jurassic park the newer story

by ryoko queen of the kinky

ok this is my first story so youll have to go easy on me i added a few characters to it..hope ya like ill up date as soon as possible.

1. Chapter 1

Ryoko queen of the kinky note: this is my versions of the 1st and 3rd Jurassic park movies because I truly don't know much about the 2nd movie…but this first story of mine is base on the first movie. I will have a second and third chapter to this story and then ill move on to the third movie. Now for those people who are my friends reading this especially Jessica don't rag on me please because member this is my first posted story. And I say this to everyone PLEASE LEAVE A REVIEW!

Jurassic Park: the new version.

Allen Grant was gently brushing off the bones of a Velociraptor. He was easily studying it just looking at the sculpture of it.

The a helicopter landed a few hundred feet off of where Dr. Allen Grant and Dr. Ellie Sattler where researching for the many dinosaurs they could find. Out of the helicopter stepped John Hammond. "Hello Dr. Grant and Dr. Sattler." he said in a greetingly tone of voice. "What business do you have here?" Dr. Grant said in a concerned voice. "Well isn't that what I should be asking the greatest paleontologists ever."

Mr. Hammond said. "Well that's very flattering but, what business do you have with us exactly?" Dr. Sattler asked. "Well I don't suppose you've heard of my new park that is under construction?" he said with a smirk on his face. "No we haven't and why do we need to?" Allen said more forcefully. Before anyone else could say another word a young girl about the age of 12 came in with a young boy about the age of 12 also. "Daddy where have you been, Ben and I have been looking all over for you!" the young girl said hesitating.

"Greenly what have I told you about barging into rooms without knocking first?" he said questioningly. The young girl had appeared to be Allen's daughter and her name, Greenly. "Well I was worried about you…she began to weep. "Please don't cry sweetie I didn't mean to yell at you." he said in a nicer tone of voice. "I'm sorry for not knocking." Since the young girl appeared to be Allen's daughter the young boy was Ellie's son Ben. "who is this nice man?" Greenly said with curiosity. "We are about to find that out for ourselves." Ellie said. "Allow me to show you my park…..Jurassic Park where the dinosaurs are real."

They all took the helicopter to an island somewhere near Puerto Rico.

so what do you think so far….yes I know it didn't have much in this chapter but I promise you you'll love the next one! oh and don't forget to review!