TORN APART

Rating: T or PG-13

Summary: (OC NEEDED)a new team, a new tournament. New lives, and new discoveries. Hidden masks slowly slip off, new faces become old. Add in the word 'love' and you've got a story to tell. (OC NEEDED) please read and review!

A/N: I know everyone's hoping to see their OC here in this chapter, but I haven't chosen yet. I've got a couple on my mind but there's still time to change my view on your OC. So please, add more information, some more than others, including, this part is extra important, a few quotes and sentences that you OC might say during certain occasions.

This chapter is dedicated

Ariotlatio

for helping me with the first chapter and a little bit of this one

Thanks To:

LONEGiRL7: Hey, thanks for your compliments on Karmen. I think she's super cool too! Yeah, she's going to be paired up with either Tala or Kai. They match her personality! Serious guys, lol. - Your OC sounds wonderful, hope you enjoy this chapter.

Saa-chan: Thanks for your review. I really like your OC. Hope you'll like this chapter!

Beyblade master: Thank you for the review and the OC. I really like Kira. Please help yourself to this chapter!

Carrothien: I'm glad you liked the last chapter! Your OC is very cool. I hope I updated fast enough. Hope you would enjoy this chapter!

Hoshiko Megami: Thanks for your review! Yeah, I hope they don't delete this fic; I'm having a lot of ideas for this story. I agree with you, they're just preventing a lot of authors to write what they want. Enough of depressing things hope you like the chapter!

Maresia Eterna: Hey, thank you so much for the review. Glad to know that you like Karmen and her attitude. I hope stop deleting fics that are asking for OCs. Anyways, love Miliani, but, isn't that your last name? Just a question.

Blossompinkgymnast: Thanks for your OC, hope you like the chapter!

Aysel2308: Thanks for your review and OC, she sounds really interesting! Hope you enjoy this chapter!

Blueangel1888888: Thanks for your review; I hope this chapter will be interesting for you. By the way, do you want to pair your OC up with anyone?

Dayaja: Thanks for the OCs, hope you enjoy this chapter!

LeVeL27Guitar: Thank you for the review, hope you enjoy this chapter!

(A/N) Without further ado, enjoy!

The four teens stared at each other. Well, two glaring and two staring are more like it.

Kai frowned, the girl had simply been there all along and he hadn't been able to sense her out. Either she wasn't a normal teenager and had gone through extensive training, or he was short on practice, and is now a little rusty on the sensing thing.

Karmen on the other hand, was smirking. It seemed like god happened to walk by and left her with a golden opportunity. She didn't need some dumb world tournament to become Beyblading champion, oh no! All she needed was the soon ex-champion to be, with a reliable person to testify later on.

Her smirk grew wider, turning itself into her trademark smirk. The champion was here, Tyson. The testifier was here too, Max. Kai can just stick by to watch the fall of Tyson. Now all she needed was to make Tyson challenge her. Perfect.

Tyson noticed the look on Karmen's face. Very much intimidated by it, he spoke the first words that came to mind. "I'm the world champion! "He gloated.

His inner self congratulated him on such a wonderful conversation beginner. Wonderful? Yeah right! Max immediately flushed a dark red as Tyson's words reached his ear. You had to admit it, it was starting to get embarrassing for Tyson to say that every couple seconds. Annoying and embarrassing.

Karmen rolled her eyes, how arrogant can the dumb dude get? Apparently, very. "Really? That was amateur play down there in the stadium. You obviously don't deserve that title." She replied bordly, absently twisting a lock of her auburn hair.

Her smirk never left her face. He was so easy to get to. It was almost amusing, watching his face get beet red and start yapping about his oh so wonderful blading skills. Just when she was about to zone out, her ears caught the words that she had been hoping to hear.

"I'll show you! Amateur plays, huh!" Tyson shouted, "I challenge you to a beybattle! Right here, right now!"

Karmen refrained from rolling her eyes once again, just managing to keep her cool. What a temper! Someone should put that kid in his place. Who? Me, of course.

Chuckling quietly to herself, she fixed her cold, almost sadistic eyes on Tyson's. Boring deep holes into his soul, her eyes remained in contact with his until he managed to break apart seconds later, though it seemed like hours. She had frightened Tyson. All the teens that were present during the event knew that.

Managing to stop shivering a while later, Tyson fearfully raised his head to stare at the space on top of her eyes. His teeth chattered as he spoke. " Let's go to the stadium for the battle." Managing to finish the sentence without breaking down, he quickly rushed to the main dirt path and ran towards the exit of the forest.

The other two members of the Bladebreakers both shot weird glances towards Karmen before following their teammate. Karmen's trademark smirk once again placed itself on its owner's lips. She can be quite frightening if she wanted to.

She followed the members of the Bladebreakers until they were all in the stadium, shouting at the top of her lungs, Karmen cried out: "a battle between Tyson and a challenger is going to take place right now!" At once, thousands of people rushed into the stadium for an opportunity to watch the match.

Karmen chuckled softly while pulling out a black mask and swept her hair into a tight bun. So she wasn't planning for this much publicity at first, but what's the harm?

Smirking at the oncoming victory, she walked confidently into the stadium and reached the battle dish. A normal standard dish greeted her at Karmen's first glance. It didn't really matter to her; her blade can spin on water, and even ice.

The crowd quieted as Max did the countdown. Everyone held their breath, anticipating who will win. The name of the winner was clear on both competitors' minds, but only one will win.

Three...Two...One...Let it Rip!

The two blades left their launchers together. Before Tyson's blade had landed inside the dish, Karmen's Black and silver blade began hitting it in the air. Her blade's speed was so fast that no one could see where the blade was, but they could see that Tyson's blade was being hit. When the two blades landed on the dish, Karmen's blade appeared once more only disappear after giving Tyson's blade a dozen hits and attacks.

Then something happened that nobody could believe at first. A large tornado started forming, surrounding Karmen's blade. Tyson was so surprised! It was only after the female teenager had knocked his blade out of the dish when he finally comprehended what had happened.

It took him another five minutes before he was able to say anything. By that time, Karmen had already disappeared from everyone's view, with the satisfaction on knowing that she had beat the supposedly ex-world champion of beyblading.

What Tyson said though was surprising, for when could speak, the first words out of his mouth was " She stole Dragoon's attack!"

(A/N) Another chapter finished! I'm sorry if it was short, but if I added more, it would ruin my plan for this story. The chapters are all divided up and this chapter is just about the defeat of Tyson. It's not like I hate Tyson or anything, but he's not exactly my favourite character. - Please review!

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