FD: 'Bawling uncontrollably.'

FD: No one has written me any reviews! No one! 'Cries'

It's been several days since my publication of my story once again, and to my disappointment and much much sadness, no readers have even commented on my story.

I'm not sure if my plot is too dull or if my writing skill need improvement, but I would love any kind of opinion, especially constructive criticisms.

The reviews help authors write better because it helps to know their flaws. So for those who read my story, please review so I can know your opinions and help better my story!

PLEASE REVIEW!