Whole at last
Disclaimer: Read Chapter 2
Chapter 3 is here! Whoohoo! I am so happy! Yeah! Ok, this is where the story starts to gather up some speed and real interesting this start to happen. What could they be? Hehehe…You'll have to read to find out! Ok, I'll shut up so you can start reading now.
Final Version (Even if it does have errors and stuff)
Here we go again!
Whole at last
Chapter 3
"Wait! Touya don't go!" Sakura was the first to react after Touya shared his decision with everyone. He was not going to her wedding. 'Why not?' She thought and then started running after Touya. She was not going to let him do that to her. He was her brother he had to be there. Even after what had happened.
Everyone else followed Sakura but sadly they were all too late. Touya had already left and the only thing he left behind was the sound of his motorcycle that was soon fading away in the horizon. Sakura started to cry again, she had lost all hope. But not her fiancé, he was not going to let Touya ruin Sakura's life or even day, and much less their wedding. He swiftly jumped on a roof.
"Wait!" Sakura said, "Where are you going?" It did seem odd to her that Syoran was on top of a roof, he hadn't done that in so long.
"Isn't it obvious? I'm going to find him and kick his ass for making you feel this way." He then started jumping towards Touya's direction.
"Hold on! I'm going with you!" Yukito had transformed into Yue and immediately started flying in the same direction. Kero, without a word, transformed into his true form and followed. Then Eriol said:
"I think you should go too Sakura, because knowing Syoran he might really hurt Touya and I know you don't really want your own brother in the hospital."
Sakura wiped a few tears of her face and nodded. "Yeah, you're probably right. At least he would try to anyways… and since Touya doesn't have magic to protect him…" She sighed, 'Touya had given his powers so that Yue would live and now…. Now…'
"I'm going then"
"We'll go with you Sakura!" It had been decided, so now Meilin, Eriol, Tomoyo and Sakura ran in the direction that Kero, Yue and Syoran had taken to find them before it was too late…
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After a couple of hours Sakura and the others finally caught up with Yue, Syoran and Kero. It had been a long run and by this time it was already dark. They apparently had lost Touya and where discussing of how to ambush him at his apartment.
Then, all of a sudden something hit Meilin in her stomach. It was some sort of energy ball. Meilin was thrown with the impact to the trees that where fairly behind the gang. Meilin as soon as she hit the tree was knocked unconscious. Tomoyo ran to see if Meilin was OK while everybody else started looking for what had hit Meilin. Both scared and curious to whom this attack came from.
In the shadows, a figure surrounded by an evil aura smiled, a figure that could be that of a man.
"Coward! Step out of the shadows!" Syoran yelled at the top of his lungs, he had not found the attacker yet but he could sense his presence nearby. "You're a damn coward attacking an defenseless girl!" Syoran quickly summoned his sword.
The figure, still smiling, slowly walked out into the light. It was a guy in his mid-twenties, quite handsome, with green hair and some muscle, but his most striking characteristic was his visible evil aura. He spoke:
"Sakura Kinomoto, you are the one guilty for my father's early death! You and your damned mother!" He gave Sakura and the rest of the gang a malicious look. "I promised my father on his death bed that I would find his killer and avenge his death!" He summoned an energy ball.
"What are you talking about? I. I don't. I don't even know you!" Sakura was scared not only for herself but also for the others around her.
"Hahaha. Don't act stupid! You know it was you and your mother who killed my father and almost killed me! Don't try to trick me into believing one of your lies!"
Sakura slowly walked sideways so that she would end up away from all their non-magical friends.
"Look, whoever you are! Sakura did not kill your father! She has nothing to do with you! So go away before you end up hurt!" Syoran said, but he could sense this guy's aura, even worse, he could see it and knew that the enemy was too powerful for him and if he set his mind to it, which he apparently already did, he could kill them all.
"Hahaha! You! Hurt me? That's just hilarious! I would like to see you try!" He immediately threw an orb to Sakura and another one to Syoran. Sakura used the shield card so that she and Syoran would be protected but the orbs were too powerful for the card and the orb made a great crack in the shield, another hit and it would be broken.
"Sakura!" Yue and Kero screamed at unison. Without wasting any time, the strange guy threw a third orb to finally break the shield. Kero and Yue tried to protect Sakura by becoming living shields for her and Syoran but it was impossible. Eriol cast a spell but even his strong magic was no match for the three orb's power combined. When the smoked cleared, you could see everyone on the ground badly hurt. No one was standing but the stranger, the blast had been so strong that even Meilin and Tomoyo got at least a piece of its power. The stranger was laughing histerically.
"Well, well, well. My father told me you were very strong, but I guess he was just weak. Hahaha! "
All of the gang tried standing up, but they were in so much pain and so badly hurt that they could not even move an inch. They could only watch that evil stranger and hope for some kind of help.
"I guess this is the end." He chuckled. "For the finale, I shall use a half of all my power to make sure none of you make it out alive. Hahaha!"
The final orb, which was much bigger than the other three combined, was being held by the guy with both of his hands which where on top of his head. He was laughing. The orb grew even more.
"Goodbye Kinomoto!" The orb was released from his hands. And it quickly moved towards Sakura, it was going fast, gaining speed and mass as it went. Getting closer and closer by the second. It got closer and closer. And closer.
"AHHHHHHHH!" Everyone screamed.
The End
Ok, I wanted it to end with a cliffhanger just like the last version.
Who is the stranger? Why does he want to kill Sakura? Does he have any connection with Nadeshko? To find out tune in next submission to find out! Remember same channel, same time, same place, same story but next chapter.
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What'd ya think of the new version? I fixed a lot of mistakes and added or took out various sentences that make the chapter run more smoothly. I hope you enjoyed it!