WHEE! Chapter who knows but it somewhere near twenty is here! And the fifth girl is comin up! Everyone meet………wait a minute! I'm not supposed top give you the name now! You have to wait! This chapter also has craziness! The love who knows what shape will have a new line once this is done! So here we go!

I do not own Tokyo Mew Mew.

"MOM! Hershey scratched another one of my cds!" a high school girl shouted.

"Ah, no one cares about that goth music you listen to anyway!" Hershey shouted at her sister.

"Stop fighting you two!"

"Maybe she would feel better if she had a boyfriend! But she has to go all around wearing creepy clothes and scaring everyone!" Hershey yelled.

"Shut up you little sugar-high crap-head!" Hershey's sister shouted. Hershey stuck her tongue out and ran around her. "Get away from me!" the girl screamed, retreating to her room.

"Dad...why…..why did you have to leave? Why couldn't you stay dad! Why damnit!" the older girl shouted, pounding on the floor in her dark room.

"Gotta go to work! Love ya mom!" Hershey shouted before running out the door. Speeding on her bicycle to café Mew Mew, she stopped a block away to look into her sister's window.

"Coco…..we've all been upset about dad running off…..but it's been about 8 years now…so just get over it," she thought. Hershey sighed. "Stupid sister," she muttered, turning around after spacing out.

"You're late Hershey," Riley commented when she came in. Hershey rubbed her head. "Sorry, but I had some family issues to work out," she mentioned.

"You alright Hersh?" asked Melanie in her cute salmon colored uniform.

"Please don't call me Hersh; it reminds me of a vehicle they transport bodies in for funerals. And I'm fine."

After work…………

"Well, great job today girls. Anyway, since we have two left to find, we should work on this girl at hand. Technology can't tell us who it is, except that they're in high school in the 10th grade. Secondly, the aliens are going to attack her at about 9:30 tonight, at the dance club called Alternative Beat," Riley said.

"That's……that's my sisters favorite dance club! She's going to be going their tonight!" Hershey gasped.

"Well then, go home and try to convince her not to go. It could get dangerous," Riley commented. "Another thing about the aliens; Tama will be bringing a couple friends this time. And I don't mean the monsters; I mean other people of his race; about two of them."

Hershey had already left. "To bad; Alternative Beat only allows high schoolers. That means we might not be able to get in unless we all play dress up. But I have to find a way to get Coco to stay home…..i got it!"

Once Hershey was home, she looked in a bunch of pillow cases from the living room. There, she found her sisters report card from when she was in elementary school; the one after her dad left and her grades had dropped to F's and D's. She crossed out elementary and scribbled in 10th grade. Running to her mom, she yelled, "Mom! I found Coco's report card!"

Minutes later, Hershey's mother marched up to Coco's room. Coco was getting ready to go dancing, dressing in her usual black dress with black fish nets and black boots.

"Coco Nari Elinques!" her mother shouted. "When did you plan on explaining this to me!"

Coco tried to walk out the door to put in her long earrings. Her mother grabbed her shoulder and said, "You are not leaving this house young lady! Until you're grades improve, you are grounded!" she shouted. Coco heard her mother mutter, "If you're father were still here, he would have a fit."

The door of her room slammed. After checking the time, which read 9:00, Coco fled out her window and "borrowed" Hershey's bike to ride to the dance club. Once their, she ran through her usual routine. Dance by herself, then she sat down. Secretly, she wished someone would ask her……..

"Excuse me, would you like to dance?" a guy came up and asked her. Coco looked up from her absent-minded stage at the guy who held his hand out. She took it as he led her to the dance floor.

"So, what's your name?" Coco loudly said while dancing to the music.

"My name is Tomo. Yours?" he asked.

"Tomo eh? That sounds kind of girlish. My names Coco," she yelled. She smiled. It was pretty rare for a guy to ask her to dance. In fact, a guy had never asked her.

"You're really cute, ya know that?" Tomo commented. Coco slightly blushed. "Thanks. You're a really good dancer."

"You are too."

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Hershey ran into the café exhausted. "Riley! I really tried it did, but it didn't work!"

"What didn't work? And are you ready tonight we have to go stop them!" Riley asked.

"My sister! And my bike! My sister went to the club anyway! And she took my bike! And what in the name of Gilbert are you wearing!" she was still trying to catch her breath.

"Well, I made us some fake ids so we can get in. We have to be high schoolers. Plus, most of the people are dressed like this."

"Riley! How do you put these on?" Skye wailed holding up the fish nets. She was already wearing baggy camouflage jeans with a tight, black leather vest and a spiked collar.

"We're ready!" came Melon and Melanie's voices.

"Why isn't Hershey wearing this stuff?" commented Skye.

"Oh; I have some of my sister's clothes in this bag. We gotta go now Riley!"

"Not until you change. Yuki should be down here any second."

"I'm ready!" she shouted, coming down the stairs. Wearing a red plaid skirt that went to her knees and a blood red tank top, she dyed her hair red and put it into two spiky buns. Riley's mouth hung open a bit as she came down in her boots that went up most of her legs with the chains attached.

"Well, get going then Hershey!" Riley added, still staring at Yuki. Hershey glanced at him oddly, but headed toward the bathroom to change.

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"So…..where do you live and how come I haven't seen you around before?" Coco asked.

"Just moved here; in the other school, I got into to many fight. And I got in trouble for being a little to……lets just say I was attached to girls like you."

"Ooh, town bad boy, eh?" Coco slyly remarked. Tomo smiled. "Well, it was mainly for doing stuff like this," he said as he tilted his head forward. Coco closed her eyes as Tomo's lips pressed onto hers.

Coco's first kissed.

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"Ok, so where is your sister?" Riley asked walking in. The guards had let them in without giving it a second glance. "It should be pretty easy to tell; she is wearing a black dress, black boots, fishnets…."

"You mean that girl over there who's making out?" asked Skye. Hershey glanced at Skye. "What? My sister doesn't have a boyfriend," Hershey snapped.

"Well, she does now; look," added Melanie, pointing to Tomo and Coco. Hershey took off her extremely dark sunglasses. "Co…..Coco…..she…..she has a boyfriend," she said in slight shock. Masha and Haru started beeping and pointing in that direction.

"And it isn't just anyone; it's Tama!" shouted Yuki. That really put Hershey into so much shock, she started running in there direction. Her body came into contact with Tama's as she slammed him into the ground away from her sister.

"Tama! How dare you play around with her emotion's like that!" Hershey shouted angrily. By Hershey's voice, Coco opened her eyes. "HERSHEY! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE! AND WHY ARE YOU WEARING MY CLOTHES! AND WHY DID YOU JUST KNOCK OVER TOMO!" she screamed.

"His name is Tama, and he's not in love with you. You have to get out of here now!" Hershey shouted above the music.

"So Hershey; you've discovered me, eh?" Tama remarked, getting up. He had morphed into his regular clothes. Hershey was ready to transform when a hand came across her shoulder. "Don't; there are to many people here! Riley and I will evacuate as fast as we can!"

"So…..um….any idea's on how to evacuate a goth-club?" Riley asked the girls. Melanie jumped up on the stage and grabbed the microphone Riley was holding.

"Everyone in here; we're closing now because of a….um…..plumbing problem! Someone had been flushing human remains down the toilet and the FBI needs to search for evidence. Please go to the…..um…..gas station next door and the FBI will be there to question you shortly. NOW EVERYBODY OUT!"

Everyone stared in confusion at Melanie. The guests sighed and started filing out. Melanie jumped off stage. "Melanie….what was that all about?" asked Melon. She shrugged. "First thing that popped into my head. Now come on; help me get these people out faster!"

Hershey tried to at least lunge at Tama, but he grabbed Coco. "One more step and you're sister gets it!" he threatened, holding a blade to her neck. Coco just stood their emotionlessly; she knew ever since her dad left, she couldn't cry anymore; like all the tears had been sucked from her that day.

"Good; all the people are gone! Everyone, transform!" Riley shouted. The girls nodded.

"Mew Mew Melon Metamorphosis!"

"Mew Mew Mango Metamorphosis!"

Mew Mew Skye Metamorphosis!"

"Look, over there!" shouted Melon. She was pointing to the scene where Tama was half-strangling Coco and Hershey was standing there; powerless. She swiftly ran over and jumped into the air. Landing right behind him, she punched him before Tama could turn around. Tama dropped Coco and Hershey caught her sister.

"Mew Mew Hershey Metamorphosis!" Hershey shouted when she had put Coco down. Coco stared in amazement at the sight before her; her sister evolving into a creature with ears and claws. The other girls called upon their weapons while Hershey split into hundreds of people.

"Get his girls! After all, a guy only dreams that lost of women will chase them!" Skye shouted with a smirk on her face.

"Well Melon is fine, but you bitches are useless!" he yelled. He drew his weapon, which was like a big scythe and he swung it at the girls.

"I….i don't need to unleash for this," Hershey thought. Thinking back to her older brother who was well into the world, she called back her copies and launched into the air above Tama. Aiming her foot at him, she struck him.

"OSAKA NANIWA SUPER KICK!"

She kicked his head which practically made a 180 degree turn.

"Holy friggin crap! Hershey, where did you learn that!"

"My brother went to Osaka All Boys School and taught me it!" she replied once she had landed. Tama had fallen to the floor creating a massive hole. He wasn't bale to pick himself up, when he mysteriously started moving.

"OSAKA KUIDAORE CHOP!"

Hershey furiously punched the second figure, who revealed himself when Hershey had hit him. While Tama had the power to call forth a scythe, he had the power of invisibility. But it didn't work because Hershey had splattered blood on him.

"Very nice finding me; my name is Tasuke," the other figure said.

"Spare me the story," Hershey sarcastically muttered. "Let him go so I can beat the crap out of him!"

"In time, Hershey. But for now, we must go. Until we meet again…."

"Mew Mew Coco Metamorphosis!"

"What the…" Tasuke turned around to find Coco standing behind him with her weapon.

"Do as my sister says……or else," she angrily whispered. A smirk made its way across Tasuke's face.

"Not now; maybe some other time," he said before creating a portal and teleporting away. Coco lunged forward to catch him, but he had already gone."

And so, chapter 18 comes to a close. Just so you know, I have a full-time job for the summer; my very first summer job. Not to mention, I will be in lots of parades because I finally re-joined the baton and drum corps and that will take up some time. Just explaining I will be very busy in the summer and that's why I may not post. So please do not send me evil letters saying you will hunt me down and stalk me until I write again. Seriously, I can't even read any of my favorite fics either, so I have to suffer too. Anyway, read and review, over and out. -Nibzo