Okay. I finally got around to fixing up this story! Tee hee!

The inu gang dressed in Hawaiian outfits throws a party. Mir, San, Inu, and Kag are drunk and Kirara and Shippo are high off of catnip. They all dance around a bomb fire and sing Britney Spear's "Toxic".

Umm...okay... ;;;; But seeing as my characters have gone insane at the moment, I might not be able to get to it after all...

Everyone: stops dancing and blinks at pinksakura

Inu: throws a sake bottle at pinksakura who is knocked out instantly Ya better—hiccup—do it now or I'll—hiccup—c-castrate you!

wakes up You can't castrate me!!! There's nothing to castrate!!! I'm a girl remember!!! What kind of right minded boy would name themselves pinksakura!!!!

Inu: Right—hiccup—that's...what I said. passes out while everyone else goes back to singing

-.-;;;;;;;; Okaaay...that was wild... But anyhoo! I finally got back to it so here is the first chapter of the revised story!

Disclaimer: I just have one simple question. WHY MUST I EVEN BOTHER WITH THE DISCLAIMER!!!! I mean obviously I don't own Inuyasha or I would be living in luxury in my own place and not with some annoying little siblings!! I probably wouldn't even be wasting my time writing stories here but be in Hawaii relaxing my ass off with diamond and gold chains covering every fucking part of my body and living like a balla!!! But you just have to make me feel bad don't you!!! T.T

Inu gang: We're fine now!

-.-;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; And right now, I need an aspirin.


Daughter of Mine: The Revised Version

Chapter 1: Girl and Argument

A girl climbed out of the Honekui, the bone eater well. She looked no older than 7 and was very tall for her age. She wore a blue kimono, perfectly suited for a festival decorated with red and yellow flowers. The sleeves were long and full, hiding her hands and perfect for growing into. It was tied together by a red obi coming into a bow in the back, matching perfectly with her red, yellow, and blue hat, with her hair tucked in it carefully and neatly. Even though hats do exist in the Sengoku Jidai, this kind was one you didn't see too often. Her golden eyes glistened in the sun as she stepped out of the dark well. With her, she carried a plain, bulgy brown sack and a Japanese umbrella. There was a slight POOF and a cloud of smoke and the umbrella disappeared, a small white dog with amber eyes in it's place staring up in front of the girl thoughtfully.

She crouched down and gave the dog an affectionate rub on the head, smiling brightly. "Look! We made it Chibi Inu! Now all we have to do is find Kaede-sama! But, where does she live? Do you know?"

The dog growled in confusion.

"You don't know either, huh?" She tilted her head to the side cutely. She stood up and stretched. "Well, I guess we could go the non-obvious way and ask someone. Just like Uncle M. said: (she put on a raspy old-like voice) 'You must not be noticed by anyone about who you are. Try to be seen by the least amount of people as possible.' Whatever."

The kawai dog just stared at her, listening to her every word. The strange girl sighed and scanned the forest around her, fingering a necklace under her clothes. "I'm not sure if everything is the same like back home, so maybe we should ask someone." She pointed a clawed finger to the right of her. "Alright! I think we should go this way."

Her dog barked sharply below her. She looked at him, frowning. "I'm sure it's that way and we're going to go that way whether you like it or not. My nose never fails me." Chibi Inu gave a doggy roll of the eyes.

She nodded and smiled. "That's settled then. Time for some cover up!" She closed her eyes focusing on what she had to do. Suddenly, her body began to glow. As soon as it began, the light faded and the girl still stood there, appearing as if nothing happened at all.

She pulled her hat off slowly. When it was off, rich raven locks of hair cascaded down her back and ended at a little ways past her butt. Her once golden eyes had become pools of dark hazel.

"Well, I'm ready so let's go!" She scooped up her dog in her arms and headed along a path towards her intended direction...away from Kaede's village.
Fast forward in time 30 minutes, Inuyasha and the gang were resting in a shady area off the path after heading toward some rumors of jewel shards. They had only been walking an hour when Inuyasha had declared he was hungry and they stopped for a lunch break. Kagome was making the ramen while Sango was sitting against a tree eyeing an innocent-looking Miroku, who was also sitting against a near by tree, clutching her boomerang bone defensively. Shippo was doing his daily task of tormenting Inuyasha. Again... Kagome just ignored everything around her, even the loud "HENTAI!" and bone shattering slaps and bonks. That is...until Shippo came running to her, crying, ruining her peace.

"KAAGOOMMEEE!!!!!" the kitsune screamed, plopping into her arms.

"What is it Shippo? Calm down and then tell me what's wrong," she said, even though she knew exactly what's wrong.

"Inuyasha—sniff–hit me–sniff–really hard!" Kagome sighed. 'Everyday the same thing,' She thought solemnly.

"Inuyasha, Osuwari!" Wham!! "And stop hitting Shippo!" Kagome then turned to Shippo.

"Shippo, stop messing with Inuyasha. Also, I'm going to the stream to get some water. Stay here and be good, ok?" Shippo nodded while wiping his tears and went to play with Kirara.

Inuyasha, finally prying himself off the ground, said, "Oi! What you do that for, bitch?!"

Instead of making some witty comment back like she usually would, Kagome just went right past him without saying a word. Inuyasha continued on ranting and wailing at her while Kagome thought to herself, completely ignoring him. 'If I leave Inuyasha here with Shippo they'll start fighting again and without me here, there will be know one to referee! Can't really count on Sango either. She has her hands full with Miroku. Better take Inuyasha with me.'

"...you hear me wench!" She was snapped out of her thoughts when she saw Inuyasha screaming in her face.

"Oh! Uh... Inuyasha! Want to come to the stream with me?" Inuyasha, a little taken aback by this question, replied with a "Keh!" and they were off. The walk to the stream was quiet, but it was a comfortable silence.

When they arrived at the stream, Inuyasha watched as Kagome filled up the...what was it called? Oh right, caneen? Oh well, whatever. He watched as she bent down next to the stream, her hair blowing in the wind and face glistening in the sun like an angel. 'Kami she's beautiful... Matte! Where did that come from!' he thought, frustrated. 'I love Kikyo don't I? Right? I owe Kikyo everything. It is, after all, my fault she died. Besides, Kagome's just my shard detector. I don't have any feelings for her... Right?'

Kagome got up from beside the stream. When she turned around, she noticed Inuyasha in deep thought and staring at her with glazed eyes. 'I wonder what's wrong with him. He's never in such a deep thought.' "Inuyasha, daijobu ka? Why are you staring at me?"

Inuyasha snapped out of his trance at the sound of Kagome's voice. When he looked into her eyes he saw it full of concern and worry and maybe...love? Tch! Yeah right! He had to refrain from bursting out laughing. He's just seeing things. He blinked and answered rudely, while crossing his arms over his chest, "Nothing wench! Why would you think something was wrong?"

Kagome immediately fumed after he called her 'wench'. "I was just concerned! You don't have to bite my head off! You were just in deep thought and you're hardly ever in such deep thought no less think at all!"

Inuyasha fumed at the comment. "Are you saying I'm stupid, bitch?!"

Kagome rolled her eyes. "Of course, baka. How did you guess?"

"Wench, what is your problem?! I don't know why you're all yelling at me when I didn't do anything!" he shouted in her face.

"Stop calling me that! You're such a jerk do you know that! I was just being concerned for you, but you just have to yell in my face, don't you!"

"I don't need you to be concerned for me! I'm just fine on my own!"

The bickering pair continued arguing heatedly, totally oblivious to the approaching person.
I stopped this at the original place for the old chapter since it made more sense. Again, I will say this. I'm really sorry to the people who already read this. I wasn't happy with the story and how can an authoress write if she has no passion in what she's writing? I hope you understand. I'm going to Chicago on Monday so I probably won't be able to update. I'll probably have it written though so when I come back in a week, I'll start typing it up. I'll have time to do it; you don't have to worry about that since we're driving. A fucking 12 hour drive with my loudmouth 3-year-old step-brother, wierd 7-year-old half-sister, and annoying 8-year-old step-sister. How fun...

NOTE: Please let me know if my profanity bothers you (even though I don't know why since you are in a PG-13 fic). It kinda runs in my blood and sometimes I hve that sudden urge since I can't say them outloud without getting in trouble. Gomen (sorry) if I made you uncomfortable!

I'm so proud of myself. I finally got off my lazy ass and got to this story. I'm so happy; I think I should treat myself. Double fudge chocolate brownie with ice cream land, here I come! Yum!

Japanese Translations:

Honekui—bone eater well

Sengoku Jidai—Feudal era

Chibi Inu—small dog (I love this name. It's so adorable! )

Kawai—cute

Hentai—pervert

Kitsune—fox demon

Osuwari—sit (my favorite word )

Oi—hey

Kami—god

Matte—wait

Daijobu ka—Are you okay?

Baka—idiot

Whew! So many words. I didn't realize that I expanded my Japanese vocabulary so much. Okay. You know what to do.

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