Disclaimer: Naruto, unfortunately, does not belong to me.
Warnings: Crappy writing. Random drabble. I'm not a writer…sorry? x.x; First finished fanfic. Shounen ai. Go away if you don't like it.
Breath
…I love you.
A tight smile.
A hitch of breath.
Why me?
Hesitant disbelief.
I don't know…I don't know anymore!
Eyes rove around wildly, everywhere but blue.
…What about your clan?
An aversion of eyes.
Does it matter? I've stopped caring long ago! All I care about is you. I love you. I love you! I can't stop. I used to care, I used to deny it, but all that doesn't matter anymore. All I know is that I love you.
Crescent imprints on flesh.
Water drips.
Agonizingly slow.
Lips part.
…
A touch of metallic tang on tongue.
…I understand.
A flutter of eyes.
A bitter twist of lips.
A turnabout.
Withdraw.
…Do you mean that?
Painful hope.
A sudden stop.
...hn.
A touch of red.
The sun shines brilliantly for the first time in months.
A drop of water.
A step.
A touch.
A brush of lips.
A/N:
I have no idea how I got the guts to post this. -nervous as heck- (I wrote this over a month ago…)
Eh…I hope that made sense. If it didn't, ask:D (I can see the whole thing clearly in my head…but I'm bad at putting it down in words. I'll explain what happens…just email me or leave your email.)
This was a random burst of inspiration at 2 in the morning from reading too much sasunaru fanfiction. I should've been finishing my paper for summer school, but I (obviously) procrastinated due to boredom and lack of motivation. So I'm not really thinking coherently.
Hmm…first sasunaru fanfic too. Last fanfic I wrote was about 5 years ago. This one's the first one I've ever finished. oo; I guess in a way, this is my first fanfic (does that hopefully explain the cruddiness?).
Much love to midgetpanda for betaing!
Geez…the A/N is longer than the actual story. How sad. ;
Constructive criticism would be appreciated:)