Do I Know You 9
Disclaimer- I own NADA! And technically that is ok because then I don't have to watch my characters go through the torture I put them under! Muhahahaha!
Kiki- GET YOUR BUTT BACK HERE NOW! I miss you! GRR YOU!
Note- so… I told you I would find a way around Hermione's rape! But I still think that y'all are still pissed at me! But please don't gang up on me with pitchforks and shovels! I'm still hiding under the rock with my guitar and computer and SEE ME UPDATE!
So… list of random everything possible… READ!
Chaper 9- The Graves
I woke up and I found myself lying in the bed at Nathan's house.
Was all that a dream?
The bedroom door opened and Nathan walked in.
"Oh, thank God, you are awake," he said. "Sarah and I came back to get you but something had happen and some blonde guy was holding you. He told me everything that had happen."
It wasn't a dream. Damn!
"Jeeze, Hermione, I'm so sorry for what has happened," he rubbed his hand up and down my cheek.
I felt like breaking down in tears but I think I have used all my tears earlier.
"Do you want anything?" Nathan asked me.
I shook my head. "No."
"Do you want to get out of here and watch some movies with Sarah and I?"
I shook my head.
"If you want anything just let me know, ok?"
I nodded and he left.
I heard Sarah right away when Nathan left the room.
"Is she ok? How is she? Is she alive?"
"Sarah, breathe!" Nathan's voice came.
"He, who," Sarah imitated breathing, "done."
A day pasted… I made up my mind… I'm going home.
I walked out of the room and saw Sarah and Nathan watching football.
"I think I'm going home," I said.
Sarah and Nathan turned to face me.
"She lives!" Sarah said happily.
"How you feeling?" Nathan asked.
Maybe they didn't hear me.
"I'm going home," I repeated.
"What?" they both said.
"I just need to go back home," I answered.
"What? Why?" Sarah said as her face fell. "Why can't you stay here?"
"Staying here is just making me run away from everything that has happened."
Sarah looked confused. Obviously (since I only knew her for like two days) I didn't tell her what happened. Nathan should inform her.
I hadn't realized that he had been standing in front of me.
"When you plan on leaving?" he said.
"The sooner the better."
Silence filled the room.
"You guys have been great," I said.
"So are you all ready to go then?" Nathan said.
I nodded.
"So you are just gonna go then" Sarah said walking to us. "Just like that?"
"Sarah gets attached easily," Nathan said with a bit if a smile.
"So I noticed," I grinned back.
"You can't go!" Sarah's face fell
"I'll write," I said.
"You better!" she smiled back.
"What kind of person do you think I am if I didn't?"
Sarah laughed.
"I'm so gonna miss you!" she hugged me.
"Me too," I hugged her back.
I looked at Nathan. I gave him a hug too.
"Thank you… for everything," I said. When I pulled away, I gave him a kiss.
"Hey Mi, if you ever need anyone to talk to or if you have to get away from everything, you are always welcomed here," Nathan smiled.
"Thanks."
I grabbed my bags and just as I was about to Disapparate, Sarah hugged me again.
"One for the road," she smiled, "and write!"
"I will." I waved to them, "bye."
And I was gone.
I Apparated right in front of my parents house… my –birth- parents. I ran up the steps and tried the door.
"Damn!" I cried. It's locked… oh, duh! Am I a witch or not?
"Alohomora," I said and the door opened. "Mum! Dad!" I called. I walked in the living room and saw an old couple sitting in there.
"Kasey, it's a crazed robber who robs people when they are still in the house!" the man said.
"Hush up, Kane!" the lady said.
"Mr. and Mrs. Larson?" I said. They were the neighbors last time I knew.
"AHHH! She knows my name!" Mr. Larson cried.
"Ignore him dear," Mrs. Larson said to me. "How did you get in here?"
"Uh… the door was open," I lied.
"Kane, I thought I told you to lock the door!" she said to her husband.
"Since when do you think?" he responded.
Mr. and Mrs. Larson are a strange couple. They are both quite funny.
"Do you know where Jane and Harold Granger are?" I asked them.
"Jane and Harold?" Mrs. Larson repeated me. "Granger did you say?"
I nodded.
"Are you Her-mee-ni-own-mee by any chance?"
"Hermione," I corrected her, "yes."
"That's right, Her-me-own-nee. You didn't hear about it?"
"Hear about what?"
"Ah, that tragic accident," Mr. Larson spoke.
"What happened?"
"They had been killed about a year ago," Mrs. Larson said.
"That wasn't them, you old coot!" Mr. Larson said. "Her-mi-o-nee-nee…"
"Hermione," I said once again.
"Yes, Hermy-own… your parents were coming home one night when the car slid off the road. I'm sorry to say that they didn't make it."
This is SO not my life.
"What are you doing, you crazy women?" Mr. Larson said to Mrs. Larson who was digging through papers.
"I'm looking for that news paper," she answered. "I know I saved it. This noggin remembers!"
"Her noggin knows nothing," Mr. Larson whispered to me.
"AH, here it is," Mrs. Larson handed me an old newspaper. I held my tears in this time as I read about the car accident.
"Their grave markers are here," Mrs. Larson gave me a piece of paper.
"Thank you," I said.
(A/N- Kane and Kasey are some other friends of mine! Kasey is my age and Kane (her bf) is a year older… and I can just see them acting like this! Haha!)
I found the gravestones. They were right next to each other. I sat down facing the stones.
"Mum, Dad," I spoke, "I'm sorry." I felt stupid talking to blocks of rock but I didn't care. "I really hope you can hear me when I say I love you."
"Of course they can hear you," someone spoke from behind me. I turned and (obviously) Draco was standing behind me with his hands in his pockets. He walked over to and kneeled beside me. "I don't blame you if you're mad at me."
"I'm not mad," I said.
He looked confused.
"We called truce didn't we?" I grinned at him.
"Why did you come back?"
"Why do you keep stalking me?"
"Just keeping an eye out for you. Why did you come back?" he repeated.
"I don't wanna run anymore."
We stayed in silence for a couple of minutes. I placed some daisies on the headstone and stood up.
"Where are you going now?" Draco said following me.
"I have no idea," I answered him while staring at the fading sun over the hills. "Wanna come?"
"What?"
"Wherever I go, you want to come with me?"
"After all that I did, you are letting me go with you?"
"We've been through a lot, but in the end you were there for me. Besides it wasn't your fault," I emphasized 'it'.
"If you want me to," he said.
Draco wrapped an arm around me. So we were standing in the middle of the graveyard side by side with nothing said between us.
Tomorrow was gonna be different for sure.
YAY! I'M DONE! Whose happy? I'M HAPPY hey, Sarah (L), lets do the happy dance! –happy dance- Hey Brynn, Kiki and Sarah (S), lets do the happy bee dance! –does happey bee dance- and I finished in BEFORE September 2nd! MORE HAPPY DANCES!
Ok I want to thank EVERYONE who reviewed! I LOVE YOU ALL! Or I LEE OO OO ALL!
So… I still need the script and I have a song fic that I'm getting up soon! Oh and I still have to finish 'He Told Me To Kill You'.
I have something extra to add to the reviews that I got that were completely rude and unnecessary so here is what I have to say!
I can NOT believe those reviews I got! HOLY FUCKING SHIT! You people need to get a LIFE!
Did I not say if you don't like the story, DON'T READ IT? I did say that! I say that in EVERY story! I even have it in my profile! I mean good fricking Lord! Since you bitches are anonymous I'll answer you at the end of this chapter. LUCKY YOU! Not only will I direct you personally but I will put your review on here too! YAY!
li-this story is so rubbish. (I repeat) RUBBISH! I cried it was so rubbish. No lie! And get this! Your ideas are rubbish! So we don't need your new ideas! haha! Your authors note at the end, might have been a bit more LOVELY, if you'd put the E in LOVELY, instead of spelling in LOVLY! Is there no end to your gayness. I will have to put serious thought into whether I continue reading this monstrosity of a fanfiction!
My note to you- I was quite taken aback at this. If my story was SO rubbish, then why did you read it? If you didn't like it you should have stopped when I said 'Chapter One'. You may think my ideas are 'rubbish' (lets just keep using that word) then why do you read my stories? I mean, THAT is rubbish. And maybe you are the one of four bitches that doesn't like my stories and ideas… NEWS FLASH, maybe other people do! Don't put yourself in the center of the universe thinking that I will listen to you cuz I for SURE will NOT! With the 'lovely' spelling, I CAN'T SPELL TO SAVE MY LIFE! My freshmen friend can spell longer words than I can! THAT IS JUST ME! EXCUSE ME FOR LIVING! Besides my computer doesn't correct words that are in all caps… that is the computers fault and my computer is stupid! And I fixed it! Happy Miss. Prissy? By the way may I correct YOU when you say, "is there no end to your gayness." Notice that you put a '.' at the end when really it is suppose to be a '?'! I just thought I would point that out to you. Oh and I'm not gay. And before you start hurting yourself with that thinking… DON'T READ THE REST OF IT cuz I'm sure you will think it is RUBBISH just like this review I got! Thank you!
sUsHi- Draco is a sissy ponce. Hermione is a whiny tosser. This is shite.
My note to you- Ok my characters are out of character and they are in all my stories. I realize that I didn't put that note in here. Sorry. You can think whatever you want about Draco and Hermione because they are characters that I didn't create so I really don't care. And your spelling on "shite" is wrong. It is "shit" last time I checked. And if it is shit, then don't read it!
(Really what is it with you people?)
Ella-louise- If its an in joke don't bother telling us. That's the whole point of an in joke
My note to you- Ok first off I don't know what an 'in' joke is but the INSIDE joke is something that I wasn't going to share with you! I didn't WANT to share it with you or anyone else! If you were referring to the 'wand' joke, I'm sorry about that but if you were referring to the 'I'm Really Leaving' joke then don't worry about it because I have no business sharing it with you! Thank you very much!
Freelove- This is lamer than a donkey that has been shot in the knee caps. (i.e. it sucks)
1) do you even own a dictionary?
2) Why would she suddenly call 'brr-in' mum (sorry, mom) after like 1 year?
3) Why bother calling it 'hot potions' because its not a wizard shop, duh
4) If you wanted to write a story to satisfy your sodding obsession for Tom Felton/draco why did you bother putting it on the internet? Couldn't you have put it in your diary and save us all the bother of reading a craply structured, craply written story?
5) Don't link it to the Harry Potter name if its just a story about you...oh sorry, didn't see a Freya section in the menu. Put it on a personal website. And by the way, if nobody ever left bad reviews, how would anything ever improve? If you want to write fanfiction you need to be able to take criticism.
My note to you- Wow… never have I heard more of a rude review! How exactly would you know being shot in the kneecaps hurts? Even though you were referring to a donkey (just say ass) how would you know a donkey's pain?
1) I do own a dictionary but like I said above, my spelling sucks! And once again, I'm sorry!
2) Brynn is only called 'Brr-in' by ONE person in this world and that is my cousin thank you very much! It is an inside joke. And I keep forgetting that they say 'mum' instead of 'mom' once again I am sorry. But I am American so you will just have to chill out! And she calls Brynn Mom/Mum because I say she does! This is my story and it goes the way I want it to! And just to make you feel special, I went through the story and fixed it just for you!
3) I know it isn't a wizard shop smart one! It was my cousin's idea and I was just like 'cool I'm gonna use that' cuz I wanted to and I said I could because it is my story.
4) I can satisfy my 'sodding' (as you say it) about my obsession as much as I want! No I don't think I will put it in a diary since I sort of don't keep one. Writing fanfiction is just a hobby that I find fun. If you don't like my 'craply' structured story then let me give you a REALLY big hint saying DON'T FUCKING READ IT BITCH! You can save YOURSELF in not reading the story since you were the one that started reading it in the first place! That isn't my choice!
5) I had fun writing this story! I found it just fun to write! If Hermione lost her memory and wanted to be called Freya I can have that happen cuz IT IS MY STORY! Notice who the author is… that is right, ME! I control the characters in MY story! Of course there isn't a section called Freya, DUH! That would be cool tho! And I don't want to put it on a personal site because I said I don't want to! If I want to post my story on fanfiction I can and I will! After all this is a fanFICTION site. Fiction meaning NOT REAL! I get that the 'criticism' can 'help' me 'improve' my story. Yes I understand that. But I only want help when I ask for it. Did you see me asking for help on this story when it is complete? Didn't think so! And this isn't criticism, this is slamming!
Wow… I mean… holy fucking wow! I fricking LAUGHED so hard when I read all these reviews! I mean pul-EASE! You can do SO much better!
If you hate my stories don't read them and PLEASE don't review them! Can it be anymore obvious? Wow –shakes head- that was pathetic!
I get that these are your opinions and I'm so glad –eye roll- that you shared them with me! Thank you SO much! (Notice that I'm writing with LOTS of sarcasm!) But for the millionth time (I'm going to get fricking tired saying this OVER and OVER) DON'T READ MY STORIES IF YOU THINK THEY ARE A WASTE OF TIME! If you find out that you don't like it, stop reading and get on with your life! Make it easier for you! -big happy smile-
Once again, don't review/read if you don't like it!
You can only guess at how happy I was when I got those!
So… I'm out!
Thanks again!
Freya/dracosbaby07
