Now for the reviewer responses.
Uber Spoonz: thanks for the review, you're my first reviewer awesome
Dark and one other: I think that's your user name I don't know because I'm just getting used to writing stories and answering reviews, anyway. Thanks for the review. And I will be updating the first few chapters fairly quickly because I have already started writing this fan-fiction on a different site. I have done five chapters on the other site but I am putting them together so it isn't as short.
I think that is all so… thanks to everyone who reviewed my first fan-fiction on this site.
Chapter one:
Zelda and link managed to sneak through town without any big commotion like everyone saying, "The king and queen are in the town."
They got to the orphanage and went inside. They went to the orphanage owner and told him what Rauru told him and they also told him if anyone one asks they didn't speak of the Triforce.
"So, how old is the youngest child here?" Zelda asks.
"Well the youngest boy here would be Rieko, he is 9 years old," the owner said.
"Oh, and don't mind the blind fold around his eyes he isn't blind he just has different color eyes, he only did that so the kids wouldn't make fun of him." the owner stated.
Zelda suddenly felt a surge of pity through her body when the owner told her that. The owner led you outside to where Rieko were sitting. You walked up behind Rieko.
"Hi" Rieko said turning around. You felt a bit surprised that he new you were there but you put it aside and decided that this boy was good with all of his senses unlike most people.
"Have you come to adopt one of the kids, queen of Hyrule?" you asked as you got up and bowed.
"H-how did you know," Zelda said surprised.
"I could here your voice from inside the house and I new it was yours when you mentioned the Triforce." you said.
"Oh," was all Zelda said still recovering a bit from the surprise.
"Oh," the owner cut in," the king and queen have come to adopt you." your expression was first surprised then confused and then happy. You had so much mixed emotions right then and their.
"Now, go get your belongings that you have here," the owner said kneeling down. You ran up to him gave him a quick hug then ran into the house and to your room. Zelda and link looked at each other while they were holding hands, both with huge smiles on their faces.
You ran upstairs as fast as you could. You started feeling around for the right door. You found the right door in a matter of seconds and started packing your weapons and some books into your bag. You carefully put your sheathed sword in the bag. The sword was a very old sword and looked worn out and probably couldn't even slice through an orange but you still liked it, Then the Kitensu. (A/N Kitensu a rod and then one scimitar on each end. if you've played tales of symphonia and beat Yuan then that's Yuan's' weapon) Then you started putting in your bow and arrows and your books in, one was called Hyrule legends and another one was called mysteries of Hyrule. One of the books you had delt with healing magic and stuff.
You ran downstairs with your bag in hand with all your possessions that you had in it. You walked beside your new parents and said goodbye to the orphanage owner.
Zelda and Link, your parents, put their dark cloaks on and with the hoods up. Then all of you walked out of the orphanage, with you holding your bag in one hand.
"Why are you wearing those cloaks?" you asked your father, hoping that it wouldn't be a bad reason.
"Because we don't want top start a big commotion in town," your father said, while keeping up a quick pace.
"Oh," you said simply, looking up at him then looking back to where you were going.
"Wow the castle is so big," you thought getting lost in your own thoughts. "I wonder what it will look like inside," you thought, "And if there will be any maids there. What am I thinking of course there will be maids there."
"We're almost at the gate," your father said interrupting your trance-like state of thought.
You, and your new foster parents, the king and queen, walked up to the gate. Surprisingly the guard just opened the gate and let us in without even checking who you were.
"They must have planned this," you thought, "or they have really bad guards," you laughed quietly to yourself. You walked through the other gate that was right in front of the castle. And went in through the lowered drawbridge.
When you and your new parents entered a guard came running up to Zelda.
"Zelda there is an issue that you need to deal with in the throne room," the soldier said bowing to Zelda.
"Okay, I will be there soon" Zelda said.
The soldier started walking back to the throne room.
"Link, can you show Rieko his room please?" Zelda pleaded, while she did this you took off your blindfold, but no one noticed.
"Okay," link said directing his attention to you now, "lets go to your room."
You and link walked down the hallway turning left at the first turn then turning right. You turned right again and then left.
"This is your room" link said happily," you can unpack the things that you brought in there, then after that get changed for dinner, the clothes are in the dresser."
"Okay," you said shyly and then walked in to the room.
When you walked in the room you were amazed at the size of it. It was probably twice the size of your room in the orphanage and there was a massive bed right in the middle of the room. You walked up to the bed sat down on the floor and started unpacking. You put all your weapons under your bed, and your two books on your nightstand. Then you walked up to the dressed and opened the drawer. There was a green tunic, a red one, a blue one, and a silver one.
"I think I will wear the silver one," you thought.
You finished changing and started walking around the castle looking for the dining room. You walked around for a while and you found a maid.
"Do you know where the dining room is?" you asked hopefully.
"Yes go to the end of this hallway turn right and it's your second door to your right," she said kindly.
"Thank you" you said walking away from her.
You went into the dining room and sat down next to your father. Your family ate quietly with no conversations starting. After supper was done your father and you started walking together back to your room.
"So, what did you think of supper kiddo" Link said ruffling your hair.
"It was good," you laughed.
Suddenly something in black dropped from the roof and kicked you back a meter and you landed on your back.
"Ow" you said rubbing your back.
Link ran back to you and asked, "Are you okay?"
"Yah I guess" you said.
Link helped you up and you both looked at who kicked you. There were three ninja-like people wearing black, they each had to daggers in hand and a sword at the side.
"Go to your room and when your in it lock the door, I will hold them off while you get there." link whispered to you.
You nodded and ran to the left wall to get passed them, but one jumped in front of you. They took a swing to chop of your head but you slid through their legs and kept running after that. That one kept following you though and link couldn't help because he was fighting the other two trying to get passed to run to the third one that was following you. You took a sharp right turn almost sliding into a wall when you did so. The ninja just ran and jumped off the wall.
"You're just so persistent," you yelled back at the ninja not expecting an answer. Finally you were at your room. You opened the door, ran in, closed the door and locked it in one fluid-like motion. You ran to your bed and pulled out your sword just incase you would have to use it if he breaks down the door. You just sat on your bed waiting until you heard him trying to break down the door.
"Where are all the guards?" you thought to yourself. Then the door broke down and you were facing the ninja. You kept your sword in your sheath but put both hands on the handle and held it out in a ready stance in front of you.
"Time to die" the ninja said to you obviously smiling even know you couldn't see his mouth.
"Try Me," you said.
He came at you with both his daggers and you sidestepped and elbowed him in the side. Then you ran out of the room while he followed right behind you. You stopped and turned around as he stopped to and smiled.
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"Get out of my way" link yelled at one of them as he swung his sword down, but the ninja blocked with its knife. The other ninja went around link as he tried to stab him with the sword the he had. Link did a back flip onto the sword knocking it down to the floor turned around and punched the one with the sword right in the nose. He went flying back letting go of his sword. He quickly got up and ran towards where you were.
" Hey, get back here" link yelled running after him but the other guy blocked his path.
"Out of the way!" link said totally pissed off. In on swift motion he cut the guys throat and ran after the other.
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You just kept looking at each other as you were in the hallway facing each other. Then you looked into his eyes and saw that someone was coming up behind you. You lifted your sword right above your head just as the swing came down. You held your sword there as the ninja you were facing dropped his daggers and pulled out a sword from a sheath attached to his side. Link came up behind the man that was behind you about to kill the man when the one in front of you said, "I wouldn't do that link, not if you want your son to die." he point a sword right at your stomach. Link stopped right where he was and dropped his sword to the ground.
"That's better" the ninja in front of you said, "but I'm going to kill him any way." he came at you with blistering speed but right before he was going to hit you, you put all your power into a jump and you jumped on his sword and with the other guy pushing down on your sword the sword that you jumped on went to the ground.
"Well this is an awkward position," you thought. You were holding up your sword to block on sword while standing on another, with a ninja in front of you looking really pissed.
Link picked up his sword and stabbed the ninja that had a weapon in the back. The other ninja ran for his daggers. He picked on up and link ran at him and he threw one at you. You tried to dodge it but it went through your arm. You fell to the ground.
"Why do you want to kill my son?" link asks the ninja.
"Because it will crush your heart, and that is exactly the time the great Gannondorf will come back," he said laughing. You tired to get up but it was hard. You managed to do it but your vision was blurry. Just then the guy through the other knife at you but this time you managed to dodge it by falling to the ground.
"Damn it" the ninja said then disappeared.
Link ran over to you and noticed you passed out. He picked you up and carried you to his and Zelda's room to get some bandages.
