"Hi people" says Habbo.

"Hiya everyone" says Rikku who was franticly waving at everyone

"Ok... So how do you all like the makeover, if you think that the summary could be improved, please tell me" says Habbo.

"Yeah because she really sucks at summaries" says Rikku. Habbo then hits Rikku on the head who falls unconscience.

That's better on with the shout outs. Oh and by the way I'm going to be updating twice a week from now on.

Yuna-Blueo'Hara: So what do you think about the makeover?

Cute-Kitty: Your review really made me smile, The updates are going to come more quickly now.

akksgurl: Did you notice that Lyla and Jian keep making excuses about their feelings? Oh and what a disaster that would be if Jian and Xiang got together they keep teasing eachother lol.

Ok people there is a song in this story, I have mentioned the artist and the name of the song, so you can go and download from a site somewhere. I urge you its a beautiful song it is true to ffx, and it made me cry, so go on download it!

Disclaimer: I don't own the song My Immortal by Evenescence.

While back at the village, everyone had asked Lyla to sing. But Lyla wanted to wait for Jian.

"Oh come on Lyla, Jian will hear you at Luca anyway. Hey this just gives me another excuse to make me think you love Jian you know" said Xiang. Lyla didn't want that so she agreed.

"Well ok" said Lyla. She dismissed Ifrit and began to sing with some teenagers all ready behind her with their instruments.

(This song is called My Immortal by Evanescence, the band version and is what inspired me for this story).

I'M SO TIRED OF BEING HERE

SUPPRESSED BY ALL MY CHILDISH FEARS

AND IF YOU HAVE TO LEAVE

I WISH THAT YOU WOULD JUST LEAVE

BECAUSE YOUR PRESENCE STILL LINGERS HERE

AND IT WON'T LEAVE ME ALONE

THESE WORDS WON'T SEEM TO HEAL

THIS PAIN IS JUST TOO REAL

THERE'S JUST TOO MUCH THAT TIME CANNOT ERASE

WHEN YOU CRIED I'D WIPE AWAY ALL OF YOUR TEARS

WHEN YOU'D SCREAM I'D FIGHT AWAY ALL YOUR FEARS

AND I'VE HELD YOUR HAND THROUGH ALL THESES YEARS

BUT YOU STILL HAVE ALL OF ME

YOU USED TO CAPTIVATE ME

BY YOUR RESONATING LIGHT

BUT NOW IM BOUND BY THE LIFE YOU LEFT BEHIND

YOUR FACE IT HAUNTS MY ONLY PLEASANT DREAMS

YOUR VOICE IT CHASED AWAY ALL THE SANITY IN ME

THESE WOUNDS WON'T SEEM TO HEAL

THIS PAIN IS JUST TOO REAL

THERE'S JUST TOO MUCH THAT TIME CANNOT ERASE

WHEN YOU CRIED I'D WIPE AWAY ALL OF YOUR TEARS

WHEN YOU'D SCREAM I'D FIGHT AWAY ALL YOUR FEARS

AND I'VE HELD YOUR HAND THROUGH ALL THESES YEARS

BUT YOU STILL HAVE ALL OF ME

I'VE TRIED SO HARD TO TELL MYSELF THAT YOU'RE GONE

AND THOUGH YOU'RE STILL WITH ME

I'VE BEEN ALONE ALL ALONG

WHEN YOU CRIED I'D WIPE AWAY ALL OF YOUR TEARS

WHEN YOU'D SCREAM I'D FIGHT AWAY ALL YOUR FEARS

AND I'VE HELD YOUR HAND THROUGH ALL THESE YEARS

BUT YOU STILL HAVE ALL OF ME

By the end of the song Lyla had tears in her eyes. She didn't know why she had sung this song. I mean she had wrote it when she was eight. But still she had sung it, and all the way through the song she was remembering her parents Shuyin and Lenne. The song for her had applied to them, their love for each other and her grief for them. Lyla looked around a lot of people were upset. The song had applied to them as well losing family members and friends because of Sin. Sin a cycle of death this was why Lyla had to stop Sin. Xiang came up to Lyla.

"Wow that was beautiful" said Xiang. She had also been crying. "I mean wow since when has a song made me cry" said Xiang happily. Just then Jian came up to both of them. "Dam Jian you didn't cry" said Xiang.

"Look around Xiang no other guys cried either" replied Jian. Lyla giggled. It was true as well the only people that did cry were the women and children.

"Well I guess it's time for bed" said Lyla.

"Hey wait I'm sleeping in your hut tonight" said Xiang. Lyla nodded.

"Night girls" said Jian as he walked off.

"Night" said Lyla as both girls walked off in the other direction.

In Lyla's bedroom the two girls were chatting.

"I'll sleep on the floor" said Lyla as she pulled out a sleeping bag and laid it on the floor next to the bed.

"Nah uh, I'll sleep on the floor and no arguments" said Xiang as she jumped into the sleeping bag. Lyla smiled and she got into the bed. Suddenly a stray Pryafly came into the room. "Hey what is that doing here?" asked Xiang as she pointed to the Pryafly.

"I don't know but it's another stray Pryafly" said Lyla.

"Huh?" said Xiang.

"I'll explain later, basically it can show the future" said Lyla. The Pryafly then hummed louder and then suddenly a orange sphere dropped to the ground and the Pryafly went. Lyla went over to it. "What is it?" asked Lyla.

"Oooo I know!" exclaimed Xiang as she skipped over. "It's a new design of a sphere" said Xiang.

"A sphere…" said Lyla as she thought.

"Let's turn it on" said Xiang.

"Maybe we shouldn't if it's from the future" said Lyla. But Xiang as always didn't listen and turned on the sphere.

The picture was clear and it was in the Farplane Glen and the sphere was put on the floor. Suddenly Lyla came into view, or was it Lyla, no it was Lenne and she looked upset. Then she spoke.

"My daughter if you get this, then you must be confused about Bahamut's appearance. He told me that you were confused. Your father his shadow it…." Lenne sighed and tried again. "You see what Bahamut said was true, who you saw was Lady Yuna, but not Lady Yunalesca. Lady Yuna is from the future a Summoner who truly defeated Sin. Why did you see her I do not know maybe it's the connection you both have. You both want Sin gone. Bahamut shouldn't of met you that day, I told him not to, but he misses you and Jian. Anyway you must go to Baaj, my child, my daughter, Lyla you have a choice. A new quest awaits you, but if you want to stay I won't mind. You are my daughter and I'm proud of you of what ever choice you make. You will be given details in the chambre of the Fayth. I just wish that your dad was here. This sphere will be sent with a stray Pryafly I have here, A Pryafly of my love to you Lyla" said Lenne with that she knelt down and theSphere turned off.

With that Lyla burst into tears. Xiang decided to go and get someone, after all she was no good at these sort of things.

A moment later Jian came in with Xiang followed closely behind. But then when Xiang saw Jian looking uncomfortable with the situation, Xiang knew that this was a mistake.

"Out Jian" said Xiang as she pushed Jian out the door. Jian fell down the stairs as the door slammed shut.

"Hey" said Jian, with that he walked away.

Inside Lyla was now giggling and both girls climbed back into bed. Xiang fell to sleep instantly. But Lyla was thinking.

"A new quest? Choice? Dad's shadow? Lady Yuna?" thought Lyla, there were so many questions. But they all came down to one thing Baaj temple. Lyla smiled about the day she had."Jian he's been great through all of this. I hope that he makes me happy through out my journey" thought Lyla. With that she fell asleep.

Admit it you are confused, he he cliffy, ok so Rikku is still unconscience. I'm sure she will wake up soon though. Ok see ya people.