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Chapter 2

Carmelita opened one eye. Why did her head hurt so much? Come to think of it...everything hurt. She opened her other eye. What happened? She tried to remember how she got hurt so bad. All she could really recall was a voice...saying it'd get revenge...

Neyla.

Carmelita sat up, pain bursting from her body. That no good first class britishbitch was back. Fuck. Nothing was gonna get rid of her, was it? She tried to stand, but her legs gave away under her, and...she fell...again. Then, she remembered everything. The car ride home...the shadow...the attack...Neyla...

She kidnapped me.

It was painful to admit, but it was true. This was NOT the parking lot of the apartment, and this was NOT a place she felt welcome. Things only got worse when she heard the most dreadful noiseCarmelita could think of.

"Well, good to see you've joined the world of the living...not that you'll be that way for much longer..."

Neyla.

Before Carmelita even realized what she was doing, she'd gotten to her feet, ignoring anyand every pain that pulsed through her body. She ran to Neyla, and just let her fistssail in the air, not to mention, using a string of words that would makeSatan himself blush.

"YOU FUCKING BITCH! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU'D DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS! I SWEAR I'LL BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF YOU!"

All this time, Neyla hadn't said a word. She side stepped Carmelita and hit a switch on the wall. Carmelita had never, ever experienced such a pain as what hit her right then and there. She was blinded by the pain. It felt like someone was taking tiny knives and just stabbing her over and over again all around her body. She shut her eyes tightly, clutching her stomach and doubling over, her body screaming, pleading to make the pain stop.

After what felt like hours of blinding white pain, it stopped, it just...ended. She felt numb all over, like her entire body just shut down and fell asleep. She reluctantly opened her eyes, shielding them from the light on the ceiling. She heard Neyla give an evil laugh (or a very crappy attempt at it), but everything seemed distant from herself. She felt something heavy and sharp in her neck, so she touched it gingerly, only to discover here was some kind of choker thingy around her neck.

Shock Collar.

Neyla smiled wickedly.

"Sorry, but you're not doing anything I don't want you to do. I think I'll enjoy toying around with your pathetic soul."

All any of the guards in the front could hear was Carmelita's piercing screams shatter the silence of the night.