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Legolover
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Chapter: 10 No matter of Luck at all
Will and Cille
Will and Cille made their way down the dark dirty streets. They ran into few people fleeing for their lives. They ran further into town, and found two buildings on fire, and a bunch of pirates trying to either rape or kill people.
Cille had a disgusted look on her face as a pirate chased a pretty woman down some stairs. The lady was in her white night gown, and carrying her child. Will noticed this too, and felt the same hatred for pirates grow.
"Stop!" Will yelled after the pirate. The pirate stopped to look at him.
"Who are ye to tell meh pritt' boy?" The pirate swooned.
"Just shut up and die." Will said, picking this language up from Claire.
Cille looked at him wide eyed, but was grateful for saving the lady.
The kept defending people, and themselves, while slowly making their way down to the docks. That's when they saw Evelyn. Evelyn looked at Cille and smiled.
"HI!" She yelled. Cille's mouth dropped.
"HI!" She repeated annoyed. Will Turned around to see Evelyn getting kidnapped by pirates. His stomach knotted.
"EVELYN!" He yelled. Evelyn blinked. She then realized she had to act like she was 'scared'. Of course to Evelyn, scared wasn't in her vocabulary. But she attempted to try it.
"Help meeeeee! I'm uhhh…. Will! Help!" She screamed trying not to laugh at the same time. Will obviously took it.
"Eve-" He was starting to run for her as was Cille when they were stopped by a pirate in front of them with a bomb in his hands. He wore a red hat, and had a big thick beard. He smiled at them, revealing his golden teeth.
"Buh boi'." He said, and dropped the lit bomb at the feet of Will. Will stared at it wide eyed. Cille looked up at the pirate.
"Okaaayyy…" She said. The pirate looked panicked all of a sudden. Suddenly Will dropped backward, and Cille turned around just in time to be hit over the head with a pot, just like Will.
Evelyn
Evelyn saw all this and mumbled 'Oh my God, stupid retards…' She was then dragged further down the docks towards The Black Pearl.
Jack and Claire
Jack and Claire watched The Black Pearl shoot cannons aimlessly at everything. Even at the ocean where there was no one around.
"Pricks." Claire mumbled.
"It's the Pearl." Jack said with a glint in his eyes.
"The pearl? I have eard' stories of er'. She leaves no survivors behin'." Said the prisoner from before.
"Then where do the stories come from I wonder?" Jack retorted sarcastically. Claire snorted.
"As my Daddy used to say, until I ended up here, 'Think before you speak'." Claire said. The prisoner glared at her. Jack's eyes widened. He grabbed Claire, and ducked to the side with her. A large hole had a appeared right by the cell with the prisoners in it.
Only a small hole was lead into Claire and Jack's cell. The prisoner whom they had become such great friends with stayed behind his friends, and told them, "My apologies friends, but you have no matter of luck a' all!"
He laughed, and disappeared out the hole.
Claire looked at Jack.
"Now what?" She asked, as she stood up, and dusted her stupid yellow (now muddied up dress too) dress off. Jack grabbed the bone from the cell where the prisoners had been and tried to lour the dog over to him.
"So much for a tha' ye." Jack said. Obviously mad at Claire for not thanking him.
"Right. Thanks." Claire said. Jack winked at her, and turned back to the dog.
"Come 'ere boy." Jack said. He let out a whistle, as the dog slowly appeared under the bench right by the stairs.
"Jack this will probably be the most disappointing thing in your life." Claire said watching. She was waiting for the noise to come so the dog would run off.
"Yea' ri' mate." Jack said, and called it something you probably wouldn't call him. But as soon as he said this, the dog ran off, and down some stairs to their left, which probably led to more cells.
"Noo!" Jack yelled, "I didn' mean It!" Jack yelled.
"SO. Did you feel the disappointment?" Claire asked Jack. Jack was about to come back with a smart remark when two pirates appeared in front of them.
"This isn' the weapn' room!" The black one said. His hair had some dread locks in them, and he had a slight beard and mustache.
The white one whom wore a ridiculous hat, pointed at Jack.
"Well, well, well. What do we got 'ere?" The dread locks guy asked. He spat at Jack's hand, but thankfully missed.
"Captain Ja' Sparro' and whas' this? His little-" Claire cut him off.
"Don't say anything you'll regret later pal!" Claire yelled. They ignored her.
"Las' time I saw ye, you were shrinking into the distance on tha' God forsaken island." He said.
"Well if it's so God forsaken, why was he rescued?" Claire snapped. They both looked at her for the first time.
"One more word-" Said the white guy, but Jack cut him off.
"I'd jus' li' to point out. Tha' the deepest circle of hell is reserved for betrayers-" Jack was cut of by a hand reaching through the bars at his neck. The hand quickly turned into a skeleton.
"So… I guess there is a curse eh Jack?" Claire asked safely away from reach. Jack would glared at her but only said, "Yes luv." But it came out sarcastic as it were meant.
"You know nothing of hell." He said, and let go of Jack. He and his 'friend' went up the stairs. Claire was pissed.
"WE JUST SAW THE DEVIL! DOES THAT COUNT?" She yelled after them. She and Jack heard a 'I'm going tuh kill tha'' But he was cut off by his friend who told him that we'd be hanged in the morning. So they left.
Jack looked at Claire while he started to sharpen the bone.
"Weren' ye scared lass?" He asked. Claire's eyes went wide.
"OH MY GOD! Don't tell me I'm on Scared Tactics!" She looked around for any cameras hidden.
"Whas' tha'?" Jack asked. Claire sighed a sigh of relief.
"No, I wasn't scared. But any who, start trying to pick that door. I'm tired of being here." Claire said. Jack started to grumble, and complain about her. But he still went to work as Claire waited patiently, while singing again. But softly.
A/N: I don't know about you guys, but I thought this chapters descriptive was good. I'm sorry it's so short, but I wanted to finish this chapter for my favorite reviewers. So please review guys. And find out who the next chapter will be dedicated to!
-Milla
