Yayers!
Thankyou for the advice and stuff again SMR. (Can I call you that for short?) Do you have an account? Have you written anything? I'd love to read some of your stuff. I might learn something!
I really like it how you tell me what you like and don't like. I suppose you're right about the Akito thing. Should I go back and fix it up or not?
I was only gonna update when I had 10 reviews, but I'll just update now. 'Cause I have such a devoted fan! If you're reading this, please do review before you go. It shouldn't be too hard.
Oh! Poem shall be…. I don't know! How about…….. . . . Oh I can't think! I have to do one though… I have the ones ready for chapter 6 and 7.. Just not 5. I'll do Akito. I promised myself I wouldn't, cause its hard, but I'll try. I hope its not out of character.
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Blowing Free
By: TokyoSuburbia
Chapter Five: Shirushi
What's the point of living
If I'm living all alone?
What's the point of life
When my heart is cold as stone?
What's the point of love
If all it brings is pain?
What's the point of death
If you can never feel the rain?
What's the point in friendship
If your friends desert you?
What's the point in caring
If you have no one to turn to?
Why do we live
When our walls just cave in
And it feels as if we sinned?
We've spread ourselves too thin.
Why do we die
If it's just another path of life
Another failed way of strife?
What's the point of death and life?
HIRO
"Yaay!" Momiji yelled as the bus drove up along the road to the station.
"Ha! I win!" Shigure laughed and Ayame glared. They had had a staring contest for most of the time, Ayame looked away to see if the bus was really coming, and so Shigure won. "You owe me now! You have to cook when we get back!"
"Well, I'm not too bad at that you know Gure-san!" They both laughed and we all picked up our stuff to move off.
"Kisa!" I looked over at the Tiger "Do you want me to carry your bag for you? Just onto the bus…" I blushed a little as she smiled.
"Yes, that would be nice of you Hiro." She picked up her luggage and carried it over to me, where I took it.
"You can carry my stuff, too!" That damn rabbit threw his stuff over my shoulder and skipped on the bus.
"Rabbit! Damn you!"
"Don't worry about that." Yuki looked at me. "Here, I'll help you." He grabbed Momiji's bag and walked on, followed by everyone else. I grumbled and followed them.
"Yay! I can't wait! Oh, this is so fun! What do you think Kyou? Does this remind you of before?" Momiji was sitting in Kyou's lap, Kyou seemed confused of how he got there.
"NO! Get away from me!" He pushed him off, I quickly put Kisa and my own stuff away, and covered my ears
"Waaaaaahhh! Kyou pushed me! Waaah!" He cried. Right there on the floor.
"Give it a rest will you!" Kyou glared, scowled and turned sharply to the window, where I'm sure he was going to stay. Momiji kept crying.
"Momiji, come sit up here with me. We can play a game or something" Shigure smiled and held out his hand to Momiji.
He sniffed. "Kay." He plopped onto the seat just as the bus started moving. The trip was pretty boring, Tohru tried to make conversation a few times, but everyone was soon just staring out the window. We were almost there, I looked around at where everyone was seated and smiled because I could tell how things were going to be. Kagura was stuck to Kyou's arm, Yuki was sitting with Tohru, Shigure and Ayame, Kisa and I, Haru and Momiji behind Tohru and Yuki, and Akito on his own.
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YUKI
The bus crawled to a stop and some of us stood up to get our bags. Hiro, Momiji Kagura and Kisa got off first, And started running around. Tohru seemed to be eager to get off the bus, too. But she couldn't show it so as not to be rude. Shigure and Ayame giggled and ran off, leaving us their stuff.
"We should just be able to run off too! With those two as the only adults on this bus we should be allowed o go crazy, too!" Kyou stated.
"Don't be such a fool." I shook my head.
"Lets just leave their stuff here! They can suffer!" He got louder.
"No." I picked up Shigure, Ayame and my own bags and got off."
"Yuki! Let me help you!" Tohru grabbed Ayame's bag off me and got her own. Kyou muttered and followed, Akito came out last.
We were greeted by Ritsu's mom, who asked us to leave our bags, and wait outside for a moment while she took our bags to our rooms, the younger Souma's played games while most of us sat and talked.
"Please, all of you, over here now." Ritsu's mom was at the door waiting for us. Everyone crowded in.
"Most of you have been here before, but I will still go around and show each of you which room you are in. Lets get started." She turned. We followed.
"First on the right here, she pointed to the first door "Is Kisa, Kagura and Tohru's room. Your bags are inside."
"Thank you!" Tohru bowed a little, and followed Kisa and Kagura. We kept going, past the door to the bathroom, and to the girls side of the baths.
"And here is Hiro and Momiji-chan's room." She opened the door, and the two boys went inside, and immediately began arguing about who would sleep where. Right next door is where we stopped next. "Akito, Shigure, and Ayame, this is where you'll be staying." The two idiots ran in and called bunks. Akito followed slowly.
"And lastly, you two! I am… SO SORRY! I FORGOT HOW YOU TWO FIGHT! I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN TO PUT YOU IN DIFFERENT ROOMS! FORGIVE MEEEEEEEEEE!"
"Okay, okay! Its fine!" I heard myself say, same time as the cat.
"Well, if you're sure…. I'll… Be going now…" she bowed, twitched and left.
"She is scary." Kyou shook his head and glared over his shoulder at me. We walked into our room, he grabbed his bag and threw it onto the top bunk, before jumping up and unpacking things. I went to the cupboard and did the same. "It's pretty late, we should be having dinner soon." He picked at his teeth.
"I suppose you're right…" I looked out the window at the dusk.
"Well, duh I'm right. Damn rat."
"Don't start with me." I walked out. I wasn't going to look forward to sharing with that stupid cat. Sure enough, Ritsu was going from door to door telling everyone dinner was ready. When he got to Kagura and the others rooms, I saw Tohru run out, and almost hug him.
"Oh! Ritsu! I haven't seen you for ages! How are you!"
"I'm fine. Thank you for asking." He bowed.
"Will you be joining us?" She smiled hopefully.
"Ye-yes I will be." He smiled, too. Then continued his job. Tohru was then dragged inside by Kagura, who was yelling something about make up.
"Yuki! I ha-haven't seen you in a while. Its dinner time."
"Yeah, I heard."
"Oh, I'm sorry, I shouldn't have told you if you already knew, I'm so annoying. I'll just go and tell Kyou."
"Don't bother!" Came the cats voice. "I heard before!"
"Oh! Okay…" He bowed and turned. And I went to wash up.
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KAGURA
"No. Definitely blue. It suits you better. I don't know why Yuki got you those ribbons. They don't suit you at all! Blue like your eyes! That's better!" I smiled at my handy work. "He'll love you now!"
"But, I'm not really aiming for-"
"You said you liked him!" I grinned, she paused, but decided not to say anything.
"Could you do my make up, too Kagura?" Kisa looked up at me.
"Yellow is way more your color. Yellow! Yes! Okay, I'm almost done with Tohru." I tied the sash around her waist and stood back. I dressed her in a white dress of mine, which stuck to her, around her figure, and I tied a blue silk sash around her waist, to give it a kimono look. She also had blue eye shadow and pink lip gloss and blue high heels.
I was wearing a green dress with green flames around the bottom, it was trimmed with darker green and had long cuffs. Plus long green boots with pink stripes at the top, with a pink base, and a pink flower in my hair, green eye shadow and the same gloss.
I finished Kisa's outfit just as Shigure hurried us up. She was wearing a pale yellow dress with a darker yellow collar and sash, with pink sleeves, and pink flames at the bottom of her dress, she also had pink cuffs around her hands, with a pink heart joining the ends of her school-girl-like collar around her neck.
"There! Beautiful!" I added her gloss and yellow eye shadow and she slid on her sandals and we hurried out. The boys were all dressed casually except for Ayame, but dressy was casual for him. Everyone stared. And then they commented.
"Miss Honda, you look beautiful!" Yuki and Ritsu said, at the same time, it wasn't like either of them to say something like that. Tohru blushed. I was happy that my fashion sense pleased.
"Thank you…" She smiled.
"You look great, too Kisa…" Hiro was blushing furiously, he stood and took her hand, and led her to her seat, next to him. Kisa giggled and smiled. I looked around quickly, and glanced at Kyou. He just sat there staring out the window.
"Kyou! Look at me! Don't you think I'm beautiful!" I smiled, and kept back tears.
"Whatever, who cares? Just sit down."
"Awww, you're so mean!" I sat down and punched him in the arm.
"Well I think you all look beautiful!" Shigure laughed. "So pretty! High school giiirls!" Everyone stared at him…
"Well, I think so, too." Aya grinned, and then a few chefs came out with our feast.
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KYOU
We ate in silence, and then retreated to our rooms. I wasn't really paying too much attention to what was going on, but I ended up in the hot springs, along with Ritsu, Yuki, Haru, Momiji and Hiro.
"Ah, its pretty relaxing here!" Momiji sighed and sank into the water. I could hear the girls laughing on the other side.
Haru splashed me. I splashed him back, then a war started. Even Yuki was laughing by the end of it, it wasn't like me to have fun anymore, but I think Haru was aiming for it. After, although, I accidentally jumped back right into Yuki, who was leaning against the edge, he gasped as he hit the side, hard.
Haru turned black. And everyone stopped. Yuki was breathing hard, as his asthma took over him. Haru advanced towards me, then my head was under the water, and I couldn't think.
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Cliff hanger! Will Kyou be okay? HELL YES! But how will he survive?
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