Wooo! I update! Sorry for leaving you all hanging. Oh and it seems this
will be a Sasu/Naru fic. Gomen, but I promise to write all you Naru/Hina
fans a little something when this is done. And I hope Hinata will still
appear.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, so get over the fact I'm writing about him. I need to so something while waiting for the next episode!
And without further ado!
What went wrong Chapter 2
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Naruto sat there.
Waiting.
No one would say anything. Even after Kakashi had lept off into the woods no one would talk.
Finally Sasuke walked over and wrenched Naruto's forehead protector off his head.
"HEY!"
"Dobe, you looked even more like a idiot with one ear hanging out like that. It that's possible." He smirked
Naruto grabbed his headband and tied it on his forehead. "Yeah, yeah."
Sakura still seemed to be in shock. "Naruto?" she asked tentatively.
Naruto turned his piercing blue gaze to her. "Yes Sakura-chan?"
"Ummmm.... your... well..." she motioned at he stomach blushing
Naruto closed his eyes and cocked his head to one side. "Huh?"
"She means this dobe!" Sasuke said poking Naruto's stomach. To his amazement it was soft.
"What the hell?" he put his hand up against Naruto's stomach.
Naruto turned a very bright shade of red.
Kyubi continued to laugh his head off.
"Sasuke!" Naruto yelled.
Sasuke's hand quickly left Naruto's stomach.
Naruto then sighed and uncurled his tail from around his waist and let it poke through his pants.
There was an audible gasp from Sakura and a suppressed one from Sasuke. Naruto sighed and sat looking thoroughly miserable.
Sasuke and Sakura decided to leave him alone at that point and Naruto really didn't want that much attention.
While he sat there a small kit crept up behind him and jumped on his head.
"What the!"
Kyubi chuckled.
Naruto struggled with his new friend untill he managed to get him off his head. Then he held him up in front of his face to get a good look at him.
Meanwhile Sasuke and Sakura watched with interest.
"White!" Naruto whispered.
And sure enough the kit he had in his hands was pure white. Not one even slightly grey hair on him.
Naruto got over his shock and set the kit on the ground. "Go home. I'm having a bad day."
The white fox pup whimpered and rubbed against Naruto's leg. Then the pup started to whine very loudly. Sasuke and Sakura tried to block it out but to Naruto it sounded like human speech.
(My parents were killed by a hunter. Their fur was taken!)
Naruto's eyes widened. Then he picked up the small fox and stroked it's fur who by now was beside it's self.
(I saw your ears! I thought you were daddy! I thought they came back.)
By now the howling had gotten even on Naruto's nerves. Kyubi who had even less patience than Naruto decided to put a stop to it.
(KIT!)
The small fox stopped.
(Thank you. Now listen I am your demon god Kyubi and from what I heard I will say this. You and Naruto are now kit-brothers. From now on you and he will look out for each other like family.)
(WHAT!?) That was Naruto
The kit however jumped up and started to lick Naruto on his face.
(Well kit, he's yours.) Naruto realized Kyubi was talking to him. (What's his name?)
(Uhhhh....) just then Sasuke came over.
"Dobe, who's your new friend?"
"None of your concern baka Sasuke!"
The small fox looked on with interest.
"Hmph, I was just trying to help dobe!"
"Yeah, well who said I needed it!"
"I'd think having fox ears and a tail would give some hint!"
It had become a full fledged yelling match and both Naruto and Sasuke were on their feet. Dumping the small kit to the ground in the process.
"So! I can get through this all by my self!"
"You can't get through anything by your self dobe!"
Sakura watched her two team mates yell and was getting ready to intervene but something held her back. She saw it was the small fox. He growled softly and Sakura nodded.
"OH YEAH! WHAT THE HELL MAKES YOU SAY THAT!" Naruto was getting angrier and angrier by the second.
"BECAUSE YOU CAN'T DO A DAMN THING ON YOUR OWN!" Sasuke seemed to be able to match Naruto's anger at this point.
"WELL I DID A FUCKING GOOD JOB ON MY OWN FOR 13 YEARS!"
Sasuke stopped short. Sakura wavered. Even Kyubi seemed to be phased by this last statement.
"I....." Sasuke stopped short.
"I do not want to hear it right now Baka-Sasuke."
Kyubi was afraid this would explode into another yelling match but then Naruto's and the small fox's ears perked. Then Tusande and Kakashi landed in front of them.
The fifth turned a ghostly shade of white.
"Oh my god."
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Well this was a good chapter. I have never used the f-word before but it seemed appropriate for this occasion. I keep waiting for someone to push Naruto over the edge in the anime.
The fox will get his name in the next chapter and I also promise to update a bit faster this time.
I had an ice-skating show so I was off the computer for a week.
See you next time!
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, so get over the fact I'm writing about him. I need to so something while waiting for the next episode!
And without further ado!
What went wrong Chapter 2
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Naruto sat there.
Waiting.
No one would say anything. Even after Kakashi had lept off into the woods no one would talk.
Finally Sasuke walked over and wrenched Naruto's forehead protector off his head.
"HEY!"
"Dobe, you looked even more like a idiot with one ear hanging out like that. It that's possible." He smirked
Naruto grabbed his headband and tied it on his forehead. "Yeah, yeah."
Sakura still seemed to be in shock. "Naruto?" she asked tentatively.
Naruto turned his piercing blue gaze to her. "Yes Sakura-chan?"
"Ummmm.... your... well..." she motioned at he stomach blushing
Naruto closed his eyes and cocked his head to one side. "Huh?"
"She means this dobe!" Sasuke said poking Naruto's stomach. To his amazement it was soft.
"What the hell?" he put his hand up against Naruto's stomach.
Naruto turned a very bright shade of red.
Kyubi continued to laugh his head off.
"Sasuke!" Naruto yelled.
Sasuke's hand quickly left Naruto's stomach.
Naruto then sighed and uncurled his tail from around his waist and let it poke through his pants.
There was an audible gasp from Sakura and a suppressed one from Sasuke. Naruto sighed and sat looking thoroughly miserable.
Sasuke and Sakura decided to leave him alone at that point and Naruto really didn't want that much attention.
While he sat there a small kit crept up behind him and jumped on his head.
"What the!"
Kyubi chuckled.
Naruto struggled with his new friend untill he managed to get him off his head. Then he held him up in front of his face to get a good look at him.
Meanwhile Sasuke and Sakura watched with interest.
"White!" Naruto whispered.
And sure enough the kit he had in his hands was pure white. Not one even slightly grey hair on him.
Naruto got over his shock and set the kit on the ground. "Go home. I'm having a bad day."
The white fox pup whimpered and rubbed against Naruto's leg. Then the pup started to whine very loudly. Sasuke and Sakura tried to block it out but to Naruto it sounded like human speech.
(My parents were killed by a hunter. Their fur was taken!)
Naruto's eyes widened. Then he picked up the small fox and stroked it's fur who by now was beside it's self.
(I saw your ears! I thought you were daddy! I thought they came back.)
By now the howling had gotten even on Naruto's nerves. Kyubi who had even less patience than Naruto decided to put a stop to it.
(KIT!)
The small fox stopped.
(Thank you. Now listen I am your demon god Kyubi and from what I heard I will say this. You and Naruto are now kit-brothers. From now on you and he will look out for each other like family.)
(WHAT!?) That was Naruto
The kit however jumped up and started to lick Naruto on his face.
(Well kit, he's yours.) Naruto realized Kyubi was talking to him. (What's his name?)
(Uhhhh....) just then Sasuke came over.
"Dobe, who's your new friend?"
"None of your concern baka Sasuke!"
The small fox looked on with interest.
"Hmph, I was just trying to help dobe!"
"Yeah, well who said I needed it!"
"I'd think having fox ears and a tail would give some hint!"
It had become a full fledged yelling match and both Naruto and Sasuke were on their feet. Dumping the small kit to the ground in the process.
"So! I can get through this all by my self!"
"You can't get through anything by your self dobe!"
Sakura watched her two team mates yell and was getting ready to intervene but something held her back. She saw it was the small fox. He growled softly and Sakura nodded.
"OH YEAH! WHAT THE HELL MAKES YOU SAY THAT!" Naruto was getting angrier and angrier by the second.
"BECAUSE YOU CAN'T DO A DAMN THING ON YOUR OWN!" Sasuke seemed to be able to match Naruto's anger at this point.
"WELL I DID A FUCKING GOOD JOB ON MY OWN FOR 13 YEARS!"
Sasuke stopped short. Sakura wavered. Even Kyubi seemed to be phased by this last statement.
"I....." Sasuke stopped short.
"I do not want to hear it right now Baka-Sasuke."
Kyubi was afraid this would explode into another yelling match but then Naruto's and the small fox's ears perked. Then Tusande and Kakashi landed in front of them.
The fifth turned a ghostly shade of white.
"Oh my god."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Well this was a good chapter. I have never used the f-word before but it seemed appropriate for this occasion. I keep waiting for someone to push Naruto over the edge in the anime.
The fox will get his name in the next chapter and I also promise to update a bit faster this time.
I had an ice-skating show so I was off the computer for a week.
See you next time!