IMPORTANT: Hiya everyone right now that I have got your attention, this fanfiction is going to have a makeover, and when I mean make over I mean the summary is going to change and the title. This fanfiction is going to be a trilogy as it is taking so long for the main adventure to start. There for the title is going to change to This Moment:Shuyin's Rage. I wont make the changes until after the next chapter. Ok now on with the shoutouts.
akksgurl: I like Maechen too, although I'm a bit confuse about your responce to Bahamut, it sounds like that you think Bahamut has just come into the story when infact he has been in the story since the beginning, remember Bahamut talked to Lyla and Jiaan before his aeon came down to save them when they were children. And lastlyI like your theory to Yuna but it is wrong. Lets look at this logically.Lyla and Jian are in the past a thousand years in the past. There for Yuna hasn't even been born yet nor has she died. So what we saw was an image in the future like the title suggests. Think of it as a sphereinstead of the past it plays the future. Wow what a mouthful anyway I hoped that cleared it up for you.
CuteKitty: Yes Japanese names are hard to come up with, if you really are dumbstruck for names search on google and type in japanese names.
Yuna-Blueo'Hara: Thanx for the spelling corrections but I wont be changing the spelling until I have finished the story, my reason I keep spelling it wrong even though I know it's wrong, I type faster than I think lol. Oh yeah and the dead ones wont make an appearance until the second part of this trilogy.
Tanzanite falcon: Welcome to my fanfiction I'm glad that you are enjoying it. I'm truly sorry about the killing please don't hurt me lol. Anyway as I said to Yuna-Blueo'Hara they wont come back until the second part of the trilogy ok on with the story.
Disclaimer: I don't own the aeon Bahamut, but If I did I would burn Brother into a crisp.
While Jian was just outside the door when Lyla came out. She then suddenly fainted and Jian quickly caught her.
"Wow she sure looks sexy, hey wait why did I think that. Hmm it must be hormones. That's it, it has nothing to do with love it's just that we are close friends and I have raging hormones. Note to myself, I spend too much time around girls. Yevon, and I thought I had gone past my raging hormones" Thought Jian as he scooped Lyla up and headed out.
As soon as he got outside he took a left and headed down to the Monks Chambre. He then laid Lyla down on the bed in the circular room. Suddenly Xiang burst in.
"Out Jian" said Xiang.
"What?" questioned Jian.
"I get to look after Lyla, after all you get the whole Pilgrimage with her" said Xiang. Jian understood after all Lyla was going to die.
"Dam why am I letting Lyla do this" thought Jian as he headed out. Jian looked at his sword. "It needs to be sharpened" thought Jian as he sat down and took out a tool and began to sharpen the sword.
While inside the Monk's Chambre Xiang had put a glass of water on the bedside table when the priest that Xiang had been talking to earlier came in.
"How is she?" asked the priest.
"She's okay, is she meant to be this tired?" asked Xiang.
"Yes, but normally Summoners don't get their first Aeon so quickly" replied the priest. With that he headed out. Then Lyla slowly woke up, and Xiang rushed to her side as Lyla sat up. Lyla looked round and immediately recognized where she was.
"Where's Jian?" asked Lyla.
"Outside, I made him go out, he carried you here. It's funny, it would of looked like that you two had just got married, if you hadn't of fainted" giggled Xiang. Lyla blushed at the thought of Jian carrying her.
"Uh why am I blushing so much when Xiang cracks a joke about Jian and me. Do I… No don't be silly I mean we're friends right? Right." Thought Lyla. Lyla giggled with Xiang.
"Have you noticed how strong Jian is?" asked Xiang who had now stopped giggling.
"No why?" asked Lyla.
"Well he broke the lock on the door when he kicked it open" said Xiang who had pointed to the door. On the door the lock had come off and Xiang went over and picked up the lock and showed it Lyla, both girls giggled. "Imagine how many muscles must be under his shirt" said Xiang.
"Yeah…I mean no, Xiang!" said Lyla. Xiang giggled.
"Hey I don't care what you say, you are hooked" giggled Xiang.
"Xiang we are close friends that's all" protested Lyla. Xiang smiled and skipped out the room. Just then Jian came in.
"Hey you're awake" said Jian.
"Yep" said Lyla with a smile. "Thanks for catching me Jian" said Lyla.
"Hey no problem, that's what a Guardian is for right" said Jian. Suddenly there were shouts from outside and Jian and Lyla ran out of the Chambre to see what was going on. The Iron Giant that had been waiting had grown impatient and had walked up the stairs looking for Lyla. Without hesitation both Lyla and Jian had rushed forward to battle.
"Hey you really need to sort out your attitude" said Jian to the fiend. As he slashed the fiend with his sword all though it hardly did any damage. "What the" said Jian. Lyla took out her staff.
"Scan" shouted Lyla and suddenly a flood of information came to Lyla. "It has high defense and magic defense!" shouted Lyla. The Iron Giant swung its huge sword knocking off one of the glass balls off the temple and breaking it and aimed for Jian. "Jian watch out!" shouted Lyla, Jian dodged the Sword as it came crashing down.
"Oh yeah" said Jian as he felt so much power in him. He was ready to release his Overdrive. "Black Strike!" shouted Jian he put his sword in the ground and it sunk into the ground. A few moments later the sword rose up and it was flung in the air and Jian caught it. The sword was now all black and it was much stronger. It was also surrounded by a black aura. Jian rushed towards the Iron Giant, hacking away at the same spot until the black aura had entered the Iron Giant's body. The fiend groaned as the aura poisoned its body. It now had only a fifth of its hp left. Also Jian's sword was now back to normal. Lyla began to think she knew that any type of magic wouldn't do any harm. So that meant there was only one Aeon she could Summon.
"Bahamut I need you" prayed Lyla as she spread her arms out. She then twirled her staff around. Suddenly there was a roar from the sky. A symbol of Bevelle appeared in the in the sky as the Aeon Bahamut crashed through the symbol and headed to the ground at top speed. As he landed both Jian and Lyla covered their face from the dust. Bahamut was a bird like Aeon except for the fact that it had a yellow wheel on its back. which seems to help it fly. Bahamut was mostly dark blue with some red feathers. Bahamut was standing up with its arms crossed. "Bahamut, Impulse!" shouted Lyla. Bahamut gathered up its energy and formed to light blue orbs in its hands and through them at the Iron Giant. The fiend was caught in the explosions, and it fell and burst into Pryaflies. With that Lyla dismissed the Aeon. Jian put his sword away and stood by Lyla as lots of people started to clap and crowd round. Then a priest came up to her. "Was anything broken?" asked Lyla.
"Yes one, the glass ball, which tells us when Summoners are praying, other than that no one was hurt" answered the priest with that he attended to his duties. Lyla nodded. Suddenly a small boy who was about seven ran up to Lyla He was wearing again typical Kilika clothing.
"Lady Lyla can you show me your Aeon?" asked the boy excitedly.
"Yes at the village in the square" replied Lyla with that everyone headed back to the village.
It was now night time and everyone had gathered in the square. The square was just a space in the village where there were no shops only decking. Only Xiang wasn't there because Xiang had now just arrived.
"Excuse me coming through" said Xiang as she squeezed past people and crawled through their legs to get to the front.
"Hey watch where you are going" said one person.
"Hey stop pushing" said another person. Finally Xiang had found a place to watch. Children were shivering from the cold and at the front was Lyla who was facing the people in the village.
"Ifrit we need your heat" prayed Lyla as she spread her arms out. Then she twirled her staff. Some fire appeared on the end of the staff and it burned the ground as Lyla bent down. On the ground was the Kilika symbol. Suddenly it broke and out of the ground appeared Ifrit. Who had jumped and caught Lyla and put her on the ground as Ifrit landed. The Aeon Ifrit was a Fire beast. He is on all fours and on one hand he leans on his knuckles. On the same hand he has huge claws. And flames of fires are dotted around all over the body. He also had horns, a face of a wolf and he had a necklace around his neck. Lyla walked up to the Aeon and felt comforting heat from it. With that Ifrit laid down as children walked up to the Aeon as they started to warm up. Xiang walked up to Lyla.
"Now that is what I call showing off" joked Xiang. Lyla giggled. She was about to ask Xiang something when she cut her off. "And before you ask, yes Jian did see it he has just gone off somewhere with the guys, he said something about spending too much time with girls," said Xiang. Lyla smiled she knew what Xiang was going to ask next. "Hey can you sing for us as it is your last day here?" asked Xiang. Lyla smiled again. She had been singing since she was thirteen years old, at concerts and other special things. She was now practically famous through out all of Spira.
"Maybe, it depends on what I feel like" replied Lyla. "But what about you, are you excited about the tournament?" asked Lyla.
"Yeah, the Kilika Beasts are going to bring home the cup" replied Xiang.
"I'll be there" said Lyla.
"You will" said Xiang hopefully.
"Yes I wouldn't miss it for the world" replied Lyla. With that Xiang gave Lyla a hug.
While in another part of the village Jian had bumped into Wang. Wang was very tall he was a man who had trained with a sword all his life. He had long black hair, which was in a pony tail. He was wearing long green Yevonite clothes. He had blue eyes and a pointed nose. Wang had trained Jian on how to use a sword, and Wang was very respected by other people.
"Sir Wang" said Jian as he prayed to him.
"Hello Jian" said Wang. "I was hoping I would bump into you" said Wang.
"And why is that Sir?" asked Jian.
"I was hoping to test you on your skills, but after what I saw you do to that Iron Giant, I am sure that you will make a fine Guardian" said Wang.
"Thank you Sir" replied Jian, it was a change for Jian to hear Wang give out a compliment, after all he was a hard teacher to please. Jian turned to leave but then Wang spoke. "Jian, remember keep a control on your emotions, don't let them get in the way of the Pilgrimage" said Wang. Jian turned around to face him.
"Yes Sir" said Jian as he prayed. With that Wang walked away and Jian went back to the square. He knew what Wang meant, he meant that Jian is to not fall in love. He was glad that he had the talk he was beginning to feel emotions. He couldn't let that happen, so he stopped in his tracks and headed into the forest to fight fiends. This was the way he was trained to keep his feelings at bay. He remembered the first day he had his training and he saw Lyla.
It was ten years ago and Lyla and Jian look pretty much the same when they were five years old only that they were a bit taller. Jian was standing on the edge of the decking staring out to sea showing no emotion. When Lyla skipped over to him.
"Hey Jian wanna play Blitzball?" asked Lyla. Jian turned to face her.
"Sir Wang said I can't" replied Jian.
"Ok then we can play something else" said Lyla happily.
"Lyla I can't I'm training" said Jian.
"Jian are you all right?" asked Lyla she had noticed that Jian hadn't smiled once.
"Yes it's just that I'm training not to smile as much" replied Jian.
"Why?" asked Lyla.
"Because I need to learn how to control my emotions" replied Jian.
"Well that's going to change" replied Lyla and she went over to a hut.
A few minutes later she came out holding two chop sticks.
"Remember this" said Lyla and she stuffed the two chop sticks in her mouth. Lyla looked so silly that Jian had to smile. Lyla then took out the chop sticks. "There's the Jian I know" giggled Lyla happily. Then Lyla went back to play Blitzball with the other children.
"Stuff this, I can control my emotions just fine, they won't get in the way" thought Jian and with that he headed to the square.
"Oh a bit of love is going on people" says Habbo. Just then Rikku opens the door and comes skipping into the room. "Rikku what are you doing here?" asks Habbo.
"Well.. I heard something about love, so I decided that I forgive you as long that you promise that we do come back in this story" says Rikku.
"Rikku I've been saying that all along" says Habbo.
"Oh ok" says Rikku, she then starts to dance around the room.
"Right ok then, it looks like that I wont get any peace for a while then. And on another note a big well done to everyone who took part in Comic Relief in the UK" says Habbo. Rikku still dances around.
"I'm going to write the next chappie" says Rikku.
"Oh no you're not" says Habbo as she dives for the computer. "See ya people" says Habbo.
