I would just like to have a small shout out for everyone who had been reviewing my story so far. I promise that the very last chapter of this story (which won't happen for a while) will have better detail about where I was going in the story, and any questions you guys post in future reviews.

first I would like to apologize for all my grammar and spelling mistakes, I'm the type of person who has always done better in math and science, in fact I took a collage class in english through highschool, but grammer I took the lowest level since it's my weak side. Thank you everyone who has noticed it, I'll try my best to fix any mistakes I have made, or will make in the future, but you must remember I type fast and things such as (which there or their) are my weak points.

Second I would like to thank once again everyone who has been reviewing my story, I've been a huge Star Wars fan ever since I could remember and I've always throught what an outstanding epic that was laid out for us over the past thirty or so years...so call me a dork, lol it's more of a hidden favorite thing of mine, but I feel as if these films are gonna be remembered long after their time.

Third, I would like to answer some questions that one of my favorite reviewers has posted over last (and yes very shocking chapter) Vee017.

-Jut curious: Is that your poem or did you find it somewhere? It's lovely.

Have you ever seen the movie Eye of the Beholder? It also stars Mr. McGregor. It's a very strange but "out of this world." kind of film...I saw it around the time when it first came out with my sister who dragged me along...I also took some scenes and ideas from that film along with a song that plays over head when Ewan pays a visit to another lead character in the film. I've ever found out who sings the song...but if you ever watch the film you'll see the sort of mood I was looking for in the scene where Obi-Wan visits Padme in the hospital wing.

- It doesn't take the entire security detail to check an explosion. What of her personal guard? Naboo security just plain sucks.
Did Obi-Wan forget about his lightsabre in his panic? It could have cut the door open like nothing.

lol, yeah security detail does suck on Naboo, I had to write that somehow a great number of the guards were not in reach of Padme when the assassin attacks her, which leads to the explosion...in panic everyone in the building runs out since it was so big to see if anyone was hurt since Naboo is a rather peaceful planet and their not used to that sort of thing happening. I know it was written half assed, but I needed the queen alone, also with Obi-Wan and his lightsaber...he was to much in panic to even use it on the door, which shows what fear and love can do to your thoughts, I was going to write Obi-Wan killing the assassin with the lightsaber, but throught him killing him with his bare hands would be better...yeah I know, not the best fight scene, but it needed to be done.

-And instead of inducing labour while Padme's already so obviously weak, why wouldn't they do a C-section? Too much internal bleeding already? On the way to baby they could have went straight to fixing that I would have thought...she really didn't seem like she has the strength to give birth after the beating you described and her barely said "Obi-Wan" shortly after.

lol, well heres a surprise, I'm a twenty-one year old straight male who goes to collage lol, I just know the basics when it comes to childbirth, sorry girls I don't know that much about the whole thing, but I tried to write it the best that I could. The main reason I'm even writting this story is for my girlfriend Becca, She's head over heels in love with Ewan and found out that I was a member on fanfiction (I mostly write horror, zombies...ect) But she talked me into writting a love story (gag at first) but she told me I was a pretty good writter and how she always wanted to see Padme and Obi-Wan together, so as a favor I started to write (I hope I'm not making it to sappy girls) Becca's been helping me out as much as possible so some of the credit goes to her. What I wrote was Padme got injured, resulting in internal bleeding...by then Padme was all ready close to labor (even if it still was early) so there wasn't time for a C-section, she gave birth (which almost killed her) and the baby was fine, but also got injured and was to weak at that stage...so it stayed alive for about two hours before dieing...I read that newborns die all the time, there isn't even a reason, sometimes their tiny bodies give up.

-He was willing to give it all up for Padme and Baby Kenobi, and now...nothing? The dream wasn't gone. He ended it. Get back in that room Obi-Wan! How is she going to be happy without him? She'll be completely miserable when she wakes up. Probably blaming herself and he's gone. Go back to her! Dah! Obi-Wan needs to be slapped! They could always rebuild and try again.

Yes, the Jedi are cold when it comes to that sort of thing, they knew Obi-Wan loved Padme...and was willing to give everything up for her, but after talking with Mace and Yoda, they feared the dark side and danger towards Padme in the future and didn't want her harmed. They knew Obi-Wan loved her and knew that her young age she could still go on and try and live a normal life (meet someone else, start a new family) Obi-Wan went against the code, so they asked him...if he loved her he would leave and start the missions with Anakin...that was his place. Padme and him would try there best to forget and move on...just become friends and try not to cause anymore harm. Yes I know it isn't fair...after everything Padme has gone through...but just tune in for future chapters, then I'll be skipping forward to where we see them next in the film...ten years later in Attack of the Clones, which I throught I saw some tension between them during the whole film.'

-All I beg of you is to NOT make this story go down Padme/Anakin Land. Who needs canon? And we all know their whole relationship will be about sticking it to Obi-Wan. Some womanly vengeance, woman scorned, 'you-left-me-so-now-I'm-having-Anakin's-twins-so-I-can-die' storyline. Please don't do that. Please don't. It makes me sad when Obidala heads to Ani/Ami. So I think I'm going to stop my Anakin ranting for today because who knows, this may stay Obidala, the first chapter I re-read, read like the movie so I was a little scared it might go canon. Will it? Still scared. And depressed.

lol, well your just gonna have to tune in and see what happenes, I'm a pretty fast writter since a sequel to another story I wrote bombed, this is my main focus. To give you all some hints, I'm gonna show events that we saw in the films, and things we never saw before, trust me...it isn't over, and events that will take place will end with a new hope.

I hope that clears as much as I can say, I'm all ready working on the next two chapters, thank you very much for the reviews.