Title: "JiGoku no Kuro no Honoo (Black Fire of Hell) - Chap. 2: Voyage"
Author: J.J.
Warning: It's an AU and it's BASED ON THE MANGA... it's unbetaed, it contains some OOC, some use of Japanese words (the Dictionary is at the bottom), a bit of sappiness, some spoilers...
Notes: This work is based on the manga even if it makes perfect sense even if you haven't read it. After all this story is placed before the series start so it shouldn't be a problem.
About the characters... Tsuzuki and Touda are a bit different from the original because this fic is placed back in their past. I'm supposing they and their relationship changed with time.
Warning over notes: This fic is filled with notes. You will find them at the bottom. Each time you see a number between brackets it means there's a note connected to the word/sentence that preceded it. Many of them explain references to other series, to YnM manga only or YnM anime only facts for who didn't get to read the manga or see the anime, explain apparently illogical things or warn you there's an explanation for illogical facts but that you'll get it later. However I suggest you to read the notes AFTER you finished the fic unless the word/sentence connected to the note is really troublesome for you to understand. Anyway the fic should be still understandable without the notes. Notes are merely extra explanations for who wants to know more or search for spoilers.
Disclaimer:
"Yami no Matsuei" belong to Matsushita Yoko. I'm merely using her characters because I love them... especially Touda, Tsuzuki and Hisoka... -
Ehy, Do I own something here? Oh yes, I own the plot and a sensible heart which would surely break if you give me harsh reviews... so please be honest but nice ok?
Thanks: To Candy-chan who encouraged me to write this! Thank you a lot!
Summary: 1936. GenSoKai. A city had been burned. Completely. Touda is suspected, Tsuzuki is trying to fix things while Kotaro and Kojiro are there to complicate the mess.
"Bokutachi wa shiawase ni naru tame
Kono tabiji wo yuku
Dare mo mina ienu kizu wo tsureta
Tabibito nan darou
Hora egao ga totemo niau

Nando michi ni mayotta no darou
Sono tabi ni atatakai te wo
Sashinobete kureta no mo
Anata deshita

Bokutachi wa kono nagai tabiji no
Hate ni nani wo omou
Dare mo mina ai motome samayou
Tabibito nan darou
Tomo ni yukou akiru hodo ni."
("We, for the sake of finding happiness
Set off on this voyage
Everyone is a traveller who carries along with them
Wounds that can be healed isn't it?
Look, the smile suits you very well

How many times have I lost my way?
Every single time, a warm hand
Would be extended to me
And that hand was always yours

What will we think,
At the end of this long journey?
We are all roaming, wandering travellers
Searching for love, isn't it?
Let's walk together, until we're tired of it all.")
(Ayumi Hamasaki - "Voyage")

Touda woke up slowly. His eyes were open but his brain was still in Morpheous' arms. He became dimly aware he wasn't in Tenku-kyuu but in the open and that he felt warm and oddly... safe. There was light, more than he would have liked and birds were singing their annoying songs. He was leaning against someone and he wasn't exactly comfortable but... it still wasn't a bad feeling.

Wait a moment here... he was leaning against someone?

Abruptly he stood straight, ready to fight whoever this someone was, blinked twice then his eyes focused on Tsuzuki who smiled at him, completely unfazed by the fact that, while straightening himself up, Touda had also took care to push him roughly away from himself.

"Good morning! How are you?" the Shinigami asked cheerfully.

"Tsuzuki," Touda acknowledged, then finally remembered the events of the previous day.

"Exactly!" Tsuzuki replied happily. "It always takes you quite a bit to get fully awake!"(1)

"It's not funny," the Shikigami pointed out annoyed as Tsuzuki stood as well. "I could have ripped your throat apart without even realizing it was you."

"No, you wouldn't have," Tsuzuki replied dismissively. Touda rolled his eyes.

"How do you know?"

"I know," Tsuzuki answered with one of his smiles. "Besides it's not like it would have hurt me. I'm already dead, remember?"(2)

"That's beyond the point, Tsuzuki." He didn't want to think he could have hurt Tsuzuki. He abhorred the mere through. He had told the Shinigami to not get too close to him when he slept, he had already gave him a nasty burn once, when Tsuzuki had tried waking him up from a nightmare and didn't want to do it again.

"Ne Touda, don't worry about it really. It didn't happen and if it did it would have been my fault," Tsuzuki reassured him. "You warned me, after all!" The last sentence was said in the same tone a child would have used to say he knew he was going to search for troubles but found funnier to do so.

"You're a hopeless idiot."

"So mean, Touda..." it was the expected complain.

"Which time is it?" All of sudden he felt... lost. The sun was... in the wrong position... He couldn't have slept for so long now, could he? Tsuzuki watched his wrist watch.

"Exactly 8:15 in the morning!" he announced. Touda blinked.

"I didn't sleep a whole day!" he exclaimed when the concept sunk in.

"You didn't. It was afternoon when I found you."

"Yes but..."

"No buts. You were tired and you deserved some rest."

"You're weird," Touda stated. Tsuzuki chuckled.

"And you worry too much about meaningless details. Do you want to go back to Tenku-kyuu? I assure you SoRyu wouldn't even try to arrest you now!"

Of course not. In the little chat Tsuzuki had with SoRyu before coming to search for Touda, Tsuzuki had told him that, since Touda was his own responsibility, if he wanted to arrest Touda he would have to arrest him first and SoRyu wouldn't even consider that option...

Touda's eyes narrowed. He sensed something up.

"Tsuzuki. What are you planning to do?"

"Investigating, of course. Someone burned the place after all. I can't let him wander around, can I?"

"It's SoRyu's responsibility to baby-sit GenSoKai not yours," Touda reasoned.(3)

"But I've friends here and I won't let them in danger," 'or unfairly suspected...' but Tsuzuki preferred to avoid mentioning that. Not that Touda didn't understand it anyway.

"They still think it was me, don't they? I don't blame them. It's okay. I don't mind." It was Tsuzuki's opinion the one that mattered to him. The others could believe whatever they wanted. Tsuzuki's eyes narrowed.

"I do mind. It's not fair and it's stupid," Tsuzuki's tone was dangerously low as he spoke. "Anyway you don't have to worry. They'll let you quiet if you get back," he added, slipping back again in his cheerful mode.

"I should go back while you go there to investigate. Alone."

"Well, you don't have to go back to Tenku-kyuu if it makes you uncomfortable. Just... go where you prefer," Tsuzuki said uncomfortably. He hadn't meant to make it sound like an order.

"So... can I come with you?" Tsuzuki blinked.

"With me? You don't have to worry, I can handle..."

"Tsuzuki. You'll get lost in five seconds flat.(4) Besides we're quite far from there. Even if by some miracle you should find the way, it'll take you ages. I'll carry you... or you prefer to not have me around?" It was reasonable after all. He was suspected of being the cause of all the mess and had never been looked upon favourably. Tsuzuki could prefer to not be associate with him.

"I'd love if you'll come Touda," Tsuzuki replied in the most honest tone Touda had ever heard him use. "You sure you want to?"

"Idiot. I live to help you out." Technically he lived to serve Tsuzuki but Tsuzuki wouldn't like to hear it so he could put it in a different way. Tsuzuki smiled again.

"Thank you. Ne, Touda, do you think we can stop somewhere to eat something? I'm starving and... AHHHHHHHH!"

"What's wrong now?" he asked in mild curiosity. Tsuzuki's shoulders slumped.

"I've just remembered I'm out of money. We'll never get to eat again and we'll die of starvation and..." Touda cut Tsuzuki's theatrical depressing rampage.

"Tsuzuki. I have money." The second after he said it he found himself being hugged.(5)

"You're a real lifesaver, Touda!" the man exclaimed. Touda looked down at Tsuzuki and wondered if the man realized he was the real lifesaver, the one who had faced troubles to help him. Probably not and wouldn't, not even if Touda explained it to him.

"Yeah, sure, let's go. From how long aren't you eating anyway to be in such danger of starvation?" Tsuzuki was perpetually hungry. Preferably of sweet things. However this time Tsuzuki looked embarrassed by his question.

"Oh well... not that long..." Bad sign really.

"Tsuzuki. How long?" Came to think Tsuzuki should have skipped dinner since he was there in the middle of nowhere playing pillow for him. And exactly when had he started to search for him?

"Kind of like..." the rest was a confused mumbling that Touda picked up anyway.

"If you're not eating something from the day past yesterday we'll better hurry searching some food for you before you'll think I'm eatable."

"I wouldn't eat you no matter what!" Tsuzuki exclaimed heartedly. Touda didn't know if to smile or roll his eyes.

"Idiot. I know," he said simply.


Touda brought something to eat for Tsuzuki and himself from a bakery in the first village on their way. He hadn't noticed before but he was starving too. People had glared at him or merely looked scared. He was ready to bet the only reason they hadn't escaped or tried to attack him was the fact that Tsuzuki was so damn cheerful and friendly that they should have believed such a nice person would never wander around with a well known criminal and therefore they should have thought they had merely mistook him for the one who caused so much destruction in the past war. To be honest Touda either couldn't understand how Tsuzuki could cope with him.

Tsuzuki wasn't perfect, of course, but still... he could have had a way better company. That didn't mean he disliked being with Tsuzuki. He was glad to be with him. It wasn't just because he was loyal to him... Tsuzuki, in his own way, fascinated him as well.

"Your face is half covered in sugar powder," he pointed out as he watched the man savouring the sweet. Tsuzuki turned to look at him, then absently passed a finger on his own cheek and stuck it in his mouth when he discovered it was covered in sugar.(6)

"Yup, you're right," the man agreed, after licking the finger clean like a child would have done. "But this sweet is SO good!"

"Idiot."

"Ne Touda, have some more," Tsuzuki then said offering him one. "It wouldn't be really fair if I eat them all when you only had a few."

"I don't like sweet things that much," he assured Tsuzuki. In truth he hadn't plan to eat any but he knew Tsuzuki would insist that he had some and, after all he had been starving.

"Silliness. Sugar gives energy and you're hungry. Here, eat," he said as he practically placed the sweet in his hands. "And remember, there's more."

"You know, don't you, this will mean less for you?" he remembered him, finally taking a bite of the offered food.

"I won't mind. I like to have company when I'm eating, it's sad to eat alone," Tsuzuki assured him. Touda wondered if he was right. Unless Tsuzuki was in GenSoKai he preferred to eat alone. Of course when Tsuzuki was around matters were different.

"Ne Touda, how many Shikigami with a power like yours are in GenSoKai?"

"None." Touda didn't really want to talk about it, it could turn Tsuzuki against him but he couldn't refuse to answer to Tsuzuki.

"None? Not even another one?" Tsuzuki insisted sounding surprised.

"None." There was a pause of silence.

"Are you sure?"

"Very sure."

"Then... you're special, aren't you?" Tsuzuki pointed out, stroking his cheek gently in an affectionate gesture. It felt nice. Touda turned to look at him, surprised. It wasn't what he had expected Tsuzuki to say.

"You... you're getting sugar powder on me," he pointed out. Tsuzuki laughed.

"It looks nice on you. It makes you even sweeter." Touda snorted.

"I'm not sweet."

"Sure you are. You just hides it so well not even you noticed it."

"Idiot."

"Meanie." Another pause of silence. "I guess... this means it won't be easy." Tsuzuki sounded thoughtful. "Oh well, better this way than if we had to check tons of Shikigami," Tsuzuki added trying to brighten the general mood. It didn't work, really. If they had to check for tons of Shikigami it would mean people couldn't point at him and say he did it for sure. "Do you think someone could have made it looks like it was black fire when it wasn't really?"

"An illusion? Which would be the point of going through all this effort?"

"Don't be caught? Getting you in trouble? Something else I can't think of?"

"There are better way to accomplish all this without going through the trouble to put up such a complicate illusion," Touda stated.

"Okay, okay... Mn... I think the Sempai said Akuma can have your same power..."

"No Akuma can enter in GenSoKai. The Gates exist for a reason, you know," Touda reminded him. "And before you ask, no, there's no way to break them without putting in alarm both GenSoKai and Meifu. GenSoKai is in Meifu's network. An Akuma here would mean problems for both places."(7)

"Just great. Suggestions?"

"None," Touda replied. Tsuzuki turned to look at him, his expression serious and attentive.

"You know, if I didn't know you I would say you're tempted to give up," he said casually. There wasn't blame or delusion or reproach in his tone and somehow it hit him even more. Tsuzuki trusted him. He didn't trust himself. "Don't worry," Tsuzuki added cheerfully before he managed to say something. "Somehow we'll fix this. It's a big mess but probably it looks like that because we aren't looking at it from the right side. Don't let yourself be affected by what people say. Remember? You told me so!"(8) Tsuzuki concluded grinning. Touda sighed.

"I'm not giving up, Tsuzuki. I just don't know what to do. SoRyu's right. I'm the best choice."

"Maybe you're the best choice but you aren't the right one," Tsuzuki commented stubbornly, resting a hand on Touda's arm. "So don't you ever dare to think I'll give up because I won't no matter if I've to turn upside down GenSoKai, Meifu and ChiJou!"

"I won't. Ever," the Shikigami assured him looking straight at him. He won't ever doubt Tsuzuki again. No matter what.

"Good," Tsuzuki replied, grinning. "Then now the best we can do is to go there and investigate. The Sempai said that 'places talk to the ones who know how to listen and tell them their story'. Maybe if we're lucky we'll get the hang of this mess before lunch!" Touda wondered if he should point out Tsuzuki was being too optimist. He decided against it. He was sure much of that optimism was for his own benefit and he didn't want to waste Tsuzuki's attempt to cheer him up.

"You'll do better to wash your face then," he simply said. "You've sugar powder all over it. Over your hands also," he added trying to rub away the sticky substance Tsuzuki had left on his arm as well. Tsuzuki just chuckled. He glared. Tsuzuki kept chuckling and everything felt just right to him as if really Tsuzuki could have chances to drag him out of that mess.


"I do think this place isn't very talkative," Touda said crossing his arms on his chest and staring at the burned ground where once was a large city. Tsuzuki stared at the sight as well. So much destruction... and likely so many deaths... The mere idea made him nauseous. Even if the flames were long dead the ground was still smoking and it was still quite warm. Absently Tsuzuki freed himself of his jacket and loosened his tie.

"You're pale," Touda observed, instinctively moving closer to Tsuzuki.

"I'm fine," Tsuzuki said with a forced smile that didn't persuade Touda at all before returning to look at the devastation in front of himself. He had to do something; he had to find the responsible of that destruction. Not just for Touda only but also for all those Shiki who died in that horrible way. "I'm fine," Tsuzuki repeated resting a hand on Touda's arm.

"If you say so," the Shikigami replied resting his hand on Tsuzuki's. The man's hand was sweaty. That place should be too hot to be comfortable for him and from the look in Tsuzuki's eyes he wasn't taking well the mere thinking of what had happened there. Thanks Kami there were only ashes around them and no Shikigami's remain. He was sure Tsuzuki won't have handled that well the sight of burned corpses. Touda wondered how Tsuzuki, who knew what he had done in the past war, could still be... "We should leave, Tsuzuki. There's nothing here." Or maybe there was but it wasn't worth Tsuzuki's pain.

"I'm fine, Touda. Don't worry," Tsuzuki repeated again tonelessly, fighting back his distress. In that place there could be a track. He was a rookie among the Shinigami and in his life he surely didn't do investigations but he couldn't give up just for that. He knew that among his few talents there was a good instinct and a sharp sense of observation. He had to use them. It was just that in that space filled only with ashes and smoking remains...

"Touda? What's that?" he asked pointing to a point where the smooth surface of ashes seemed... stepped over. Touda frowned then shrugged.

"Someone was here before us," the Shikigami said simply. "Let's go now." Tsuzuki ignored his words and ran there. Touda groaned and followed him. The place was even hotter there. It didn't bother Touda much, he was a Fire Shiki after all, but it wasn't good for Tsuzuki.

"As I said they're mere footsteps. Nothing very helpful," Touda said again. He was slightly annoyed Tsuzuki had dismissed his words.

"Footsteps," Tsuzuki repeated. "They're only in this place. They didn't walk here, just landed here."

"So? We also did the same."

"Who do you think they were? SoRyu's soldiers sent to check the situation?" Touda studied the footsteps, frowning.

"No. Not SoRyu's soldiers. Those look like the footprints left by Waraji." He inhaled. It wasn't easy to make out scents in that place, the burning smell covering almost everything but he was a Fire Jyazoku after all. "Torizoku's smell. And from the way the footprints are disposed I'll say they used wings to fly till here. My guess is they were Tengu."(9)

"Tengu?" Tsuzuki repeated.

"Wind Shiki. They live on Kurama Yama," Touda explained him. "Quite annoying birds."

"The ones under SouJouBou-sama? SoRyu took me to meet him once!" Tsuzuki exclaimed. Touda nodded. "I didn't know we were close to Kurama Yama," Tsuzuki remarked.

"We aren't," Touda stated. In fact they were quite far from it. Completely out of the Tengu's territory. Weird.

"What were they doing here? I know they sent reports to SoRyu, could it be..."

"No. No, we aren't on their territory, SoRyu wouldn't have sent them. They probably flied over here and stopped to watch or rest or... something."

Tsuzuki considered.

"Byakko won't like to stop here. This place lacks of fresh air. He said Wind Shiki..."

"... Like fresh air, I know.(10) Yeah, it's weird they stopped here but they couldn't have caused this mess. They're Wind Shiki after all," Touda reasoned.

"Yeah. What about tracking them down anyway?" Tsuzuki suggested.

"The Tengu? Tsuzuki, they're just annoying and stupid Torizoku!" Touda complained. Tsuzuki felt tempted to laugh.

"Come on, they won't be that bad!" Touda snorted.

"You don't know them well."

"Ne Touda, is there a race of Shikigami you'll like?" Touda glared.

"Is there a race of Shikigami worth liking?"(11)

"Meanie! They could be the key to the mystery!"

"I've no doubt the Tengu might have caused a mess but I don't believe they can reach those extend," Touda pointed out. It was insulting to assume some Tengu could cause as much damage as him.

"Only one way to find out. We'll track them down and ask!" Touda groaned. He didn't like the idea of talking to some Tengu but if Tsuzuki believed it could be of some use...

"Let's track down the Tengu then..." he agreed with a groan.

"Come on Touda! It won't be so bad to talk with them!"

"Not so bad. Worst." Tsuzuki groaned. Jyazoku and Torizoku really didn't bond well together.(12)

"Well, if you don't feel like talking to them you can wait for me somewhere..."

"Unless you'll order me not to I'll follow you even to the end of this world even if that means to deal with some stupid Tengu," Touda assured Tsuzuki. Tsuzuki smiled than summoned one of his little Tsukaima birds. He knew it was improbable that the Tengu had the key to the mystery but still... it was a chance worth taking.

To be continued...

JJ's Notes:

1. In a Matsushita-san's pic Touda is portrayed after he had just woken up. It gave me the impression he's that sort of person who gets up when he has to but it's so sleepy he's not aware of what's going on around and manages to move only because what he is doing are the same gestures he does each morning and therefore they don't require much thinking.

2. Shinigami have strong healing powers. In Vol. 8 Muraki rip Tsuzuki's throat apart with a knife but Tsuzuki was perfectly healed short after.

3. SoRyu has been left in charge of GenSoKai by the KouTei KouRyu.

4. It's a well known fact that Tsuzuki has no sense of direction.

5. I'm supposing they use money in GenSoKai also.

6. No idea of which sort of sweets they sell in GenSoKai. The ones Touda buy were covered in sugar powder.

7. For who doesn't know... 'The GenSouKai exists in Meifu's computer network. Like a mirage, it always moves. In the past, the GenSoKai used to be right next to the human world. But as human society advanced and science progressed, the inhabitants of GenSoKai lost their place to exist... and so, they rapidly lost contact with the outside--- coming to live in the digital realm. The GenSoKai and the outer world are separated by a giant door to make sure humans don't cross over. The four gates to the GenSoKai are: Genbu, SoRyu, Suzaku, Byakko... Each gate has a keeper, people who have the power to open the gates. Only the keepers know the proper coordinates to connect with the gate.' YnM Vol. 9

8. Oh, okay, I'm quoting my previous fic 'Something To Look Forward To'.

9. In Japanese Myth Tengu usually wears Geta. However in YnM they wears Waraji...

10. Well, this isn't officially stated in the manga but Byakko seems to favour places with fresh air so...

11. The manga didn't say that Touda dislikes all the other Shikigami however he seems to like only Tsuzuki and ignore the others so...

12. In Japanese Mythology is said that Phoenix and Snakes are enemies... For extension I supposed all the Bird races were enemies with the Snakes...

JJ's Extra Notes:
For whoever read 'Something To Look Forward To'. Yes, in that fic I said Touda wasn't allowed to get out of Tenku-kyuu alone. This fic is placed seven years after. I suppose in the meantime Tsuzuki managed to persuade the others that to let Touda out of Tenku-kyuu unsupervised wouldn't mean the doom of GenSoKai.
I do think if there's money in GenSoKai Touda had to have some. Maybe they returned him the possession he previously had or he get some money just from being a ShinSho or because he works with GenSoKai computer. Tsuzuki won't leave him in misery and I don't think SoRyu would do it either merely because to leave him in that state might push him to commit crimes to survive.
Oh yes, I don't think Fire Shikigami are that affected by warm/hot temperatures. After all they deal with fire, especially Touda who deals with the hottest fire existent. I also assume that, since Shikigami are part animal they've better senses than us.
If you're wondering why Tsuzuki isn't that familiar with Tengu... Tengu apparently control only the Suzaku's gate. Kannuki Wakaba is Meifu's keeper of the Suzaku's gate. I assume in 1936 Wakaba hadn't yet joined JuOhCho therefore Tsuzuki to travel to GenSoKai had to go to another keeper, one who guards another gate.
Oh yes, I assume Wind Shiki are troublesome. It's just the impression I have watching Byakko, Kotaro and Kojiro.

Dictionary:
-sama: "Lord" or "Lady"
Akuma: Demon
ChiJou: Land of the Living
Enma: "Demon of Darkness". Ruler of the Land of Dead
Enma-Cho: "Office Enma". In the 5th district of JuOhCho. It's ruled by Enma himself and controls only Tokyo's territory. It hosts the Shokan-ka
Fuda: Short for 'Ujikofuda' ("Charm for Shrine Visitors"). Rectangular paper "charm" used to cast some spells
GenSoKai: "Illusory world". It's where Shikigami reside and it's a mirror copy of ChiJou located in JuOhCho network
Geta: Japanese clogs
JiGoku no Kuro no Honoo: Black Fire of Hell
JuOhCho: "Ten Kings Office". Meifu's bureaucratic organization ruled by Enma. It's in charge of judging the deceased in Japan
Jyazoku: Snake race
Kami: God
KouTei KouRyu: "Golden Emperor Golden Dragon". The highest authority in GenSoKai
Meifu: Land of the Dead
Sempai: "Older Workmate" or "Older Classmate"
Shiki: Short for 'Shikigami'
Shikigami: "Ceremonial God". Summoned creatures with two forms (usually one is animal looking while the other is human looking) that live in GenSoKai
Shinigami: "God of Death", "Death God". Nickname for the Shokan-ka workers
ShinSho: Divine Commander
Shokan-Ka: "Summoning Division". Division in Enma-Cho that deals with summoning the dead to appear at court. It enters in action only when the souls of the dead don't go spontaneously to Meifu
Tengu: "Heavenly dog". A race of winged Shikigami who're in charge of the Suzaku gate
Tenku-kyuu: "Sky Palace". Tenku's title
Torizoku: Bird race
Tsukaima: "Familiar Magic" or "Messenger Magic" or "Useable Magic". A summoned creature created with a Fuda specifically for a determinate purpose (pursuing targets, carrying messages, attacking enemies, spying)
Waraji: Sandals in straw
Yama: Mount


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To ThisbeCeyx: I'm glad you like the plot. I would love to make a Touda/Tsuzuki pairing but I fear at that time their relationship wasn't... ready for it... so only shonen-ai implications... Maybe in future I'll make a fic who'll pair them up.
As for the list of unfammiliar terms I'm happy to hear someone finds it useful. When I started reading fics I've lot of problems understanding the Japanese terms used in it so I decided that I would put a translation list for each of them in each fic. Who's used to read fics might find it unnecessary but I hope it's useful for who just started to read them. Besides some terms are used so little they can be unfamiliar to who read fics abitually as well.

Silverfox1: Well, there's a reason if I love writing fics involving Touda & Tsuzuki. Those two have a lot in common! As for the other Shiki... I was planning to tell it in this chap but in the end I cut that scene. You can however read it at my journal. As for Touda throwing Byakko in the water... well Tsuzuki told him to not hurt him and a bath wouldn't hurt, would it? Touda thought not... Byakko found it funny.

Candy-chan: Thank you for reviewing two times! I apprecciated it a lot! You know I think Touda is adorable! And yes, I know how he wants to 'burn' Tsuzuki... I wish he'll manage to do it soon...

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