I will be taking down this story to put more time and energy into it. I think I will rewrite the entire first chapter as I remain unhappy with it. I'm a better writer than I was when I wrote it; more importantly, even chapter 2 is not my best work. Not to mention the story being dead for six years means practically no one is reading it. I will be working on this story in the future, but only begin uploading chapters when it's ready to be viewed. In the meantime. Please read the Our Love Will Change The World. and sorry if anyone is disappointed. This story's just been one big mess on my part.