almost' spelled his name right.Which,he didn't almost completely.But anywho,really hope you update soon and don't get bashed like that again.C yaz!

Worker72:Hey,been waiting for ya to review for a while!Yeah,that's where I'm aiming at.'Someone' had to make a change and she just seemed like the perfect target.You know,you should write a story someday too.I dunno,I guess it's just that I hate not getting to review other pll who review my stories.Call it a habiet,if you will...lolz!byez!

I'd do more...but I 'really' want to get on with the story,so here we go!

Continueing...

A distant voice echoed clamourously in Haley's already throbbing head,it had been faint at first,but now it was coming in more loud and clear by the second.She couldn't quite make out who the voice belonged to quite yet,but as the heaviness and numbness that her whole entire body had had to endure for however long she had been out started to lessen,the effects of what had happened before she was trapped and knocked out by the new Dark Dragon resufaced.And made her sit up so straight and suddenly,she almost fainted again,

"Whoa,whoa,kid.Take it easy,"Fu Dog warned her expeditiously,coming over to place cool cloth on her forehead,"You're still recovering."

"Recovering?"Haley repeated after him in a sort of daze,laying as still as a piece of cardboard upon thinking of her last memmories.

"Exactly,"He told her hurriedly,as he scrambled into the back of the shop to retrieve something,"You weren't pretty when they found you knocked out cold in that Muesm,"he tried to smile favorabley,as he came and handed her a glass,"Not meaning that in a bad way either."

"The last thing I remember..."Haley went off somewhat blankly,her face tightening in concerntration and absorbtion as she tried her hardest to recall the last thing that happened before she woke up back in the shop,"...was us fighting and then..."she went pratically pale,as she could finally get the last image of the Dark Dragon getting away with the Dragonite,"Where's Grandpa?Where's the Dark Dragon?How-?"

"Haley,"Fu cut her off firmly but understandingly,"He's been,"he sighed insipidly and climbed up on the edge of Haley's bed to explain,"First off,the Dragonite our new friend stole is the most powerful gem in the galaxy.It's that way because,whoever possess's it can control Dragons and since he has it,Gramps just took off and I couldn't snap him out of it.From what I've been hearing,all the Dragons around the world are being hypnotized and are being brainwashed into doing the new Dark Dragon's bidding and take over the Magic World."

"You're kidding?"Haley gasped with astonishment,starting to feel the strength to stand,"That's impossible...it's unlogical...Grandpa's one of the strongest Dragons out there!He wouldn't be affected like that by just a silly gem,not 'every' Dragon.It's completely wack!"

"Wack or no wack,"Fu argued coolly,his paws dug deep on his wrinkled gray hips,"There's a new threat in town,you were unable to stop him on you're first try,he's been forming an alligance of mesmerized Dragons since just a few hours ago and the rest of us are outta ideas."

Haley stopped to consider all she was being told.On one hand,she had tried her best to stop him and there just wasn't time to beat herself up over it anymore but on the other,she might have to pit againist other Dragons that might even be some of her friends and to make matters more differcult,she couldn't even barely scar thier so-proclaimed leader the new Dark Dragon either,

"Hey,"she paused from putting the empy glass of water on the counter and turned with a quirked brow,"How was I not hypnotized,Fu?"

"Because luckily the guys who found you sprawled out at the Muesm ,happened to come across some Anti-Dragonite that just happens to be a lot more common the regular Dragonite as they were leaving,Course,"Fu grinned a bit slyly,"We always have a little extra too."

"What's it look like?"Haley inquired further on curiously,wanting to know as much as she could about it before proceeding to use it.

"Heh,"Fu chuckled slightly,smoothing the bed sheet down some,"Now that's an easy one,just check right under you're nose!"

Frowning a bit at his uncomical sense of nearly dry humor,Haley took his advise anyways and glanced down anxiously to find a deep azure gemstone that didn't look quite like the other one,but more like it was cut from a mountain,hanging from her neck by a green ribbon that seemed to have been already on it.When things started to make sense without her having to ask,the next thing that came out was more differcult and the thing that still stung most about asking it,was the fact that this all could have been prevented by having stopped him sooner,but as she opened her mouth.A feeling of ambition and intent flooded her,as she instead only asked him with a daring grin,

"I only need to know two things,"she stated to him with slight presumption,"Where's he hiding and how can I get there quickly?"

Here she goes...

Haley sighed with irratation,as she tried to recall where he suspected the Dark Dragon had gone with all of the hypnotized Dragons,it was a place where the Magic World began at and where the origins of where one would need to enter the Magic World who didn't know any other way would go to.But it was confusing and was sometimes regarded as a hoax,however,Fu had told Haley that one time when Lahoshi was a young teen Chinese Dragon,he had been there and knew for sure that it indeed existed,

"I know he gave me this Transportation potion to get to it,but this is my 2nd time in Spain,"she groaned inwardly to herself and holding up the nearly empty green bottle she had had to throw on top of her to teleport,wrinkled her nose and spilled the last of it's elments on her.

Gaping in awe,Haley couldn't help but gaze upon the wide spread land of nothing but grass and rows of different assortments of perculiar-looking flowers.But something else caught her eye in the center of the place she had just wound up in,it was that of a golden palace adorned with patterns of gemstones ranging from sapphires,rubies and emeralds all around it's edges.Standing at least ten flights high and a long-wrapping porch that went around it.If there was an enterance to where someone could access all things magic,this was it.

"I've got nothing to lose,"Haley reminded herself impellingly,knowing that it was slightly her fault for letting him get away,"Except..."

She trailed off on purpose and fixedly started to make her way up the long and narrowing gold flight of stairs,but as she suddenly remembered one of the most rewarding privlages of being a Dragon,slapped the palm of her hand on her face and calling "Dragon up,",ascended to the top in a matter of only about half a minute.With a start,she carefully started to pass the large golden pilers that stood about 10 feet apart and made her way into a large room where she wasn't the least bit surprised to see all the Dragons she had ever seen before,over three-hundred of them,standing obediently together in long army-like lines that started in the front and went back farther into the long room.They were surrouned by what appeared to be a black eletrical-barred prison and completely unaware of what was there.

"This was eaiser then I thought,"Came an all too creepingly familiar voice,as the Dark Dragon flew into sight from a balacony on the right side of the room and was joined by what appeared to be two Huntsclan members in front of the cage as he landed,"All I had to do was snatch the only remaining piece of Dragonite to control these weak-minded simpletons,"he grinned corruptedly,"Since it was only gossip that was going around,some didn't take my arrival on to the sceene seriously enough.And now even the ones that did,are now mine to control as I wish and even more so,I will plunge both worlds into submission and I will take my Grandfather's place in no time."

Just his words made her shiver with horrid thoughts of what he might do to anything and anyone who stood in his way and the fact that he had defeated her so easily in thier first battle ever,didn't make it anymore reassuring.But another part of her knew that it was her duty to try and stop him.She owed it to herself and everyone who believed in her to try.Of course,it was true that she hadn't ever faced such a formidable challenger in her life.But then again,she knew she could do better once she got into it more.

"Hey tough guy,"She called down at him audaciously,rising into the air and then gently floating down just a few feet in front of him,"You might want to put some of those plans on hold,"she narrowed her eyes readily on him,"Because it might take you a while to get to them."

Yeah,she is a pretty bold fighter isn't she?But will she be able to stop the new Dark Dragon's now unveiled plans to take over not just different sections and places of the Magic World,but also the oblivious world of humans.Wow,I'm really into this!Well,I won't give too much away except that next ch. she f-uh...then she goes and trys to fin...um.OK,I'll just end this now before I blurt it all out.Stay tuned!

LP