Sorry for the long wait I'm trying may hardest and so is Jade to get these posted for you the readers I'm trying my hardest to get them typed and Jade is work very hard to get hers typed and posting both of ours. Well on with chapter 16

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Chapter 16: "Naraku and Koshemea capture Kinjya!"

About five in a half months had passed there was not a sign of Koshemea. Miroku's and Kinjya's relationship grew. But to not where Kinjya would become pregnant. To Miroku he didn't want to have a girl at the age of seventeen, who's a demon, walking around carrying his child. And with her former lover walking around, he didn't want to put the unborn chill in danger. Sango didn't get upset with Miroku and Kinjya relationship, to see them together brought her a feeling a joy. All the girls went to find a hot spring and told the men to stay behind and not to follow them. "Ah lovely day we're having wouldn't you agree Sango?" Kinjya said once they got to a hot spring and into the water. "Yes I agree fully!" The other girls nodded. Once the girls were done they set off to find the guys. But while walking back they all felt an evil force following them. It hit Kinjya like a tone or bricks. Then she gasped. "What is it Kinjya?" Ask Tsutomi. "It's Koshemea but he's not alone!" "What do you mean he's not alone?" Ares asked. "I'll tell you more later, now we need to find the guys." Kinjya said. About ten minutes later they saw the guys walking towards them. "Listen we need to get out of here now!" But before they could go somewhere safe Koshemea appeared out of no where and grabbed Kinjya. "Now that we've got what we came for we'll take our leave."

Miroku was frozen stiff he couldn't move. If he would have made a move toward Kinjya would have been killed right in front of him. "Now there's nothing that monk can do." Koshemea said with an evil laugh. Kinjya was thrown onto a bed that appeared out of no where. "Naraku could you leave us alone?" Naraku nodded then left. Koshemea look her up and down, which made it look like he could undress her with his eyes. He walked over to where she was. Then took his hand and put it up her black tube top. She tried to move but with his weight holding her down she couldn't move an inch. "Why are you doing this to me?" Kinjya asks him. "Because, I've missed you." Kinjya looked away from him. But he tried to cup her chin in his hand, but she rejected it along with a mean glare. "Naraku!" Koshemea called. "Yes?" "I need you to use that spell." Naraku nodded. Koshemea got off her only to have Naraku take his place. Once Kinjya's eyes met Naraku's she couldn't look away! Naraku whispered something into her ear. She couldn't tell what he was saying. Once he was done he laid a kiss upon her forehead, and then got up and Koshemea took his place. Koshemea put his hand on her bum then she went weak. "The spell worked!" He thought to himself. "I've missed you Koshemea." "And I've missed you too Kinjya." Koshemea whispered into her ear.

Meanwhile Kouga was in the area and picked up on a female wolf scent. Without thinking he followed the scent. "I've never smelt a scent as beautiful as this one." Koga thought to himself. Once he reached the area were the scent was coming from, he knew that Naraku was there. It hit Naraku like a ton of bricks. "Shit I forgot that if she hears a male voice besides mine or Koshemea's it will break the spell!" But it was too late. Koga had reached the room where the female scent was coming from. "Get off of her!" Koga yelled. And the spell broke. Koga threw Koshemea off her, and Koga grabbed Kinjya. With two jewel shards jammed in his legs he was out of there in a flash. "I was right she is beautiful!" Koga thought to himself. About an hour later Koga reached the wolf den. When Kinjya came to she wanted to see Miroku. "So she knows mutt-face!" "Ahhhhhhhhhh!" Kinjya screamed. "What's wrong?" Koga asked. "Where am I?" "You're here in the wolf den; I picked up on your scent and saved you from that guy who was seducing you." Koga told her. "I want to see Miroku!" She demanded angrily. "As you wish, let's go." Koga smelt the scent of Sesshomaru on her. "Why do you smell like Sesshomaru?" "I serve him and protect the palace while he's away." Kinjya said.

Koga caught onto Kagome's scent and followed it. "I can sense a shard and it's closing in fast!" Kagome said. "Yo!" Koga said. Miroku noticed who was over Koga's shoulder just by the tail. "Kinjya is that you?" "Miroku?" Kinjya jumped down from Koga and ran over to her lover. "What were you doing with Koga?" "He saved me from Koshemea and Naraku." "You better not have touched her Koga!" Miroku yelled while holding Kinjya close to him. "Miroku he didn't touch me." Kinjya told him then rested her head against his chest. "Cya later Kagome." Koga said then ran off.

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Well that's the end of chapter 16! Chapter 17 will be here soon I had rewrote that chapter 3 times and I like that one the best so far out of all the chapters that I have done so far. Don't get me wrong they're all good chapters but this is the one that I had to put a lot of work and hard thought into. It took almost 3 weeks I think just wo work out the plot for that chapter. It was also hard since I had to go to school and work o it when I had free time then come home and forget what the hell I was going to write next. But I finally got the plot to come out the way that I wanted to after all those weeks that I had to put my hard thinking and working time into it to make it sooooo good! Good god I just realized that it's a sort chapter too!!!

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Miro: -Grins- "What you don't like that type of touch hmm?"

Kin: -Blushes- "Well not like that I'm not ready for that yet ok sheesh!"

Miro: -Sighs- "Alright then." -Gets off the girls-

Kin& Jade: "Finally we can breathe!!!"

Miro: -Walks over to the corner-

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