Well here's the very short chapter 17!!!! I'm sorry that it's so short! I didn't notice that till I got it out of my folder that I keep my fan fic in.. -Grumbles- Well on with the chapter you don't want to hear me you want to read the chapter and not hear me talk. Oh and side note to all the girls out there! NEVER MAKE AN ANIME CHARA. THAT REPRESENTS YOUR BOYFRIEND AND THEN HE AND YOU WILL BREAK UP WITH YOU! IT'S VERY HARD TO HAVE HIM IN THE PLOT TRUST ME I KNOW ALL TOO WELL BUT I'M GOING TO WORK AROUND THAT! HE WILL BE IN THE PLOT BUT I'LL HAVE TO IGNORE THE FACT THAT HE AND I ARE NOT TOGETHER ANYMORE! AND THAT I HAVE LOOKED PAST NOW THAT I'M GETTING A NEW B/F HERE SOON! JUST REMEMBER THAT AND GUYZ THAT ALSO GOSE FOR YOU DON'T HAVE AN ANIME CHAR. THAT MAKES YOU THINK OF YOU G/F AND YOU BOTH BREAK UP LATER! IT WILL BE HARD TO WORK WITH THEM BEING IN YOUR PLOT!!!

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DISCLAIMER: YOU GUYS KNOW THE DRILL SO I'M NOT GUNNA GO THROUGH IT, IT TAKES UP TOO MUCH OF MY TIME TO GET IT TAKEN CARED OF!

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Chapter17: "Naraku has second thoughts about Kinjya!"

Back at Naraku's hide out all he could think of is Kinjya. To him he would rather have her then of Kikyo. Even though Kinjya was with Miroku, Naraku had a burning desire to have her as his and only his. This drove Naraku nuts. So instead of sending a demon or demon puppet to do his bidding he went out to find her. It didn't very long to pick up on her scent. Meanwhile Kinjya was at a hot spring all alone. She knew someone was watching her but couldn't tell who it was. "Miroku is that you?" No one answered. This started to scare her. "Hahahaha we meet again!" At first she didn't know who it was but once the man with the deep voice came out from the shadows she knew who it was. "Ah-ah-ah, you have no use for this my dear. And don't even think about screaming for that monk or the others because I've put up a sound barrier, so if you scream no one will hear you!" Naraku said while walking over to Kinjya. Naraku's eyes were filled with lust for Kinjya's touch. And with her being fully exposed to him it made him burn with more lust.

"Inuyasha I'm starting to worry about Kinjya it's been a half-hour and she hasn't came back." "Miroku she can protect, if she's not back in the next hour we'll go look for her." Miroku nodded and thought "I hope you're right Inuyasha." An hour had gone by slowly. Meanwhile once Naraku toes had touched the tip of the water Kinjya was so scared that no words could describe what she was feeling. Naraku removed his shirt but left his pants on and walked into the water to where Kinjya stood motionless. Inside something was screaming at her to move and run from him, but with her being so scared she didn't know what to think none the less do. Once before her, he put his arms around her which made a moan escape from his lips. She tried to get away from him but he only gripped harder. "Let me go!" She pleaded him. But he just looked at her and grinned. The grin sent shills down her back. Miroku thought he heard a buzzing sound in the air. And when he looked up he saw Naraku's insects. "Oh no Kinjya!" he yelled in his mind. Without thinking he went to look for her. "Miroku don't it could be a trap!" Inuyasha yelled.

"Your body is truly beautiful." "Well to bad you're never going to have this body as yours." "Well I have it right now!" Naraku told her while kissing her gently. "Naraku please stop!" Naraku got out of the water and dried himself off. "Now's my chance to run!" She grabbed the towel and almost got away when he appeared in front of her. "And where do you think you think you're going my dear?" Naraku grabbed her and kidnapped her. "Let me go!" Naraku acted as if she didn't say anything. Inuyasha picked up on Kinjya's scent. Once Miroku and Inuyasha reached the hot spring were Kinjya was at, Inuyasha knew what had happened. "Naraku was here am I right Inuyasha?" "Yes he was here." Inuyasha told him. "Damn why does this always happen to her, she's been threw so much!" Miroku said. "Miroku it's not time for tears we need to find her." Inuyasha said. Meanwhile Naraku carried Kinjya into a room and a bed appeared out of no where. He threw her onto the bed and go on top of her. Her scent drove him crazy! Naraku had Kagura put cloths on Kinjya so that he could toy with her, so he could be amused by her disgust. "Now that I have you at my mercy what should I do?" Then Naraku saw tears falling from her face. "Why are you doing this to me?" Kinjya asked Naraku who was wiping the tears away. The next thing Kinjya knew what that he was pulling at her top. "I want you Kinjya." Naraku said in a husky voice. "Wha-what!?" Kinjya was shocked! "I want you and only you." He said while kissing her neck. Kinjya pleaded for him to stop but he didn't listen to her request.

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Well that's it for now. I'm working like crazy day and night to get these chapter written up then get them typed up and sent to Jade so she can work her magic and make the mistakes that I've made changed and make it sound a lil bit better then how I have it when I myself have it typed out at first. Thanks for all your comments and for you the readers, if you guys have any ideas feel free to e-mail me at and run 'em by me and I'll get back to you as soon and i can.....If you have any idea to have an anime char. send 'em to me and I'll try my hardest to get them into the plot they may not come in right away but that's what happens when you have to work them into the plot of the fan fiction. Jade didn't come in the fan fic till chapter 16......And if you would like to us Kinjya, Koshemea, or Rinoku ask me first.(Rinoku will come in later) If you would like to use Suaru, Tsutomi, or Ares (those are the ones that are off the top of my head right now) those chars' are Suaru-chan's aka Jade ask her first before you use them.

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Miro: -Is still sitting in the corner-

Kin: "And you better stay there for a while too monk or both myself and Jade will kick you ass and I mean it too!"

Jade: "She's not joking we'll do it too if you piss us off well enough!"

Shippo: -Sits on Kinjya's lap- "Hi Kinjya! Is Miroku up to his ole tricks again?"

Kin: -Looks at Shippo and nods- "Yeah Shippo he sure is." -Looks over at Jade- "Hey Jade can you wrap this up for me? I'm gonna go to bed I'm pooped! And the dog almost bit me!!!!! NO NOT INUYASHA OR SESSHOMARU!"

Jade: -Nods at Kinjya- "Well I guess I get to take over now !"

Miro: -Tries to move toward Kinjya-

Jade: "MONK, DON'T EVEN THINK ADBOUT IT GET BACK IN THAT CORNER RIGHT NOW YOU CAN SLEEP THERE FOR TONIGHT!"

Miro: -Shutters in fear and stays still-

Jade: SEE THAT LITTLE BOX RIGHT AT THE BOTTON LEFT HAND CORNER? WELL CLICK ON IT AND PLEASE SEND KINJYA A REVIEW SHE LOVES HEARING FOR YOU SEND HER YOUR IDEAS IF YOU HAVE ANY!"

Shippo: -Falls asleep in Kinjya's arms-

Jade: -bows- I feel that I must apologize. I update this fic for Kinjya and due to many things it has been delayed, this is my fault not hers, so please accept my apology. I'm very sorry. –bows more- Please keep reading and I hope you all enjoy the story.