Yo, everyone! see, i gave a very fast update! anyhow the votes are still on..(for the votes thing, please refer to botom of chapter 1)So far there's 5 votes on the HxK pairing(yay), 3 votes asking for this fic to touch upon HieiKurama friendship(dang, i really can't decide between thsi two),1 vote on YusukexKurama pairing(i'm not against this but well...i have not written in Yusuek's POV) and sadly enough 1 vote asking me to delete this fic!
Author's note: Um..actually this fic will focus more on Kurama...the pairings and stuff will be there but most probably will not be the main topic unless i write it otherwise..
Author's note 2: I really hope that everyone who reviews will be kind enough to place their votes. please, i really need it!
Review response:
Kikira-san: I'm gonna try my best not to make it stereotypical! as for whether Shiori rejects our beloved bishounen,Kurama or not, well, just readon.If you are not satisfied with it, you can kill me after i complete it!;;
AristocraticAssasin: C huh? i really can't decide between c and b..hehe..but well, we'll see...
AnimePrincess: O.O o..k...we'll see how the votes go first...and uh..see, i post another chapter a few hours later! good, no?
Zakou Kitsune: Yeah, Hiei x Kurama rules! thanks!
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chibikuro rose-sama: yeah, they're cute...here's the next chapter. Enjoy.
Tenshi No Koori: Here ya go..chapter 2! yay, b rules!
emma: O.O no vote?oro..never mind..yeah, read on..don't worry, the story mainly focuses on just that..the pairings stuff are imporatnt but the story will still go on fine without that.
Jessica: thanks...no vote?
PhsychoticAnimeStalker: Hmm..we'll see...everyone's entitled to an opinion. no?
KyoHana: hehe, hopefully her reaction is not the stereotypical kind of reaction...read on and you'll see!
As for the pairings stuff, well...yeah, in my humble opinion, i don't see other much pairing options really, buthey, that's what the votes are for, no?
Words of A Broken Core
by silveryoukoshinomori
Chapter 2: Hidden Concern
One Month Later
"Hiei, Koenma has sent a message asking you to report to Reikai. Apparently the Reikai Tantei has been reestablished."
"Hn."
"Hiei, hisashiburi! Woah, I see you've gotten taller! How have you been? Gotten any stronger?"
"Hn."
"Hah, the shrimp is still as monosyllabic as usual, huh?"
"Oaf, still as foolish as ever, I see."
"What! I'll show you..!"
"Hn. Where's Kurama?"
Hiei's POV
At that, I noticed the Detective's face grew somber. I tried to hide my slight concern by putting on an impatient glare.
"Well, I think he's not doing so well. You see.."
"Talking about me?"
All of us turned around, startled. Damn, I barely felt his youki. He had masked it so well.
Not doing so well? I don't see anything wrong with him.The faint youki that he could not masked entirely seemed darker, though…more somber.
"Trying to bore a hole in me, Hiei? How about settling for the traditional greeting?"
"Hn."
I turned away, still observing him out of the corner of my eye.
His smile. There's just something not quite right about it. It's just too…normal. Yet there's an underlying sense of strain that I could not quite put my finger on.
Hn. Whatever it is, it's none of my business.
review, please?votes will be on till the 4th chapter. Yes i have it all written out. Just waiting for you guys' opinions on how it should go...
The vote options are available as below:
a) shounen ai, Yusuke x Kurama
b) shounen ai, Hiei x Kurama (my vote is on this!)
c) more towards close friendship between Hiei and Kurama (i can't decide now..)
d) delete the story!(don't do this to me TT)
e) i have no idea what is going on (O.O)
so, whatcha waiting for? review and vote! please comment on my fic too! Arigatou gozaimasu!