Okay, so this is like my first fan fiction. I'd really appreciate your reviews, so like go ahead and tell me if it sucks, alright? I think it's pretty good, but it could be better.

A girl is sitting alone on a swing set. Children are playing around her, but none seem to want to come to close. One group of boys point and laugh at the girl, she appears to get angry, and the boys get scared and run off. The kids run in from recess.

The girl is now in a class room. Sadly, she is sitting in back all by herself. The teacher completely ignores her so she starts to draw. The drawing is a picture of her standing in the middle of the page, but heaping piles of dead bodies are surrounding her feet. The girl in the drawing is very sad.

The classroom fades into a gym. Boys are running around playing basketball, passing back and forth. The girl wishes she could play, but some things are just imposable. She sits in the stands and watches the game. The game is getting very intense and aggressive. All of a sudden a red-headed boy comes crashing down on top of the girl. The boy starts shaking and foaming at the mouth. The room falls silent. The red-headed boy falls to the ground and is no longer moving. The girl runs out crying.

After the girl has collected herself she goes back into the gym. Everyone gasps as she enters. A man and women, both with red hair, are standing over the boy, crying. The girl doesn't say a word, but gently bends over and touches the red-head boy's face. He awakes screaming and pointing at the girl. She silently exits the gymnasium.

The girl runs home and starts packing. She is running away. She is sick of hurting every one. After she shoves cloths, a tooth brush, and some food in backpack, she leaves. She takes one last look at her foster parent's house and turns toward the unknown, unsure of where to go next.

Xavier then pulls off the cerebral helmet and sighs. There is now a little girl running around who is potentially dangerous. He realizes what he must do. She must be rescued by the X-men.

Okay, it's not much but it's a start. I would much appreciate any comments you have for my writing or ideas for how my stories going to end. I would also like to know if you would be interested in reading the other chapters.