AN Yes, yes naughty me I know I haven't updated in ages its just I've been really busy and caught up in loads of other stuff and I've got fics on fiction press 2 and also I've been suffering from a LOT of writers block on this fic and I'm not sure what to put next, I know what the ending is but I'm not sure how to fill in gaps etc.
ALSO NOTE 2 ALL; I rewrote the last chapter the bit with Verloch cuz it weren't sounding right to me and thank you all for your reviews and plz go back and read it and lemme know if it sounds ok! AND HERE ARE THE REPLIES!
The Spiked Dragon; Oh you reviewed me three times in one chappie! THANKYOU! I'm glad you like this and I'm sorry I kept you waiting for so long its just I had no idea what to write. If you review again why don't you leave your email so I can send you an alert when I update? Lol. I hope you like this chapter.
AerinM: you are my most loyal reviewer and I salute you AerinM *salutes AerinM* also I added you to my msn contacts on messenger and once when you were online I said hello and it was your mum on the other end and I felt really embarrassed, just to let you know that I dropped in and said hello. Lol. Hope you like the chappie!
Kendra; Yo girl! Luv ur reviews your just so encouraging! I'm not sure yet if he should rape Sara I was going to put it last chappie but I decided against it so its only a bit of making out, nothing major. Lol. I couldn't really remember what colour Merloch's eyes were in the anime but I reckoned they were red so I made Verloch's black just to make it that little ickle bit more mysterious, lol. HOPE U LIKE THE CHAPPIE! Also do you want me to send you a notification saying ive updated since you do leave your email?
Keyo-red Angel of hope; lol yeh Merloch was one of my fave chars 2 that's why I based a fic on him. Lol he's just so funny and cool. Well you'll just have to read and find out if he escapes after all tun tun tun.
SGCred; Thanx 4 the criticism on chappie nine! My teacher always used to say that to! I might abandon Hidden love because I' just way to busy but I made a vow to myself that I'd finish this one! I'm glad you like it I'm so touched, I have the making to be a writer *huggles* thanx! Hope you like the chappie.
Baby-Prue; you put me in favourites! IM SO HAPPY! Hope you like the chappie!
MIROKULOVER; I am evil ent I? Lol here's the long awaited chappie 11 though!
The_Ranting_Loon; Yay I'm happy I finally updated 2! I've been having writers block and I still do so this chappie prolly ent that gud.
IF I'VE MISSED ANYONE IM SORRY AND LET ME KNOW CUZ I'LL REPLY 2 U NEXT CHAPPIE!
Also sorry if this chapter isn't that gud but ive been suffering from seriously evil writers block!
Bloodpact
Chapter 10
Sara woke up, the cold air from the open window lapping against her face. As she got up to close it she felt a sudden jolt surge thorough her head as she was met with a terrible headache.
She couldn't remember what had happened last night, or what had happened most of yesterday at that, all that she knew was that she needed a nice long nap…
Sara absentmindedly closed the window then clumsily made her way back to the bed, pulling the covers over herself and falling into a deep slumber…
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Sara woke up as she was shook awake fiercely by none other than Cathy.
"Miss Sara you have to hurry and get up its already midday and you must have your breakfast at once or the Master will not be pleased!" She exclaimed.
Sara groaned. "Fine I'm getting up justgive me another five…"
"NO YOU WILL GET UP AT ONCE OR ELSE I'LL GET IN TROUBLE!" Screeched Cathy as she fiercely tugged off the covers.
Sara yawned. "Fine I'm getting up as she opened her eyes."
But by now Cathy had already got off of the bed and brought forward a dress along with some jewellery.
As Sara spotted the dress she was rendered speechless.
"Cathy I am NOT wearing that!"
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The room smelt of dust and rotting flesh, the walls were damp and dirty and the cell was dark and cold the only source of heat and light located in a small bracket near the entrance holding a flaming torch.
Merloch had been in these cells quite often during his stay here, but it had never been him who was tied to the grimy walls by the force of chains and shackles, he had merely been a spectator.
And judging by how long he had been in there if his calculations were correct it would only be a matter of minutes before the guard or a servant or someone would come in with food. Too bad his calculations weren't correct.
It must have been at least two hours later when he was sitting there and his stomach had already gone through two reruns of Greensleeves and was now moving onto a touch of Mozart mixed with what sounded familiar to D12's My Band. Yep, he was definitely going insane.
About two minutes later when his stomach had moved onto Cry Me a River by Justin Timberlake he heard a knock at the door before it was gently slid open by a young man who looked barely fourteen with a mat of black hair and cold grey eyes supporting a large tray.
Merloch was taken by shock as he instantly recognised the figure who in turn was staring at him, his eyes wide open.
"Merloch is that you?" he asked placing the tray before the bound vampire.
"Anthion what are you still doing here?" asked Merloch. "I'd have thought Verloch would have kicked you out."
Anthion shook his head. "Older brother decided to keep me to help him out with running things. Although I didn't count on seeing you here ever again. Why are you here?" asked the younger vampire sitting himself down upon the damp floor.
"Verloch did some sort of set up and made me come here," replied Merloch.
Anthion looked even more shocked at this to say the least as he hastily replied. "But older brother was awfully happy when you left since that meant you were forfeiting the throne over to him so why would he make you come back here?"
"That's what I was wondering," replied Merloch. "Actually Anthion since you're here anyway could you help me, I mean I need to get out of here and back to where I was along with my companion. Is there anyway you know I can get out?"
Anthion sat in silence for a few seconds as he pondered this he then replied, "I'll try my best to help you and I'll come back tomorrow and tell you what I find."
Merloch nodded and with that Anthion left the cell closing the door firmly behind himself.
Merloch looked down at his food and groaned inwardly, water and a lumpy looking stew, how delicious…
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Sara grimaced as Cathy led her before the mirror.
It wasn't that she didn't look nice, no far from that it was just that Cathy's pick of clothes were not up to what she would wear. By saying that she did not mean that they were not rich enough for her as such no it was not that the reason that she did not wish to wear what she was wearing was defined in one word, skimpy.
Her hair was straight and fell daintily below her waist and she was wearing a long, tight, black armless dress the neckline of the bodice of which went down a bit too much for her liking. Upon her neck was a single silver necklace and on her arms were long black gloves. On her feet were small dainty black high heeled shoes and her eyes were accented by thick eye liner.
Before Sara could survey her reflection any longer Cathy had grabbed her arm and whisked her out into the corridor.
TBC..
Authors Note; Yes yes I know it was like a filler chappie but I have writers block and I felt guilty about not updating.
Also this makes you all feel better seeing as Verloch did NOT rape her although it's a matter being considered. lol.
I want all your opinions on should I have any lemon or lime?
Plz lemme know!
Poll question
Do you reckon Sara should go with Merloch or Verloch? And if with Verloch do you think Merloch should get a girl to?
