(Authors note: From a fan)
Hello,
I really like your story and the detail is a very good thing it makes
the story more interesting! There is just two little thing that's
were annoying me take no offense please because I really like your
story and I don't want you to be mad at me but Sesshomaru's nickname
is spelled Sesshy and Inuyasha's sword's name is Tetsusaiga which I
only know is right cause I looked it up in the anime. So other than
that your story is really good and 50 percent of the people spell
Tetsusaiga wrong so that's no biggie so please don't be mad! anyway
Sesshomaru rules! please update soon till then bai bai
Bunnie
Just thought you should read that incase I do anything else wrong. Oh and the longer chapters thing. I like leaving you readers in suspense so I'll leave is how long it usually is. Mwahahahah! Thanks and keep reading!
Chapter 8: The boneless corpse
Inuyasha
sat on the rivers edge staring into the water at his reflection as
the dying footsteps of Kagome disappeared. At least she forgave him
he thought. Then followed her back into camp...
As
the night grew darker Kagome's dreams were sweeter. But for some
reason she always ended up in Sesshomaru's arms. The dreams
frightened her but at the same time excited her. In her restless
sleep she got up and walked to the forest edge placing her hand on an
old tree. What could the dreams mean? She entered the forest walking
in the paths of the moon with billions of little stars in the sky.
Did she love Sesshomaru? She admitted to her attraction for him but
love? And she wasn't even sure if he felt the same way. Sesshomaru
was so unpredictable. What with saving her then not making any motive
to take Inuyasha's teitseiga...maybe he's changed. As she went deeper
she realized suddenly that her wavering thoughts had led her to an
unknown part on the forest. She began to run through the forest but
all that got her was even more lost.
"Kagome..."
She spun around when she heard the faint whisper of someone.
"W-Who's
there?" She looked up to see Naraku in his baboon suit, sitting
on a tree branch a few spaces away staring at her. She had left her
bow+arrow at the camp site and no matter how hard she screamed no one
would be able to hear her so far out. She franticly began running but
Naraku was too fast for her to see. He jumped down and grabbed a
tight hold on her arm then took out a small pipe. He sucked in the
smoke then blew it in her face. It instantly made her become dazed.
Her last thought when she blacked out was a image of Inuyasha smiling
at her while running after shippo...
Inuyasha
woke up and stretched in a doglike manner scratching his nose. Were
was Kagome's scent? He shrugged to himself, she probaly was taking
a bath. He got up with the others to prepare breakfast. When an hour
passed and still Kagome hadn't showed up Sango was worried.
"I'll
go and see if she is still bathing" After a moment or so Sango
came back. "She isn't there either!" she yelled.
A
sinking feeling began to happen in Inuyasha's stomach.
"
I bet that bastard Sesshomaru has something to do with this!"
"Don't
assume things Inuyasha " Said Miroku.
"I
know he did it. When we find him I'll ripe his HEART OUT!"
Inuyasha jumped up and began sniffing. He motioned for the others to
follow. Shippo collected thier belongings and went with them.
Inuyasha stopped and sniffed some more.
"hmmm
her scent...It stops here." He sniffs the air again. "We're
going to Sesshomaru's place" And with that starts walking in the
direction of his older brothers house.
Kagome
moaned as she finally woke up. Her whole body hurt. And Why couldn't
she move? She looked up to find her hands chained then looked down to
see that her legs were also chained. She was in some sort of dungeon.
It reeked as little rats came and went by her feet. She screamed and
tried to stomp on them. She heard someone open a door and fell
silent. As the person appeared from the darkness she couldn't
recognize him. He had long black curly hair and a purple kimono on.
But his eyes were black and cold.
"So
your awake?" She gasped when she realized it was Naraku...but
without the baboon suit. He touched her cheek with his pale hands and
she cringed.
"Why
did you bring me here?"
"Because
your perfect for this...event."
"What
event?" She spat.
"You'll
see Kagome" He traced her face with his hands then she spit in
his face.
"Whatever
your planning I'm not playing"
"Oh
yes you will.." Kagome turned in the direction of the other
voice that came and there stood the priestess Kikyo with the same
cold eyes.
"And
you might gain something from this too" Naraku laughed and left
Kagome alone with Kikyo….
Drama! -QN
