Silivren Mîr

Chapter 3

By: SilverRose82

New Elven Words:

Barad: (S) Tower

Lith: (S) Ash

Callisto Star : I really didn't mean to kill the whole village, Callisto, blame it on... umm.... my crappy lemonade that didn't have nearly enough sugar in it as it should have had. Ooh trying to confuse me, thought I said who that person was, guess not, but there are some clues. ::Shrugs.:: I'll put him up plus five just cause you say so ^_~, because you're totally right on the complete uniqueness of that pairing. Side I haven't written a....... I really have to learn to shush on these matters.

minnieshon : Totally confused me on that.......

Sunshine Fia : I really wasn't going to make the village get destroyed, but once again I was writing that chapter around midnight.... Her relationship, well he's an elf, she's an elf and that is all I shall say on that matter.

sapphireskies :  Well the overdoneness of a Legolas/Serena pair would be the jump and skip we've just met and now we're in love.

Hikari_angel : well, yes if it were Serena that would happen, but Lómiel has had a horrid life which has made her very untrusting of others. And I have to agree with the Legolas/Serena pairing, there are a lot, but then again a lot of people like them.

Chaos Insues : Aerin is a sword. Just stuck that up there incase it got brought up which it didn't. My fault for not saying that well enough.

Blood chi tama Rayne : you know, I'm not going to seep and say who she is until the end of this story. But everything you've said is insulting to me, seeing as I had another reader say the same fucking thing to me just because I wasn't writing a Heero/Serena story. Just because it's a certain character you're not going to read it. Hmm, you know what I guess it's better that way if you don't then. I go with what the readers want, yes I have the character who is Lómiel already picked out. And who ever she goes with is not of my choosing. I say look past the characters and like the work for what it is.

aurelia : Yes there are many Leggy romances out there and there are only a few that I personally like. Ooh don't have to worry about the spell errors anymore, aside from me proofreading and missing them or something I also have MSWord Spell checker now. So that should cut down on the number of misspells.

Silverpaws the silver Nukachu : Yes, I believe that there were some elves by the Shire in Fellowship but I've still not buckled down and read every chapter of The Lord of the Rings, I've read only the chapters I needed to get scope for story lines and such. No freak accidents, those are over used and tiresome

JaminJellyBean Eternal Moonlight

hiyayaka

koldy

Jenn

Jess

evelyn

Sydney Parker

Lacrea Moonlight

Renè

Sara

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Voting Poll :

Legolas : 15

Eomer : 10

A.N. It is being voted on, but I will warn you that even if there is a long run winner, like Legolas right now, they're still may not be a pairing, it all depends on whether or not my writing mood stays the same throughout….. if that makes no sense what so ever… Blame in on the fact that it is 1 A.M right now.

Ooh, update I have seem my friend and well nothing really going to change her, she's still the same as before. ::cries:: And that's all I'm going to say on that matter, nothing has helped her until she hits rock bottom I guess.

Rhelin is now six instead of the nine I had her as in the last chapter.

Enter the mayhem.

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            Lómiel gazed out around her as the people of Edoras began to swarm around the city gates, standing on either side of her were Saddyn, Rercyn, Rhelin, and Camma. Amarth stood behind his rider as the small band watched the people of Edoras greet one another but steer clear of those beside the black horse. Rhelin turned when she saw the shadow of another appear behind her, looking up at the other blonde elf she smiled at him. Legolas smiled softly at the little girl before his mount, Arod, made his presents know to the remaining three children, the small chestnut nickered loudly as Lómiel turned to glare at the elf beside her.

            "We leave as soon as Théoden King and Aragorn leave the hall." He told her as he swung himself onto Arod's back, the chestnut snorted at the sudden weight. Looking over at him, her sapphire eyes narrowing as she watched Saddyn and Rercyn help Rhelin and Camma onto the boys respective horses. Saddyn's horse, Barad, was a lively palomino stallion and Rercyn's stallion, Lith, a sturdy palomino paint was the polar opposite of the lively Barad and playful Amarth.

            Legolas watched in silent amusement as the dark elf swung herself into her horse's saddle before reining him in to gaze at the gathered crowd. Her eyes studying every face, young and old, all worried about what this trip to Helm's Deep would cause them. Spotting Gimli and Éowyn standing together by another chestnut horse, speaking of different things caused the hardened elf to wonder. Her heart had always been closed off to others since she was old enough to know of the world's fear and hatred towards her and her race. Not knowing how to react to such feelings and emotions she had kept to herself, living in a village and with man when her heart begged for the forest, begged for the glorious trees she had once climbed as a child before her people had been banished.

            As the remaining hoof beats of Théoden and Aragorn's horses made their way to the head of the group of people, did Lómiel shake from her memories. Turning Amarth in a quick circle she urge the ebony stallion to ride forward and between her brothers and sisters. Shaking her head she raised her hood before turning to gaze once more at her brothers and sisters, glaring at Legolas she nudged Amarth forward as the large company began their trek towards Helm's Deep.

            "If war comes to Helm's Deep, will you fight sister?" Rercyn asked as he gazed at the silent she-elf riding beside him, she was still his sister but he was beginning to feel that after this war he would never see her again and that worried him. She was all that he and his brother and sisters had left in world, turning his gaze onto the male elf that rode beside Lómiel, would he or another be the cause for her to leave them?

            "No and neither shall you or Saddyn, you lie when you say you are fine, they may believe thy lie but I do not." Lómiel's steel gaze on her two younger brothers caused both of them to smile. Rercyn's fears were quenched at his sister-elf's protective nature. Rhelin, sitting before Rercyn giggled as she watched her sister-elf turn to glare at Legolas, she was young and would not understand the feelings of abhorrence until she was much older.

            No words were passed between the two elves as their silence contest continued on, their horses following the crowd around them as their riders were of no way able to lead them. Legolas never could understand the heated words that his father had spoken of when he spoke of the Moriquendi, he had been educated at a young age that there were no longer any Moriquendi left on Middle Earth, all that had were either orcs or had been killed in a massacre towards the beginning of the second age. None had lived and most elves were unaffected by the massacre, having no longer the worry of lore that dark elves were attentive to.

            "You question much." Lómiel spoke softly as she gazed at Legolas, her eyes no longer dagger like and wishing for his death. She could feel his confusion nearly as well as she could feel the random emotions that came off the creatures of man. Her eyes wondered as she halted Amarth in his stride, she could see nothing for leagues and hear nothing for nearly the same but she could feel something, evil approached them slowly and steadily, she knew, she could hear the whispered promises of the darkness that came close, a madness to those of the dark elven race.

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I'm really thinking of moving this to the LotR section just because I may never say who Lómiel represents because in reality she is two parts of a whole. But whatever I'm probably not going to, the LotR section is so fast paced you get lost there, most stories are only up on the just in page for an hour on some days. I don't promise speedy updating, its not coming to me.

UPDATE: I won't be updating this story anymore or any of my LotR/SM stories for that matter unless justice comes to me. I spent a good deal of time working on these stories because I like them and I also spent a good deal of time writing this because I believed you, my readers, deserved an update from me. But I will no longer be updating because I feel my efforts are being wasted.

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