This is what happens when I'm sleep deprived. I'm cranky and I get weird ideas. Last night I woke up in the middle of the night and decided because I couldn't't go back to sleep I'd watch some of the old TV shows I taped a loooong time ago. Please excuse the writing. I need to go back to sleep. I hope you like the story.
08/31/05: I'm re-writing this because it's too darn short what you see now is the new better (hopefully) and longer part! Please review!
02/14/08: I recently had a reviewer point out a horrible amount of errors. I have edited the submission and hopefully you will like the shiny new-ish fanfic.
It was a lovely summer afternoon and Kagome was in her kitchen. She was boiling water for her crimson clad friend's favorite dish. "Inuyasha! The ramen's done!⌠ she shouted up the stairs. "The floors are wet so be..." she was interrupted by the sound of frenzied scratching and loud crash down the hall. "...careful" she finished and looked around the corner. What she saw was a hanyou sized dent in the wall and mud splotches on the floor. "You where outside"
"Yeah"
After lunch Kagome was approached by Souta who had a plan on how to preserve the hallway's wall. "Hey Sis? Do you remember that toilet paper commercial we where laughing at? The one with the puppy?" he asked.
"Yeah. The puppy kept on slipping and..." she paused and an excited look came upon her face "I see what your thinking! After Mom and I wash the floor again we'll get ready."
Time passed, floors where washed and wounded prides healed by noodles. Kagome was once again in the kitchen but this time a different meal was being prepared. " Dinner's ready! The floor's wet again!" she called . As before there was the scratching of claws trying to find balance...wait for it...no crash?
Kagome looked around the corner and smiled at what she saw. What she saw was her victorious little brother, a dazed Inuyasha and a lot of roles of toilet paper.
"where did we get THAT idea from again?" asked Kagome "a commercial! " cried Souta
THE END
Please review...I like reviews. You can be as mean and evil as you want. I'd like to know if people like my writing style so I can make my current workings good and like-able.
I also want to thank my good friend sheetamoon for reviewing. Thank You! Also thank you Ziggimaguagua for pointing out my idiocy