OF DOODLES, FAT FROGS
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James beamed.
'' Ok. I've been watching you – ''Lily raised an eyebrow.
'' – and you're saying the words fine, it's just your wand movements that you're having trouble with. You gotta swish at the wrist when you bring it up, then arc it and flick. Like this,'' he ploughed on, demonstrating the movement with his own wand. '' Now you try,''Lily, concentrating hard, brought her wand up and spun it through the air. Nothing happened.'' What am I doing wrong? ''James stood up, then stepped behind her and placed his arms over Lily's, ignoring her protests. He drew her in close, then guided her hands, before stepping away. Lily's heart was jumping, for reasons unfathomable to her. She shook her head.
'' Thanks. Ok. L'ame...'' As she imitated James' movements, a white mirage of a Siberian tiger burst from the tip of her wand and prowled the room before coming to a stop before her. Exclaiming delightedly, she too reached out to touch it before it faded away.'' Excellent work, Miss Evans. Twenty points to Gryffindor,'' '' Cool! Thanks James! '' Lily cried, flashing him a dazzling smile. '' I can't believe I'd be a tiger. Cool. And you'd be a stag. Wow,''James grinned. Somehow, he felt the rest of the class would not be long enough.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Lily slung her bag over her shoulder, peering at James and what he was writing on a crumpled piece of parchment. Giving up, since he was hiding it with his hands, Lily jabbed him with her quill.'' C'mon. Class is over, James,'' '' Huh? '' he looked up at her, confused, then when he realised everyone had left and McGonagall was glaring at him, he shoved the parchment into his open bag and made for the door, Lily behind him.As he sauntered into the corridor, McGonagall flung open a window in her office and a light breeze tugged the parchment out of James' open rucksack. Lily picked it up before it fluttered to the floor, hurrying after him. She was just about to call out to him when her eye caught what was written on the vellum. Underneath a diagram of a snitch were the words:L.E.J.P.
Lily and James.
Lily Evans and James Potter.
L.P.
Lily Potter.
Lily Evans Potter.
L.E.P.
Lily E. Potter.
Mr and Mrs James and Lily Potter.
Mrs Lily Potter.
Mz. Lily Potter.
Mrs. L. Potter.
Mr and Mrs James Potter.
James 4 Lily forever.
Lily, her heart thumping wildly, coughed, then stuffed the parchment into her pocket, unsure of how she felt. Faint. That was it. Very faint. She swayed a little, her head swimming. James was ahead of her, patiently waiting until she caught up.'' Are you ok? '' he asked in concern, taking in her flushed face and bright eyes.
'' Yeah...I'm...er...great, fine, dandy. Just great. Never been better. Totally ok. Nothing wrong. Nothing to hide...um...er...yeah,'' she babbled, smiling falsely at him. He narrowed his eyes suspiciously.
'' Yeah. Suuuure you are,'' he raised his eyebrows. Then his eyes flicked downward and he saw the creased parchment jutting out of her pocket.'' Could I see...that? '' he asked in a strangled voice, obviously recognising the scrawl as his own.
Lily bit her lip. '' Look, I...''
'' Accio parchment,'' The paper flew into his hands. Reluctantly, he opened it. Lily scrunched her eyes closed, then hesitantly cracked one open. James was standing very still, his mouth opening and closing in shock. Flummoxed, Lily realised he was blushing furiously, his face contorted with humiliation.
'' I...uh...I was just...um...messing around. Doodling. I...'' he whispered weakly, hanging his head in despair.Lily nodded with false cheeriness.'' It's fine! No problem! I don't mind! Nope! Just fine! '' she bellowed hoarsely. He dragged a hand through his messy hair, then rubbed his eyes hard.
'' I'm so sorry. You probably don't need this...stalkerish...but I...just fooling...''Lily bit her lip. Her heart was still going a hundred miles an hour, but why she didn't know. Nerves? Excitement? Embarrassment? How did she really feel about him? He obviously liked her a lot. A lot. Surprisingly, that thought made her smile. A true smile. She slipped her hand into James', squeezing it affectionately.
'' It's fine, honestly. Come on. We've a club to go to,'' James stared at her hand, willingly holding his, then grinned.'' Right back at you,'' he murmured, before tearing down the hallway, Lily running along with him.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
'' Hey people! Sirius and Remus told us all about your little predicament, so we decided to bring the ' getting ready ' part to you, Lily. '' Adalia greeted enthusiastically, forcefully dragging Lily and James along the third floor corridor.'' Bails and Sirius decided it would be fun if we all get ready for the club together, so we're all in this mad room Sirius and Remus found. It's so odd. It has dressing rooms for the boys, with their names on the doors and cool Japanese drape things for the girls, with our names on them. But, obviously, you and James will be sharing a dressing room. I mean, you two even have to shower together! ''Both ignored Lily's indignant splutters.
'' Room of Requirement,'' James offered. '' It's a room on the third floor. If you think really hard about what you need and walk past three times, it just appears. ''Adalia nodded. '' Oh right. It's mad anyway. Well, here we are,'' She clicked open the burnished door, propelling Lily and James into the vast room beyond. A row of marble sinks lined one wall. Gilt mirrors lined the opposite. A door on the wall straight ahead was labelled ' Bathroom '. On the right side of the room, near the sinks, stood four Japanese stands, behind which the girls would change. An array of clothes lay across the large couch which stood against one wall. On the other side of the room stood four patitioned walls, separating the three Marauders, who stood there grinning.'' Well! Come now, Lilykins and Jamesieboy! SHOWERTIME! '' screeched Sirius excitedly, hurling them into the bathroom and swiftly locking the door. Lily groaned.'' Alohomora,'' She tapped the lock. Nothing happened.
'' Lads! Let us out! '' she screamed, banging on the door. All that met her ears was uproarious laughter and catcalls on Sirius' part. Resigned, Lily slumped against the wall.
'' What are we going to do? '' she moaned, glancing around. In the corner stood a shower cubicle. On the other side of the room a huge bath of swimming pool proportions was dug into the mosaic tiled floor. James shrugged, a mischievous glint in his eye.'' Well...we have to shower. It's just disgusting if we don't. And I suppose we could stay at Hogwarts instead of going to the club...but we'd have the same problem tomorrow morning and every day this week. It's best if we just get it over with. ''Lily shook her head, frowning. '' No...there has to be some way...'' She stared hard at the shower cubicle, then at the bath, thinking. Then her eyes lit up.'' Swimming togs! '' she crowed triumphantly. James' face fell.'' Turn around,'' Lily commanded, then transfigured her robes into a deep green bikini. She closed her eyes tightly as James changed. It was hard to ignore him when he kept leaping in front of her, parading himself around the place, but Lily tried. She really did.
'' Will you stop? '' she shrieked as he jumped in her way again.'' What? But you know you want me,'' he stuck his bottom lip out, then tossed his head and, fluttering his eyelashes dramatically, cocked his hip in a feminine way and pouted, whirling the drawstring on his dark blue swimming trunks like a lasso. Lily burst out laughing, tears gathering in her eyes. James grinned, then stooped down by the bath and experimentally turned the levers on the chrome taps, allowing gushes of foaming, frothing soap to flow freely from the faucet. Within minutes, the huge, oversize bath was brimming with a mixture of swirling, colourful soaps, perfumes, and, of course, warm water.
'' Jump in! '' he cried, drastically launching himself into the air and landing in the bath with a huge splash, water slopping over the sides onto the tiled floor. Lily shook her head and, smiling, slid in.
She began to scrub her hair with scented shampoo, the water coming up to her midriff in the shallow end.
'' Why a black widow? ''
'' Cos I'm dangerous, Potter. My bite is deadly,''
He grinned.
'' You wouldn't bite me,'' he stated, his eyebrows arched, his lips twitching in amusement. Lily regarded him through lidded eyes.'' Don't be so sure,'' Then she shook her head as he grinned. Flirting. She did not flirt with James Potter. It had to stop. She began to soap herself, avoiding his eyes.'' I've one too. '''' Huh? '' Lily asked, after losing the thread of the conversation. James turned. Tattoed onto his left shoulderblade was a golden lion grappling with a white stag which had reared up on its haunches. Surrounding the two animals was a letter, in black ink. M.
'' For Marauder,'' Lily commented softly. James nodded.'' How did you know to get a stag? '' she asked curiously. James shrugged, the lie falling effortlessly from his lips.
'' I always loved stags. Favourite animal,''Unconsciously, unaware of what she was doing, Lily reached out and traced the tattoo with her fingers. Then she yanked her hand back as if she had been burned. A weird tingling had shot up her arm. She didn't like it. It was a strange feeling...it must have been the fumes from the soaps or something.
James turned back to look at her, his gaze searching. She eluded his stare, concentrating on rinsing her hair. Eventually, he gave up.'' Accio towels,'' Lily called, hauling herself out of the bath and wrapping herself tightly in a fluffy towel. James did the same. Lily grabbed his arm as, rubbing his hair with a handtowel, he made to leave.'' Wait. I've to shave,'' James stared at her as, airily, she pointed at the two razors lying on the shelf on the wall. A male black one and a pink feminine one lay next to a bottle of unisex shaving cream. Lily smiled inwardly. If anything turned a guy off, it had to be watching a girl shave her legs. True, she didn't really need to shave yet, but it might totally freak James out. It would be funny.James narrowed his eyes, then shrugged, smiling. '' Sure. I gotta shave anyway,''Vaguely, Lily heard muffled laughter from the room beyond but dismissed it. Those guys were really immature. Lily sat herself into the one of the chairs by the wall and propped her long legs up on the other one. Flippantly, she grabbed the razor and, after dousing her legs with shaving cream, began the familiar rhythmic strokes upward.To her utter consternation, James didn't appear turned off at all. In fact, as she stripped the cream from her legs and more of her smooth, silky skin was revealed, he just stared, transfixed. She sighed loudly. Maybe this hadn't been such a good idea. It just seemed to be attracting his attention toward her shapely legs.
'' Er...James? '''' What? '' he asked stupidly. '' Oh right...yeah...''
Then he turned toward the mirror and began shaving his chin. Unfortunately, he only seemed to be staring at Lily in the mirror and appeared totally unaware of what he was doing. It wasn't long before he had nicked himself, a deep cut forming on his skin.
'' Ouch,'' he muttered, hastily wiping at the red blood. Lily looked up. Immediately, her heart started its familiar thumping and she leapt up, discarding her razor.'' Oh are you ok? Come here,'' she cried, concerned. Trying not to smile, James approached her, feigning hurt. Grabbing a tissue, she pressed it gently against the cut, her hand against his cheek. He closed his eyes as her fingers fluttered over his skin and her other hand raised to cup his face.All of a sudden, the atmosphere became charged with chemistry. Breathing heavily, Lily let the pad of her thumb skim his cheek again...and again...and again. He opened his eyes and, her breath catching in her throat, her heartrate going wild, she realised his eyes had darkened, the irises had dilated. He bent his head and Lily raised hers in return, knowing she would regret it but not caring. Beyond reason. Just as her lips were about to touch his, an earshattering wail pierced the air and Lily, losing her footing, spun around in shock. James swore behind her as Moaning Myrtle's jealous form rose from the depths of the toilet bowl.'' I come in here to see the new bathroom...and see this! You! Throwing! Yourself! At! Him! '' she sobbed loudly, screaming in envy.
Lily hastily dried her legs with the towel, then, shooting James a ' you better follow me or else ' look, turned and began to knock desperately on the door to the other room. She felt really 't believe she'd been about to kiss him. Again.'' Lads, we're finished! Let us out! '' she yelled, drowning out the heartwrenching sighs from Myrtle as she dived unceremoniously into the toilet bowl and floated along the U Bend. The door clicked open slowly. Lily hurried in, James behind her. Neither was looking at the other, disappointment written on James' face and, if anyone had looked long enough, a strange longing and fear on Lily's.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
'' Lily! You look fabulous, girl! '' Bailey shouted. Lily had changed behind a partition separating herself and James. They each had to stand very close to the wooden frame so as not to be more than three feet away from eachother, but they had managed it.She was wearing a black corset and a filmy black jacket over her shoulders, a red rose stitched into the shoulder, over a black ra ra skirt low on the hips and black slouch boots. Her hair was tied up, with a few free tendrils loose around her face. Her makeup was beautiful as usual, the green eyeliner bringing out her eyes, the blush across her cheeks accenting her beestung lips.James had poked his head over the frame immediately, Bailey noticed with amusement. His jaw dropped. He nodded emphatically, his mouth opening and closing.'' Yeah...great...'' he managed, hoarsely, eventually. Lily beamed.'' Like Kate Moss,'' Bailey remarked slyly. '' You'd look good in a sack, just like her,''
Lily shook her head, snorting. '' Puh-leease, Bails. Kate Moss is gorgeous. I look nothing like her, for one. And while, yeah, she'd look fabulous in a potato bag, I certainly wouldn't,''
'' I'd take you anyday in a potato bag,'' James contributed mischievously. As Bailey and Lily stared at him, he ducked his head.'' I...uh, I said that out loud, did I? Um..yeah, I'll be leaving now...'' he said shamefacedly. When he left, Bailey and Lily burst into peals of laughter, but, oddly enough, Lily's sounded a bit forced.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
'' Damn. There's no way I'll get in! '' Lily murmured, panicking, to James as the line dwindled and they became closer to the club. James glanced at her.'' Course you will! You just gotta be confident. You don't look that young. About nineteen,'''' Yeah? And this club is over 21s only! '' Lily whispered frantically.
'' Relax, Lils. Just be cool. I'm telling you, if you're confident, you'll get in, no problem,'' he assured her. '' And, on the offchance that you don't, I'll stay out with you. We can have a few drinks in Hogsmeade,'''' You'd have to stay with me anyway, cos of the spell, you dolt,'' she replied, smiling slightly nonetheless.'' Yeah...but I'd stay with you anyway,'' he grinned. Lily grinned back. He really was very sweet.'' ID? '' one of the bouncers said in a flat, bored voice. Lily strolled up to him, tossing her head and flashing him a gorgeous smile. She flicked the card Sirius and James had forged for her at the guy, sighing. He peered closely at the picture, back at Lily and back to the glowing blue card again. She never let her confident façade waver. James shook his head admiringly. You had to admire her spunk.'' In,'' he said eventually. Lily blew him a kiss, then tapped her foot impatiently as she waited for James to join her.The club was dark, strobe lights blinking and glimmering from the ceiling, bathing the discofloor in pools of glaring light. A bar ran the length of the club on one side, various magic drinks on display. The DJ was barely visible from his podium, it was so crowded with people, some merely wearing wizard robes, others dressed to impress.'' Hey, like. Great you could make it, like. We're going to, like, have such a great night, like,'' Richelle Kuchova said sweetly, dancing up to James and sliding her arm around him. He nudged her off, then let his hand settle on Lily's waist, pulling her closer to him. For once, Lily didn't object, discreetly sticking her tongue out at Richelle as she humphed and spun on her heel, walking over to the bar in a huff.When Lily turned back to James, he was grinning at her. She hastily closed her mouth, having the grace to look slightly ashamed.'' Hey, don't stop sticking your tongue out on my account,'' James said bashfully, smirking at her. '' You've a nice tongue. It can do cool things. You should show it off,'' he added suggestively. Lily blushed.X It can do cool things...where does he get off?! Still...it's like saying you're a good french...interesting XShe sauntered over to the bar.
'' Two firewhiskies, please,'' James said immediately, smiling at Lily's suspicious look. He passed her the smoking goblet indulgently, then knocked back his own in one go. Lily raised an eyebrow, impressed. Then she raised the glass to her lips and drank. It was bitter, raw and burning on her throat. She spluttered and coughed, her eyes streaming. A strange warmth invaded her then, like a flock of pixies were having a hula in the deepest recesses of her stomach. Lily swallowed the last drop, ignoring the intense dagger of flame spearing her mouth.James grinned. '' Guts, Lils. '''' Don't call me Lils,'''' Ok. Sure, Lils,''
She sighed in resignation. She'd get nowhere with him now. He'd be calling her Lils for the rest of her days. Just then, Lily's favourite song blared into life in the club.
'' I looove this song! '' she cried, heading energetically out onto the dancefloor, her hips swaying. James followed. As Lily caught the attention of a tall, tanned and very blonde Spanish guy, winking provocatively at her, James shoved him out of the way.'' What the hell do you see in him? '' he asked moodily, glaring at the guy who hastily turned away. James had a very murderous and frightening stare. Lily jabbed him in the chest.'' Hey. You listen up, pal. I barely even looked at him and you're all...all...Mr. T from the A team! Back off, ok? I am not your property. You cannot just scare guys off cos you can't have me, alright? Get it? '' she hissed angrily, painfully hitting him in the chest.James couldn't really tell what she was saying because of the loud music, but nodded along wisely, gathering the gist from her spitting eyes and very pissed off expression.'' Yeah, sure. I can't have you,'''' Exactly,'' she said in satisfaction, turning her back on him and waving at Bailey who was dancing wildly with Sirius, drinks in their hands. As Lily began to dance fairly close to another guy, who looked like he was enjoying her attentions, she felt James press up against her from behind.
'' Get off,'' she muttered crossly. He dipped his head and let his breath whisper past her ear, his hands firmly on her waist.'' No can do, Lils. The spell...and there are hundreds of people around us. This is the furthest I can stay...besides, you don't want me to go...''Lily expelled a frustrated breath.'' Yes, I do,'' she said forcefully through clenched teeth. She really did want him to go. His body, in such close proximity to hers, was very disconcerting. She was getting all hot and bothered.
'' Why? '' he asked softly, bending his head and letting his tongue swirl her pulsepoint, his hands still on her hips. She gasped, then, before she knew what she was doing, let her head fall back and, closing her eyes, leaned back into him. Before she knew it, he had turned her around, pulled her against him and his lips were on hers.Lily moaned against his mouth, wrapping her arms around his neck. His hands became entangled in her hair and his tongue slid along the seam of her lips slowly. She eagerly parted them, ignoring the screaming in her brain, just focusing on James...James. James. He knew how to kiss...how to make her pulse fly...how to drive her crazy with lust. She pressed herself against him and let her hands drop to his shoulders, along his back...Just as Lily decided she didn't care anymore, that she was going to go with her instincts and kiss this man forever, as he dragged his lips from hers and began whispering in her ear, sending delicious shudders up her body, how he cared for her, how much she mattered to him, someone knocked into them both, sending Lily flying against someone else.'' Oh, soooo sorry, like. I totally, like, didn't see you two there, like. Sorry, like. Let me, like, buy you two drinks, like,''Lily stomped over to the bar, glaring openly at Richelle and her fake smile with a grimace. She was glad, obviously, that it hadn't gone further. This spell James had over her was...annoying. She didn't like him. No. No way. But did Richelle have to be such a bitch? It wasn't half obvious that she had seen them and, jealous, deliberately charged into them. But it wasn't like she liked James. Nope. No way. He was just a good kisser. That was all. Nothing more.'' Let me like totally like buy you a drink, Lily,'' the smile didn't reach her eyes. Lily pasted a sickly smile on her face and nodded, avoiding James' gaze. She heard him swear softly under his breath as he stood awkwardly next to her.'' A shot of tequila, a Fat Frog and a vodka and orange, please,'' Lily heard Richelle say to the barman. She had heard about Fat Frogs – a shot of WKD, a shot of Vodka and a shot of the magical Firewhisky drink.Unknownst to both Lily and James, Richelle didn't pass the drinks over right away, instead turning away from them and, in the dark of the club, slipping a sachet of white powder into the Fat Frog, where it dissolved easily.When she turned back she handed James the tequila, gave herself the Vodka and orange and passed Lily the Fat Frog.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
'' James...I...I feel weird...'' Lily slurred, falling forward and grabbing James by the lapels of his shirt. He caught her in his arms and delicately brushed her hair back from her face.'' Hey, it's ok. You just had too much to drink, that's all. '' he said softly, a bit tipsy himself. She shook her head, then flung a hand over her mouth, feeling the sickness rise in her throat.'' No...dizzy...lights...sick...feel weird...not drink...'' she hiccuped, placing a hand over her burning eyes. The room was spinning. She began to laugh...it was funny. Funny. Then, grasping James by the arm, she smiled up at him dreamily.
'' Jamesie Wamesie...kiss me! ''He raised his eyebrows.
'' Sweetheart, you're feeling bad. That'll just make you feel worse. Come on. I'll take you back to Hogwarts,'' he said gently, cupping her face with his hands. She shook her head.'' No...dizzy...'' She flung a hand to her forehead, which was gleaming with sweat, then fainted into his arms.
James furrowed his brow. Drink didn't usually do this...but if a person's drink was spiked.... Quickly, he nudged out his wand and used a drug revealer spell on the last remaining drops of Lily's drink. It glowed red. Positive.
James, rage filling every pore in his body, unadulterous maddening rage imbuing his very soul, swung Lily into his arms fully and stormed over to Bailey who was in the corner with Sirius.'' Bails...'' his voice cracked. '' Bailey. Lily's been drugged,''
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Hey all! Well...that's chapter 20. I thought you all deserved a quick update since you were all so great waiting for chapter 19! Pat yourselves on the backs! I tried to portray how much James cares for Lily in this one through the small things he does for her...hope you liked and noticed!NOW! IMPORTANT NOTICE! I am aware some people find sex scenes gaudy, tasteless and crude. This is an r rated story, however, so others will be expecting a sex scene. I have taken this into consideration. What I want to know, is how many people would rather for no description of the scene...to imply it but not describe it? And how many want a description? It is still a bit away, don't get your hopes up! I've been thinking of putting a warning on that chapter, then those who want to read it can and those who don't want to can skip it? How's that? PLEASE LET ME KNOW!VERY IMPORTANT! It has been brought to my attention that there are grammatic errors in my first three chapters. Since I despise my first four chapters anyway, does anyone want to beta them? PLEASE! I want to rewrite them but I don't know what I did wrong...etc etc etc. Please HELP! Thanks!RESPONSES TO REVIEWS:Neptunestar: I know, yeah...she was very annoying to write...with all the ' likes ' but she's a necessary character...as you can see. THANKS 4 SO MUCH 4 REVIEW!
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