Praise and Corrections

Alright you guys, thanks for reading my story. This is my first one although I have one that I wrote by myself, it's called The 8 of Floyd. So yeah, read that one too, it's funny.

Dream Phantom: Thanks. I took one of your quizzes.

Pheonixtear19: Thanks a load. You're great support. I read your story about Lupin and James finding out about him. It was great. You're right about what you said about other people's stories, they're too mellow. You put some great emotion into it. Not many people can do that. I don't pretend to be an expert, so if you heard something else from someone else, think of the one who has more experience and go with that. But that's my opinion.

Alright in the second chapter, I believe I put in, "there were two bathrooms, one upstairs, and one upstairs." That was wrong. It was supposed to be, "one upstairs, and one downstairs." So yeah. that's a correction that needs to be made.

Another one in the second chapter, when Harry sings his song, there should be "" around it. So that's another one.

These are mostly little things, but in chapter 2 again, when Hermione tells Harry about the tickets she says, "They're tickets Harry. Tickets to the Quidditch World Cup." There should be a comma between tickets and Harry.

So that's pretty much it.

I've got kind of a contest. Whoever can tell me who sang the songs (excluding the first one as it's one of mine) I'll tell them in form of a review when my next chapter is up. So yeah.

Have fun.