So there were a few mistakes in my first chapter that I completely forgot about till after I had posted the damn thing. But now they are all sorted and everything is to rights. I've actually done a lil organising in this chapter but I'm not sure how its gonna turn out so here we go….
Chapter 2
Slowly, very slowly the world started to become to come back into focus. A finger could be seen twitching every now and then. A sure sign of life?
'mmmrph?' Exhausted and riddled with the agony of loss his eyes creaked open. Not that he could see anything. Everything was pitch black.
/Where the hell am i? Am I blind? Why can't I see anything/
The bed squeaked as he attempted to sit up. Suddenly there was crack of light from behind a door, he could hear pleasant humming which grew louder as a lady nudged open the door with her bum and walked backwards followed by a silver tray laidened with delicious smelling foods.
Once clear of the door she bought the tray around and nudged the light switch on with her nose. Throwing the small room into cheery light.
'Oh my… Your awake.' She beamed. 'I had hoped so. I bought you some food, you looked half starved, well, I suppose you still do, and if there isn't somat I hate its somat that half starved, mind, I don't like fat ones either, she says who is distinctly portly herself.' Her smile grew wider with each babbled word. 'Well look at me, babbling along while you starve right there, well I wont be having anyone dying on my watch mister, especially not of lack of food.
/…/
'Well?' She nudged. A few more seconds went by in perfect silence. One in expectation, the other frozen in fright and suspicion.
'Now, come now. Eat this instant. I am not against force feeding some one, even at your age.' The wide smile was replaced by a stern mother type look.
She stood there for a few more moments with her hands on her hips and just as she was about to man handle food down his throat, he suddenly skittered to the wall that the bed was leaning against.
'How do I know you haven't poisoned it.' He hissed.
'….Well errr, ummmm, why would I do that?' A worry crease formed over her brow.
'You could be one of those people' He hissed out but this time in pain.
'Oh, what's wrong? Can I do anything? Oh please eat some thing. You like your about to keel over at any second!' She pleaded.
'I shall not eat your food; it's liable to kill me.'
Oh don't be so silly. I wouldn't hurt a fly. Now please.' The word stressed. 'Eat something. 'I assure you I have not poisoned my food. I've never met you, or these people you speak of. I barely see anyone really. Keep much to myself, see. I breed horses, fine creatures too, if I do say so myself. But I couldn't very well leave you in that alley way now could i!
Truth and innocence shone through her eyes. Something he'd never experienced in himself, having to grow up almost immediately.
Tentatively he took a sandwich from the tray and nibbled at the corner, constantly watching her face for and anything suspicious. With nothing more than a smile and the fact that he suddenly didn't keel over from being poisoned he had the tray emptied in little over a few minutes.
The lady burst out laughing at his eagerness to finish the food; it was a pleasant melodious tune, much like her humming. After finishing the food which tasted as good if not better than it smelled he fell back onto the pillows, unable to move form being so stuffed.
'Well I thing introductions are in order' She beamed. 'I'm Hally.'
'errrr ummmmm' /Should I tell her my real name/ 'Draco' He hissed.
'Must you constantly hiss? It's a tad scary.'
Yet another his escaped followed closely by a moan and arching of his back. 'No.. it's just… pain' he panted, as the waves grew stronger.
'oh! Tell me, what's wrong? What can I do? A doctor?'
'N..No!' He howled.
Pausing for only a moment she suddenly blurted out. 'What creature are you!'
Stunned at her outburst he stilled, pain forgotten.
'ARGH!'
'Tell me! You silly welp!'
'An.. Anacot!' He stuttered.
Beaming like a Cheshire cat she bolted from the room, returning not long later with a vial of purple liquid. Then she practically jammed the thing down Draco's throat. Relief was instant. Draco had never felt anything so wonderful in his life!
'You silly welp why didn't you seek help?' She tuted in a motherly fashion.
'What… What the hell? He stared, amaxed.
Well dear, what do you expect from a potions master and witch?'
Stunned silence wrapped the room in a thick blanket
'B-but.. WITCH? Oh god… oh bloody hell……' Draco then collapsed in exhaustion, again.
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So yea, this isnt a very long chapter, but im at college and havent really got much time. Now the thingis no one has given me any response on this fic. So im not sure if its worth continuing. So let me know if its worth it, if ya;ll read or if ya think oits pretty much shit and wont be following it... :)
