Hello everyone, my name is Safety Pin. I'm a writer, no doubt like you, and am looking for some input, some tips, you know the drill.
Btw, the first chapter has no Inuyasha, Kagome, Sango, Miroku, Shippo or otherwise in it, for which I apologize. But there needed to be some setup. So if you feel so inclined, I've made a summary of what happens in the first chapter for you. That way you can skip directly to the second chapter to meet the gang if you so desire.
BRIEF SUMMARY OF CHAPTER ONE FOR THOSE WHO DON'T WANT TO READ ANYTHING WITHOUT INUYASHA:
Courtney and Tack go to highschool together. Courtney is a cheerleader, very popular, blonde, stately. Tack is a loner punk, red hair, aggressive, likes sports, kind of moody. They hate each other, which only intensifies after Courtney commandeers the photography lab, Tack's pride and joy. After a squabble by the mysterious well behind the school, Tack gets riled and punches Courtney into the well accidentally.
Tack insinuates that people actually hate Courtney, not love her. Courtney then says, "So is it true that your mom started fucking the principal after your dad commited suicide? Cause your pretty screwed up. The apple doesn't fall far from the tree." This is what sets Tack off.
Courtney grabs Tack on her way down and the two go careening into the darkness, only to awake in the Sengoku Jidai. Courtney is pretty bruised from Tack's mighty punch and stays huddled on the floor of the well while Tack goes up to explore, determined to find shelter for herself before nightfall.