Chapter 2 : I'll Be There
OOCness and AUness
Disclaimer : Once again, I do not own it.
I ain't actually what you call a great writer. Hell I'm doing my best! So, please review my fic. I'm kind of new at it so I need criticisms and tips. –hugs my Benny plushie.- Also, the Naruto we have here at the Philippines, I don't know if it's also called 'Summoning Technique' at your place.
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It was a sunny day; Naruto was out training with Jiraiya for he heard that he was going to teach him a new technique.
"First! I'll show you how it goes!" said Jiraiya positioning.
He bit his thumb and slid it down. He positioned his hand on the ground and there came out a giant frog.
"Whoa! Teach me that! Teach me that!" said Naruto with his face all lightened.
The giant frog's tongue came out and there was a scroll, Jiraya told him to sign here, full name here… Initials there… Handprint over there… Dance the Hokey Pokey… There! Naruto's done!
Jiraiya then told Naruto to do what he just did a while ago.
Naruto bit his thumb and slid it down. He postioned his hand on the ground and there came out a…! A… A… A tadpole?
"Just as I expected!" said Jiraiya laughing at Naruto, "You have no talent!"
"Take that back!" yelled Naruto waving his fist up in the air.
Jiraiya said with his arms crossed, "Say whatever you want! You just don't have talent!"
"I'll show you!"
Naruto kept on trying and trying, little progress made…. The tadpole grew legs.
Kakashi watched over Naruto, worried that he might over do himself.
3 weeks passed, Naruto was exhausted, still, he continued.
Until the tadpole suddenly had 4 legs.
"How about that huh?" exclaimed Naruto facing Jiraiya.
He just looked at the blonde boy's sad attempt pathetically, "A tadpole's still a tadpole! Just say it! You have been doing this technique for 3 weeks! Still! This is the only thing you could do! Like I told you, just accept it! You have no talent!"
Jiraiya left Naruto, "At least you could've just praised me even a little you know!" yelled Naruto annoyed of how he acted.
Naruto continued and continued, He didn't mind what Jiraiya said, he knew he could do it. Sweat dripped down his face, his thumb was worn out, and still he didn't let this get to him. Until suddenly he actually made a full-grown frog after a few days, not one of em' giants though.
Naruto was happy, though he knew Jiraiya would just mock him. Jiraiya's standards were too high for him anyway. His eyesight was already fading he felt he was going to die from exhaustion. Kakashi came closer behind and him and placed his and on Naruto's shoulder.
"You've done well." Said Kakashi with a smile, "Don't mind Jiraiya, if he comes over and sees you've only made a frog. At least you're one step closer." Kakashi patted Naruto on the head
Naruto quickly turned around and smiled at him, "Tha-thanks…Sens…" He collapsed but Kakashi caught him in his arms.
"It's okay, rest, you've been working hard. So you deserve it." Kakashi said softly while he held Naruto in his arms.
Hours later Naruto woke up in his rooms. Surprised of how he came there, he sat up and looked around. Kakashi was nowhere in sight. He looked at his thumb bandaged. He looked at the table right beside him and saw Ramen.
"RAMEN!" Naruto grabbed the bowl and quickly ate the Ramen. It was just the way he liked it, inviting aroma and hot.
A knock came at the door, he was expecting the person who would enter would be Kakashi, but when the door opened. It was Sasuke.
"Expected someone else?" said Sasuke with a smirk as he shut the door behind him.
Naruto just looked away; it was over between them weeks ago.
"I know, I know. It's over between us." He walked around the room.
Naruto was cautious; Sasuke was a persistent person. If he wanted something, he'll do his best to get that something. "What do you want Sasuke?"
Sasuke turned around to look at him, "Well I just came because I was worried about your condition. You've been unconscious for almost a day."
He came closer to Naruto, and leaned forward at him.
"Get away from me." scowled Naruto, staring at Sasuke.
Sasuke just gave out a mocking laugh, "Threatening me in the condition?" he continued, "Such a pathetic attempt!"
Sasuke's face came closer to Naruto's, he was in no condition to fight back, he closed his eyes hoping that it would just be over.
Just his luck, the door got kicked open by a Silver haired ninja tied down to a chair.
"God damn you Sasuke! I knew you were in your no good tricks again!" exclaimed Kakashi hopping around, tied down on a chair, "I thought you were just going to ask me for tips in training but nooo! You had to tie me up and lock me inside a closet!"
"Sensei!" said with Naruto with loving eyes.
Kakashi destroyed the rope with anger. "You're so dead when I get the hold of you Sasuke!"
(Normally he would fight back but hell! I like OOC!)
Kakashi took out a chainsaw and chased Sasuke with it out of the room. "Hahahha! I'll tear you into pieces!"
"Sensei's so cute when he acts like a killing maniac!" said Naruto with a loving sigh.
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What do you guys think? Hahahah! I need lots of improving to do I know! But I hope you guys enjoy it! I love my Piggy! –huggies my Benny Plushie-
