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Phantoms
The shuttle flew on for about forty-five minutes. Then the radar picked up something.
"Sir we have incoming," said a technician.
Next thing they knew three Phantoms flew past the ship and turned around to follow in pursuit.
"Sir I don't know how many hits this thing can take," said the technician.
"Then use the lasers," said Master Chief.
"We can't sir, if we do then we will crash and burn," said the technician.
"You routed the power form the lasers to the jet," said Master Chief.
"It wasn't our idea it was that kids," said the technician pointing to Jeremy.
"ARE YOU TRYING TO GET US KILLED!" Master Chief yelled at Jeremy.
"Sir if it wasn't for my idea then we would all be dead," said Jeremy.
"You do have a point. But you didn't think of what could happen if we ran into any trouble along the way," said Master Chief.
"Well sorry, would you rather get to the control center or fight off little jets like the ones that are following us," said Jeremy.
"I would have liked to get rid of those things. The shape this craft is in at the moment will not allow one direct hit from those things," said Master Chief.
"I hope your maneuvering skills are good," Jeremy said to the technician flying the shuttle.
Laser fire immediately erupted from the Phantoms following the shuttle. The shuttle dodged the lasers and then went into a dive. The Phantoms followed.
"Those things are closing in," said Odd as he looked at the radar.
"You know this thing is not in the best condition so it will be hard to out run them," said Razor.
"What happens if we get hit?" asked Yumi.
"Well there are two possibilities. One we crash and burn. Two we make a hard landing damaging the shuttle beyond repair and have to go the rest of the way on foot," said Master Chief.
"I really hope it's the second one," said Yumi.
"Don't we all," said Jeremy.
More laser fire rings out behind the craft. The technician banks right. Then there is a loud bang. All the lights in the ship go out. The engine hum goes away. Then there is an explosion of a gas line. Everyone gets down as fire fly's into the cockpit. Then the shuttle begins to shake wildly. The fire dies down a little and everyone feels air rushing into the ship. The ship goes into a free fall and starts to spin out of control. There is a rocketing explosion as a jet falls off the shuttle on the right side. The shuttle starts to spin even faster and is now going into a deep nosedive.
Are they going to die? Or will something happen that lets them live. review to find out.