Whole at last
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Whole at last
Chapter 4
The orb crashed into something, something that was not Sakura or any of the others, and it exploded. A blinding light fell upon all Tomoeda because of such crash. When the light finally faded there was a shadow in front of Sakura and Syoran. They adjusted their eyes after that light and they saw…Touya. He held his arm straight with his hand open. He had suffered no apparent damage.
"Touya!" it was the only thing hat Sakura could mutter.
"What? Touya? What, what are you doing here? Why did you protect her! The killer of my father! Why?" the stranger knew Touya and was very surprised to seem him act like that, and even more surprised because of Touya's power. Because of the appearance of his friend the stranger was losing his composure. He realized then that Touya was so powerful that he could be able stop an attack that contained all his energy with ease. 'Why did I not know this before? His power… How come I could not sense it before!' His mind was racing, of all the years of knowing Touya he had never even sense a bit of his power.
"She's not the one that you want, Alex" Touya said calmly "she is my sister. I am the one you are looking for" He stood straight and looked at him, waiting for an answer.
"What?" Sakura and Alex said at the same time.
"Well, I'm technically not the killer of your father. My mom was…" Silence surrounded them "But you have to understand, she did not mean to kill him. He wanted to take over the world. My mom… she was the one destined to stop him. But… she was killed in the battle as well… just as he was!" Touya hated remembering that part of his past, it was too painful for him.
"No! You are lying! Your mother attacked my father! Ambushed! And your mother killed him! With out any remorse!" Alex was trying to keep standing, but his legs could not hold on any longer and he fell.
"No, Alex. She was just trying to protect the ones she loved" Touya said in a calm voice walking towards the fallen stranger.
"Liar!" Alex was starting to cry "Then…then you are the one I'm supposed to kill?" Alex looked up.
"Very well then, I will. I promised to my father that I was going to destroy his killer and I'm going to honor that promise!" Alex finally managed to stand up and he raised his hand and a very small orb appeared "I'm going to kill you, Touya Kinomoto" The name full of hate. He then threw the orb at Touya, but he didn't even need to move, the orb disappeared before it got to Touya.
"Fine" Touya said. He was not happy with this arrangement. "You can try, but you won't succeed. I guarantee it" He then turned around to walk over to Sakura.
"Hahaha, do you think I don't know your secret?" Touya looked back to Alex to hear what he had to say. "I know what your weakness is, Touya" Again, hate filled every syllable.
"You may have great strength, magical power and whatever you may want but…your heart is not strong enough." Alex smiled "I know for a fact that, "Alex paused for a dramatic effect " if you use all of your power, all of it, your heart will not be able to go on…it will stop…Hahaha. It'll just stop beating! Hahaha" Touya continued to walk towards Sakura and said:
"You think that's my weakness? I don't know how you found out about such thing, but it's not true. Who told you that? Your father?"
"Oh, it is true. That is why Nadeshko died, wasn't it? Heart failure? Hahaha, I know your weakness, and I'm going to kill you, even if that's the last thing that I do!" Then, Alex disappeared, just like that. Into thin air he vanished without a trace.
Everyone was silent trying to digest what had happened when Tomoyo screamed, terrified.
"Meilin! Wake up!" Meilin had been badly hurt before the battle had even started and now, she was barely even breathing. Touya and the rest gathered around her. They tried to listen to her heart but it had a weak beat.
They were all scared for her life, the hospital was too far away and if they tried to move her she could die…
Everyone was crying, Meilin had been awfully quiet lately and they didn't really pay much attention to her, with the wedding and Touya and all. Now, with the fact that she was about to die, they all regretted their ignorance and their selfishness.
Her natural blush was starting to fade and her face was now white, just like a ghost.
"Meilin, please don't die, please" Syoran started crying even more, he couldn't stand how useless he was to her right now.
Who would have thought, that, that day was their last with Meilin, no one imagined it…
And now, there was no way of saving her…
She was gone…
The End
The same cliffhanger from last version.
How'd ya like this one? Of course, there has been no major change yet because I haven't found any. But I suspect that when the leader of the Li clan appears I might change some of that and what comes after. I hope you enjoyed less spelling and grammar mistakes and some other stuff that I changed! So long!
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